阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rút gọn, rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, sau đó giải thích lý do với chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: loại sách, thời lượng). Tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi thì (I reading → I read). Dùng từ nối đơn giản để mạch tả rõ ràng (for example, so, because).

範例: Yes, I do. I usually read for about 20 minutes every morning because it helps me relax and set a positive tone for the day. For example, I often read short articles or a chapter of a novel to clear my mind before work.

建議: Cần diễn đạt rõ lý do kèm ví dụ cụ thể; sửa lỗi từ vựng và cấu trúc (on the paper → on paper; be a strike → distracted). Tránh câu bị dở dang; dùng liên từ để giải thích mạch lạc (because, so).

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate better and I am less distracted. For example, when I read a printed book I don't get notifications from my phone, so I can finish a chapter without interruptions.

建議: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn: nêu chủ đề rồi đưa ví dụ cụ thể cho từng trường hợp. Sửa lỗi từ (scheming → skimming; read the care → read carefully) và cấu trúc (It depends on the document). Dùng linking words như 'for example' và 'however'.

範例: It depends on the document. For example, I usually skim newspapers to get the main headlines quickly, but I read contracts or work reports carefully to avoid missing important details.

建議: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, mạch lạc và dùng từ vựng chính xác (detailed reading, scanning). Giảm lặp từ, hoàn thiện câu với ví dụ cụ thể và liên từ (however, because) để thể hiện sự đối chiếu rõ ràng.

範例: I generally prefer detailed reading because I like to understand things fully. However, for newspapers I scan headlines and short articles to gather information quickly, while for serious documents I read every line carefully.

× Yes, of course, I reading in the morning and every morning because it's made me feel realized and I can have I, I, I can get the good start a good visioning at the morning before I go to work and 1st with the stressful.

✓ Yes, of course, I read in the morning every day because it makes me feel relaxed and I can get a good start and a clear vision in the morning before I go to work and face stress.

The student used the gerund 'reading' incorrectly where the simple present 'read' is required for habitual actions (Verb + -ing form vs simple present). 'It's made me feel realized' mixes tenses and uses incorrect adjective; 'realized' should be 'relaxed'. 'I can have I, I, I' is disfluent; simplify to 'I can get'. 'Visioning' is incorrect here; use 'a clear vision'. Also subject-verb agreement requires 'it makes'. Suggestions: use simple present for routines (I read, it makes), choose correct adjectives (relaxed), and avoid filler repetitions.

× Yeah, I prefer to read on the paper because when I read on the paper, I can focus and not be a strike like when I read on the screen, because when I use the phone, all the topic to read, it's make me, it's make me feel.

✓ Yes, I prefer reading on paper because when I read on paper I can focus and am not distracted like when I read on a screen; when I use my phone, all the topics to read make me feel distracted.

The student used incorrect prepositions 'on the paper' (use 'on paper' or 'the paper' depending on meaning) and 'on the screen' is acceptable but 'a screen' is more natural. 'Not be a strike' is incorrect word choice; correct is 'not distracted'. Also article usage 'the phone' vs 'my phone' and pluralization 'topic' -> 'topics'. Suggestions: use 'on paper' for general medium, use 'distracted' rather than 'a strike', and match noun number to context.

× Is up to the document that I read. Like when I read the the newspaper I, I, I I have tend to read to, to to scheming. But when I read the important document I, I I prefer to read the care.

✓ It depends on the document I am reading. For example, when I read the newspaper I tend to skim. But when I read an important document I prefer to read carefully.

The original has multiple structural issues: missing subject 'It depends', incorrect phrase 'have tend to' should be 'tend to', 'scheming' is wrong word; correct is 'skim', and 'read the care' should be 'read carefully'. Suggestion: use full clauses with subject and verb, use 'tend to' for habits, and use adverb 'carefully' to modify 'read'.

× Like I said, I prefer to detail reading but is actually up to the document that I read. Like when I read the newspaper I scanning because it's it's can be I I can get more on the information but when I read the important document I will read.

✓ As I said, I prefer detailed reading, but it actually depends on the document I read. For example, when I read the newspaper I scan because I can get more information quickly, but when I read an important document I read it carefully.

Errors include incorrect noun phrase 'detail reading' -> 'detailed reading', misuse of '-ing' 'I scanning' -> 'I scan', and awkward tense/modal 'it's can be I I can get' -> 'I can get'. Also ending 'I will read' is incomplete; specify how ('read it carefully'). Suggestions: use adjectives properly ('detailed'), use simple present for habitual actions ('I scan'), and complete clauses with clear objects/adverbs.