阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Answer the question directly with a natural topic sentence. Avoid unnatural phrases such as “informative for humans,” “many of things,” and “thanks.” Use “it” rather than repeatedly using “this,” and add one specific reason or example to make your answer more effective.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn new things and relax. I particularly like reading news articles and short novels in my free time.

建議: State your preference clearly instead of beginning with “Yes,” since the question asks “which” option you prefer. The answer contains repetition, unclear vocabulary, and incorrect grammar, especially “both of things,” “Sagin,” and “handwriting improve.” Use a clear contrast with “whereas” or “but,” and give one specific advantage of each format.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it is convenient and I can carry many books on one device. However, I choose paper when I need to study carefully because I can make notes in the margins more easily.

建議: Answer both parts of the question: explain when you read carefully and when you do not. Avoid “Yes,” because this is not a yes-or-no question, and replace “not any mistaken provided” with a natural expression such as “to avoid making mistakes.” Include a specific comparison, such as important documents versus social-media posts.

範例: I need to read carefully when I am studying or checking important documents because I want to avoid misunderstandings and mistakes. I do not need to read every word carefully when I am browsing social media or reading a short news update.

建議: Give a clear preference and explain what you use that reading method for. The phrase “scanning return rating” is unclear, and “many part of things” is not natural English. Use relevant vocabulary such as “scan,” “read in detail,” “find key information,” and “understand the whole text.”

範例: I usually prefer scanning because it helps me find key information quickly, especially when I am looking for a name, date, or statistic. However, I use detailed reading when I need to understand a difficult article or study for an exam.

× Yes, I like reading because this is very informative for humans and this will provide many of things thanks.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it is very informative for people and provides many benefits.

The pronoun this is not appropriate because it does not clearly refer to reading. Use it to refer to the activity of reading. The second it is unnecessary because the same subject continues in the sentence.

× Yes, I like reading because this is very informative for humans and this will provide many of things thanks.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it is very informative for people and provides many benefits.

Many of things is incorrect in this context. Use many benefits or many useful things. When many is followed directly by a plural noun, do not use of.

× Yes, I like both of things because paper provides many of things and Sagin provide many informative things because this is both are different because paper provides handwriting improve and suggestion provide many of things.

✓ Yes, I like both because paper provides many benefits, and screens provide many informative materials.

Both of things is incorrect because both can be used alone when the meaning is clear. Many of things is also incorrect here; use many benefits or many useful things instead.

× Yes, I like both of things because paper provides many of things and Sagin provide many informative things because this is both are different because paper provides handwriting improve and suggestion provide many of things.

✓ Yes, I like both because paper provides many benefits, and screens provide many informative materials. They are different because paper allows me to improve my handwriting, while screens provide useful suggestions.

The pronoun this does not clearly refer to a specific noun, and it is incorrectly used with are. Use they to refer to paper and screens. The pronoun me is also needed after allows to identify who improves the handwriting.

× Yes, I like both of things because paper provides many of things and Sagin provide many informative things because this is both are different because paper provides handwriting improve and suggestion provide many of things.

✓ Yes, I like both because paper provides many benefits, and screens provide many informative materials. They are different because paper allows me to improve my handwriting, while screens provide useful suggestions.

The original sentence contains too many because clauses joined together without clear organization. Divide the ideas into two sentences and use while to show the contrast between paper and screens.

× Yes, I like both of things because paper provides many of things and Sagin provide many informative things because this is both are different because paper provides handwriting improve and suggestion provide many of things.

✓ Yes, I like both because paper provides many benefits, and screens provide many informative materials. They are different because paper allows me to improve my handwriting, while screens provide useful suggestions.

A plural subject such as screens takes the plural verb provide. The original wording also contains suggestion provide; when suggestion is singular, it must take provides, or it can be changed to the plural noun suggestions with provide.

× Yes, I need to read carefully because this is more informative and not any mistaken provided.

✓ Yes, I need to read carefully because the material is important, and I do not want to make any mistakes.

The pronoun this does not clearly identify what is informative. Use the material or the information. The phrase not any mistaken provided is also unclear, so use I do not want to make any mistakes to express the intended meaning clearly.

× Yes, I need to read carefully because this is more informative and not any mistaken provided.

✓ Yes, I need to read carefully because the material is important, and I do not want to make any mistakes.

The original sentence does not contain a complete and logically organized second clause. The expression not any mistaken provided cannot function correctly as a clause. Use a subject, auxiliary verb, and main verb: I do not want to make any mistakes.

× Yes, I like the scanning return rating because this is many part of things.

✓ Yes, I prefer scanning because it helps me find specific information quickly.

The pronoun this does not have a clear grammatical reference. Use it to refer clearly to scanning, as in it helps me. The pronoun me is required because it identifies the person who finds the information.

× Yes, I like the scanning return rating because this is many part of things.

✓ Yes, I prefer scanning because it helps me find specific information quickly.

Many part of things is not a correct noun phrase. Use a specific expression such as many details or specific information. In this correction, specific information is uncountable and does not require a plural ending.

× Yes, I like the scanning return rating because this is many part of things.

✓ Yes, I prefer scanning because it helps me find specific information quickly.

The phrase scanning return rating is not organized as a clear English clause, and the sentence does not express a complete idea. Use the verb prefer to answer the question directly, followed by a because clause explaining the reason.