阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details. Reduce fillers (uh, I) and correct word forms (e.g., ‘readers’ → ‘read’, ‘comics books’ → ‘comic books’).

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I mainly read comic books and short stories because they are entertaining and help me relax. For example, I often read a short story before bed to unwind.

建議: Use correct tense and clear reasons. Give one concise topic sentence stating your preference, then add a specific reason with a linking phrase (because, since). Avoid vague phrases like ‘it was very enjoyable things’.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable and does not strain my eyes. For instance, after reading a printed book I feel less tired than after reading on my phone.

建議: Give a complete, well-structured response: one sentence for when you read carefully and one for when you skim. Provide a specific example of the kind of material you study carefully and what you skim. Remove fillers and finish your second sentence.

範例: I read carefully when I study for exams or when I need to understand technical material, because I need to remember details. On the other hand, I skim newspapers or long articles when I only want the main idea and don’t have much time.

建議: Answer directly with a clear contrast and use linking words (however, whereas). Correct grammar (e.g., ‘I read in detail’, ‘I prefer scanning’). Provide a brief example of each approach to show control.

範例: I prefer detailed reading for important information, such as study materials or instructions, because I need to understand everything. However, I use scanning for routine news or long articles to find only the main points quickly.

× Yes, I really like reading uh, I, I mostly readers, uh, comics books, article and newspaper and mostly I, I read story books, which was very interesting to me and uh, and it also helps.

✓ Yes, I really like reading. I mostly read comic books, articles, and newspapers, and I also read story books, which are very interesting to me and are helpful.

Errors: pluralization and verb form. 'mostly readers' is incorrect; correct verb is 'read' (present tense). 'comics books' should be 'comic books' and 'article and newspaper' should be plural 'articles and newspapers'. 'which was very interesting' must agree with plural subject 'story books', so use 'which are very interesting' and 'it also helps' is vague; 'are helpful' agrees with plural and clarifies meaning. Suggestion: use base form 'read' for habitual actions, make nouns plural when listing multiple items, and ensure relative clauses agree in number with their antecedents. Grammar Problem Type ID:1 or 27 (Singular and plural issue / Subject-verb agreement)

× I prefer to read on paper because it was very enjoyable things and and it does not affect to my eyes and what whenever I read on screen it eyesight.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it is very enjoyable and it does not affect my eyes, whereas reading on a screen does affect my eyesight.

Errors: tense and wording. 'was very enjoyable things' mixes past tense and incorrect noun; should be present 'is very enjoyable' and drop 'things'. 'does not affect to my eyes' is wrong preposition and pronoun use; correct is 'affect my eyes'. 'whenever I read on screen it eyesight' is ungrammatical; rephrase to 'reading on a screen does affect my eyesight'. Suggestion: keep present tense for general preferences, use correct prepositions (affect + object), and construct clear comparative clauses. Grammar Problem Type ID:6 and 11 (Present tense issue and Incorrect use of prepositions)

× Uh, when I want to study for, uh, for my exam or it is important test, then I read very carefully and, uh, whenever I read any newspaper and which was very boring for me, I just.

✓ When I want to study for my exams or for an important test, I read very carefully. When I read a newspaper that I find boring, I do not read it carefully.

Errors: tense and sentence structure. Use present simple for habitual actions: 'when I want to study' and 'I read very carefully'. 'for my exam or it is important test' is ungrammatical; correct to 'for my exams or for an important test'. The second clause 'whenever I read any newspaper and which was very boring for me, I just.' is incomplete and misuses 'which' and past tense; rewrite as a complete contrast sentence 'When I read a newspaper that I find boring, I do not read it carefully.' Suggestion: form complete clauses, maintain consistent tense, and use relative clauses correctly (that/which) matching time and number. Grammar Problem Type ID:6 and 26 (Present tense issue and Sentence structure errors)

× Oh, when it is important information for me then I reading in and then I read in details. But whenever it is not important and keep boring for me then I prefer to to scanning of any newspaper or article.

✓ Oh, when the information is important to me, I read it carefully and in detail. But when it is not important and is boring for me, I prefer to scan a newspaper or article.

Errors: verb form, article and word order. 'I reading in' should be 'I read it' using base form for present habitual. 'read in details' is incorrect: use 'in detail' (adverbial phrase) or 'read in detail'. 'keep boring for me' is incorrect; use 'is boring to me' or 'is boring for me'. 'prefer to to scanning of any newspaper' wrong infinitive and noun use; should be 'prefer to scan a newspaper or article' or 'prefer scanning newspapers'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms (read), proper adverbial phrase 'in detail', and correct infinitive/object patterns 'prefer to scan'. Grammar Problem Type ID:8 and 22 (Verb + -ing form and Article errors)