走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答直接且相关，但语言有些重复和小语法错误。可减少冗余、用更自然的表达并加上连接词或具体细节来丰富答案，例如说明步行带来的好处或感受。建议把两句合并并修正时间表达。

範例: Yes, I walk almost every day. It takes me about ten minutes to walk from the MRT station to my workplace, which I enjoy because it gives me a short chance to relax before starting work.

建議: 内容混乱且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。需要按时间线组织句子，使用正确的时态（过去式），并提供具体细节说明常去的地方和做的活动。避免不必要的重复。

範例: Yes, when I was a child I often went to the nearby park in the evenings. I used to play games with other children there, and on weekends my parents sometimes took me to museums.

建議: 回答包含合理原因但表达不够自然，有语法错误（例如时态、主谓一致）和词汇选择问题。建议使用连接词结构更清晰地列出原因，并用更恰当的词汇描述社交和环境方面的好处。

範例: I think people enjoy walking in parks for two main reasons. First, parks are social spaces where people can meet and have short conversations. Second, parks are full of trees, so the air feels fresher and the environment is more relaxing.

建議: 回答表达了偏好，但语法和习惯用法需改进（例如使用完整的连词、正确的动词形式）。可以给出更具体的地点或活动细节来丰富答案。避免填充词如“uh”。

範例: I would like to go hiking in the mountains because I enjoy being in nature. While hiking I can take long walks, enjoy the scenery and breathe the fresh air from the trees.

建議: 答案时态和词汇使用不当，表达模糊。应使用过去式描述最近一次散步的地点和细节，说明具体地点、环境和感受，并去掉多余的填充词。

範例: I went for a walk recently along the river. There is a paved path beside the water that people and cyclists use, and I enjoyed the peaceful view.

× Yes, I walk a lot. I walk every day from MRT station to my workplace at around 10 minutes.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot. I walk every day from the MRT station to my workplace; it takes around 10 minutes.

句子存在時態與介詞及句子結構問題。應使用定冠詞“the”表示特定的捷運站；描述所需時間要用完整句子或從句（It takes around 10 minutes）而不是“at around 10 minutes”。建議：在說明時間長短時用“It takes + 時間”。

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

原句時態使用正確（過去式疑問句）。不需要修改。

× My power had tagged me to park every evening and I will. I will play with the children there or and at the weekend they take me to some museum.

✓ My parents used to take me to the park every evening. I would play with the children there, and at weekends they took me to some museums.

原句中多處結構錯誤和詞彙使用不當。“My power had tagged me to park”語義不明且時態不合，應為“My parents used to take me to the park”表示過去經常性的動作；“I will”與背景時間不符，應使用過去習慣用“would”或“used to”；“or and”是多餘連接詞；“at the weekend”英式可接受，但“they take me to some museum”需要過去式且museum應用複數或加不定冠詞。建議：描述過去習慣用“used to”或“would + 動詞原形”，保持時態一致並簡化連詞。

× I think that might because there are many people there, so when people work there, they could talk, have a small talk with others.

✓ I think that might be because there are many people there, so when people work there they can talk and have a small talk with others.

原句缺少連繫動詞“be”：應為“might be because”。此外“could”在此處表達一般能力或可能性用“can”更自然；“have a small talk”搭配不當，一般說“have a short conversation”或“have a small talk”也可但更常見為“have a short talk”。建議：在表原因時使用“might be because”；表可能性用“can”。

× And also there are many trees, so it's have the fresh air.

✓ Also, there are many trees, so it has fresh air.

原句“It’s have the fresh air”語法錯誤。主語加動詞時應使用第三人稱單數“has”，而不是“have”；“the fresh air”可去掉定冠詞或說“fresh air”更自然。建議：主語與動詞保持人稱數一致，常用表達為“there is/are + 名詞”或“it has + 名詞”。

× I would like to go hiking 'cause, uh, I like the natural things so when I hiking I can walk and I can smell the fresh air from trees.

✓ I would like to go hiking because I like nature, so when I am hiking I can walk and smell the fresh air from the trees.

原句中“when I hiking”缺少be動詞，應為“when I am hiking”。“'cause”口語縮寫改為“because”；“the natural things”用詞不自然，改為“nature”；“smell the fresh air from trees”前面加定冠詞“the trees”或直接“fresh air”更自然。建議：保持動詞形式正確（當動名詞/進行時需be動詞），簡化名詞用法。

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

原句語法正確但用詞“lately”與一般疑問句搭配較少，雖可接受但“recently”更自然。此處不屬於必改錯誤，屬用詞選擇建議。建議：練習使用“recently”來問最近的經驗。

× I want for a walk lastly. Beside the river there are a wall for people and for the, uh, the bicycle.

✓ I went for a walk recently. Beside the river there is a path for people and for bicycles.

原句“I want for a walk lastly”時態錯誤且詞語錯用，應使用過去式“I went for a walk recently”或“I went for a walk last (time/day)”；“there are a wall”主謂不一致且可數名詞單複數錯誤，應為“there is a wall”或更恰當的“there is a path” depending on meaning；“for the, uh, the bicycle”冗餘定冠詞且複數形式應為“bicycles”。建議：注意過去式動詞（went）和可數名詞的單複數一致，避免多餘的定冠詞。