走路— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement), and add one specific detail with a linking phrase. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

範例: Yes, I walk a lot because it benefits my health. In particular, I walk every morning for 30 minutes, which helps me maintain fitness and boosts my energy for the day.

建議: Answer directly, fix tense and word choice, and give one specific example using a linking word. Keep sentences natural and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I often went walking as a child. For example, I used to walk in the park with my parents most weekends, and we would sometimes play cricket together.

建議: Give a clear reason and support it with a specific effect. Use linking words (because, therefore) and correct grammar (singular/plural, verb forms). Be concise and avoid repeating the same idea.

範例: People like walking in parks because there is plenty of open space and greenery, which helps them relax. As a result, many feel more positive and motivated after a walk.

建議: Start with a direct answer naming the place, then give a concise reason. Use correct conditional and clearer phrasing; avoid unclear ideas. One or two supporting sentences are enough.

範例: If I had the chance, I would like to walk from Karachi to Hyderabad because it would be a challenging long-distance trek. I think completing it would build my confidence and stamina.

建議: Answer in past tense for 'lately' with a clear topic sentence, then give one specific detail (name, distance, time) and use linking words. Correct collocations (greenery, give me a positive vibe).

範例: Lately I went to the small park near my house for an evening walk. The park has lots of greenery and walking there refreshes my mood and motivates me to work.

× Yes I walk a lot because it is benefit for our body.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because it is beneficial for our bodies.

The word 'benefit' is a noun; the sentence needs an adjective to describe 'it'. Use 'beneficial'. Also 'body' should be plural 'bodies' when speaking generally. Add commas for clarity.

× It have many benefit.

✓ It has many benefits.

Subject 'it' requires the singular verb 'has' not 'have'. 'Benefit' should be plural 'benefits' to match 'many'.

× If you walk in the morning you you will be fit and healthy and you maintain your body and fitness.

✓ If you walk in the morning, you will be fit and healthy and you will maintain your body and fitness.

The sentence needs consistent future/imperative structure. Add comma after the conditional clause. Use 'you will maintain' to match 'you will be'. Remove duplicate 'you'.

× Yes, when I was a child. I I always walk outside in part with my parents.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I always walked outside in the park with my parents.

Talking about habitual past actions requires past tense 'walked' not 'walk'. Fix typos: remove duplicate 'I' and correct 'part' to 'park'. Add commas and correct preposition usage.

× Many time I'm not be go for work, I'm only go to enjoy and play cricket.

✓ Many times I did not go to work; I only went to enjoy and play cricket.

This refers to past habits, so use past tense 'did not go' and 'went'. 'Many time' should be 'many times'. Remove incorrect 'be' and fix infinitive use.

× Because in the park have has large area and in the park have many green leaf and it's why were positive and motivate you to work and many people are also work.

✓ Because the park has a large area and many green trees, which makes you feel positive and motivates you to exercise; many people also work out there.

Use definite article 'the park' and correct verb 'has'. 'Green leaf' should be 'green trees' or 'greenery'. Replace 'it's why were positive' with 'which makes you feel positive'. Use 'motivates you to exercise' for clarity and correct verb forms. 'Are also work' should be 'also work out' or 'exercise'.

× It's also motivate to you work.

✓ It also motivates you to work out.

Use third-person singular verb 'motivates' to agree with 'it'. Place pronoun 'you' after the verb and use 'work out' or 'exercise' as the correct verb phrase.

× If I have chance, I like to take a long walk because I want to be work Karachi to Hyderabad.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk because I want to walk from Karachi to Hyderabad.

This is a hypothetical conditional; use past tense in 'if' clause ('had') and conditional 'would like'. 'Want to be work' is incorrect—use 'want to walk' and preposition 'from' to indicate route.

× I think it's a difficult for me but I try and taking challenge and confidence, giving confidence to my.

✓ I think it would be difficult for me, but I would try, taking it as a challenge to build my confidence.

Use conditional 'would' to match hypothetical. Rephrase for clarity: 'try, taking it as a challenge' and 'build my confidence' instead of the fragmented original. Remove incomplete phrase 'to my'.

× Usually I go to a park near in our areas.

✓ Usually I go to a park near our area.

Do not use both 'near' and 'in'; use 'near our area' or 'in our area'. 'Areas' should be singular 'area' for the speaker's locality.

× It is a very good park, it has many greenery and that give me a positive vibe and refresh my mood and motivate me to work.

✓ It is a very nice park; it has a lot of greenery, and that gives me a positive vibe, refreshes my mood, and motivates me to work.

'Many greenery' is incorrect—use 'a lot of greenery' or 'much greenery'. Verbs must agree with singular subject: 'that gives', 'refreshes', 'motivates'. Use semicolons/commas for clarity.