走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cải thiện rõ ràng và mạch lạc khi trả lời: nói câu chủ đề trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và đầy những tiếng “uh/um”. Nên tổ chức ý theo cấu trúc: trả lời ngắn gọn (có/không + tần suất), sau đó nêu lý do cụ thể (2-3 chi tiết). Luyện phát âm một vài từ dễ gây nhầm (ví dụ: ‘prefer’, ‘public transport’, ‘park’, ‘atmosphere’).

範例: Yes, I walk a lot, especially for short distances. I prefer walking to taking public transport because it helps me get fresh air and relax. For example, I often walk in the park in the evening to enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and stay healthy.

建議: Trả lời cần chính xác về thì và ngữ pháp: dùng thì quá khứ đơn cho thói quen trong quá khứ. Tránh câu rời rạc và thiếu cấu trúc; dùng câu chủ đề rồi nêu chi tiết cụ thể (đi đâu, với ai, tần suất). Sửa lỗi từ vựng (ví dụ: 'went out', 'played football', 'every weekend', 'nearby park').

範例: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. My parents usually took me and my friends to a nearby park, where we played football every weekend.

建議: Tránh tiếng ngập ngừng và lặp từ; tổ chức ý rõ ràng: nêu vài lý do cụ thể (không khí trong lành, cơ hội tập thể dục, giao tiếp xã hội, thư giãn). Dùng liên từ như 'because', 'for example', 'also' để liên kết ý. Chú ý đến ngữ pháp số nhiều/động từ (e.g. 'it makes them happy').

範例: People like walking in parks because the air is fresh and the environment is peaceful. For example, parks offer space for exercise and group activities, and they are a good place to meet friends and relax after a busy day.

建議: Cải thiện phát âm và dùng từ chính xác (ví dụ: 'coastline', 'sea breeze', 'seaside', 'watch the sunset'). Tránh lặp và ngắt quãng; dùng cấu trúc điều kiện đúng và miêu tả cụ thể những hoạt động bạn sẽ làm. Sử dụng cụm động từ và danh từ đúng (e.g. 'watch the sunset', 'take photos of the scenery').

範例: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the coastline near my hometown. The sea breeze is very refreshing and the views are beautiful. I would walk slowly, watch the sunset, and take photos of the scenery to relax after a busy week.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp vào câu hỏi về 'gần đây đi đâu' chứ không chỉ nói về bận rộn. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề nêu địa điểm gần đây, sau đó giải thích lý do nếu cần. Tránh lặp và tiếng ngập ngừng; thực hành trả lời ngắn gọn (1-2 câu) với chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, ở đâu, với ai).

範例: I haven't had time to go for a walk recently because of my busy schedule. Usually when I get a free evening, I walk around a nearby park, but lately I've been focusing on work to try to get promoted.

× I like what I prefer working uh, over taking a public, taking public transport for short distance uh uh, I prefer working in the park in the evening, uh, to get some get some fresh air and we are uh.

✓ I prefer walking rather than taking public transport for short distances. I prefer walking in the park in the evening to get some fresh air.

The student used 'working' incorrectly where the present participle 'walking' is required to express the action of walking. Also 'taking a public' is incorrect: use 'taking public transport'. Use plural 'distances' for general statement. Keep verb forms consistent: 'prefer walking' and 'rather than taking'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer + -ing' for preferences and ensure the correct -ing verb (walking) and correct noun phrase ('public transport').

× It, it helped me stay healthy and give it. Yeah.

✓ It helps me stay healthy and gives me energy.

The student mixed tenses and used 'give it' which is ungrammatical. The present tense 'helps' matches the ongoing habit. Use correct object 'gives me energy' or similar. Suggestion: Use simple present for habits and provide a clear object after 'give'.

× When I was a child I often went far, was outside with my friends and my parents are easily worked to a nearby park where I play football with my friends on small every weekend.

✓ When I was a child I often went out with my friends and my parents to a nearby park where I played football with my friends every weekend.

Multiple errors: 'went far, was outside' is incorrect — use 'went out'. 'my parents are easily worked' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'my parents took me'. Use past tense 'played' for repeated past actions. Remove 'on small'. Suggestion: Use simple past for habitual past actions and fix verb choice ('took me' or 'went with').

× People in there can uh, enjoy the atmosphere and uh, play together.

✓ People there can enjoy the atmosphere and play together.

Redundant preposition 'in' before 'there' is incorrect in this context. Use 'there' alone. Suggestion: Use 'there' without 'in' when pointing to a place in general.

× Uh, easy to answer the question, but to be honest, speak or uh, is par with uh, uh, fresh air and uh, great moment.

✓ It's easy to answer the question: parks offer fresh air and pleasant moments.

Missing subject 'it' and incorrect 'is par with'. Use 'parks' (plural) and the definite/indefinite articles correctly. Suggestion: Start with 'It's easy to answer' and name the noun 'parks' and appropriate nouns 'fresh air' and 'pleasant moments'.

× Umm. Uh, play, uh, exercise, uh, do exercise, do exercise and uh, uh, make a conversation with other people.

✓ They can play, exercise, and have conversations with other people.

Mixing bare verbs and 'do exercise' is awkward; use parallel structure with base verbs or '-ing' forms consistently. 'Make a conversation' is unnatural; use 'have conversations'. Suggestion: Use parallel verbs and natural collocations.

× Yeah, uh, it's make, uh, them happy.

✓ Yeah, it makes them happy.

Subject 'it' requires third-person singular verb 'makes'. The student used base form 'make'. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement: add '-s' for he/she/it in present simple.

× If I had the chance, uh, I would take a long walk along the costlier my hometown, uh, we score on the sheer breeze is very refreshing and the view is beautiful.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the coastline of my hometown, where the sea breeze is very refreshing and the view is beautiful.

Many misused words: 'costlier' should be 'coastline', 'we score on the sheer breeze' should be 'where the sea breeze'. Use preposition 'along the coastline of'. Suggestion: Use correct nouns and prepositions for geographic features and use relative clause 'where' to describe location.

× Working by the seer helps me relax after a busy week uh, and sometimes I stop to watch the sunsets or takes photos.

✓ Walking by the sea helps me relax after a busy week, and sometimes I stop to watch the sunset or take photos.

'Working by the seer' is incorrect; use 'walking by the sea'. 'Sunsets' can be 'the sunset' and verb agreement: 'take' (plural subject 'I' requires base form). 'Takes' is wrong. Suggestion: Use correct noun/spelling and simple present for habitual actions with correct verb forms.

× Uh, uh, I have a busy schedule. Uh, so umm. I have no free time. I have no free time to, uh, for work.

✓ I have a busy schedule, so I have no free time. I dedicate most of my time to work.

Repetition and awkward phrasing 'no free time to, uh, for work'. Better express purpose: 'dedicate time to work'. Use present simple for current situation. Suggestion: Combine sentences and use clear verb 'dedicate' with correct preposition 'to'.

× I often, uh, I, uh, dedicate time to my work and advance, uh, advance professionally. I want to get promoted.

✓ I often dedicate time to my work and try to advance professionally. I want to get promoted.

Original has repetition and awkward structure; 'advance professionally' is fine but pair with 'try to' or 'work to' for intent. Tense 'want' is present and appropriate. Suggestion: Use clear verbs like 'try to advance' and avoid repetition.