阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сформулируйте ответ более грамотно и естественно: начните с чётного утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей (например, с какого возраста читаете, какие жанры предпочитаете, упомяните правильное название книги). Избегайте повторов и лишних слов, сокращайте паузы и звуковые заполнители («uh»).

範例: Yes, I love reading. I have enjoyed books since I was a child and usually read fantasy and adventure novels. For example, one of my favorite series is Harry Potter, which I read several times because I enjoy the characters and imaginative world.

建議: Уточните и упростите объяснение причин предпочтения: используйте связки («because», «so», «for example») корректно и избегайте грамматических ошибок (например, «I have worn glasses» → «I have worn glasses» можно заменить на «I've worn glasses»). Заканчивайте предложение полностью.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because I wear glasses and screens tire my eyes. For example, if I read on a tablet for a long time I often get a headache, so I usually choose printed books instead.

建議: Сделайте ответ ясным и структурированным: начните с общего утверждения, затем приведите конкретные ситуации, когда требуется внимательное чтение (учёба, инструкции) и когда можно читать бегло (для удовольствия). Уберите звуковые заполнители и повторения; проверьте грамматику («don't want to forget»).

範例: I usually read carefully when I need to remember details, for example when studying or following instructions. But when I read for pleasure, I often skim parts that are less important to keep the pace and enjoy the story.

建議: Дайте чёткий выбор и обоснуйте его связным аргументом: начните с «I prefer…», объясните причину и приведите пример. Используйте точные слова («characters» вместо «charters», «detailed reading» вместо «detailing») и избегайте частых пауз. Ограничьте ответ до максимум 4 предложений.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because books often contain many characters and subtle plot points. For example, when I read a novel I pay attention to small details so I can understand each character's motivations and the story's development.

× Absolutely reading one of my favorite hobby.

✓ Absolutely, reading is one of my favorite hobbies.

The sentence lacks a verb and has incorrect noun form. 'Reading' needs a linking verb 'is' and 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' after 'one of my'. Use: 'reading is one of my favorite hobbies'. Suggestion: add the verb 'is' and change 'hobby' to 'hobbies'.

× I like doing that.

✓ I like doing that.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change required. It uses present simple appropriately to express a general preference.

× Since my childhood I have read a lot of book in my life.

✓ Since my childhood I have read a lot of books in my life.

Plural and article errors: 'book' should be plural 'books'. The present perfect 'have read' is appropriate with 'since my childhood'. Suggestion: change 'book' to 'books'.

× One of my favorite books is Gary Potter.

✓ One of my favorite books is Harry Potter.

This appears to be a wrong proper noun; likely intended 'Harry Potter'. Proper names must be correct. If 'Gary' was intended, then keep it; if referring to the famous series, use 'Harry Potter'.

× I prefer reading books on paper because I have worn glasses since childhood and screening cast my eyes to feel tired.

✓ I prefer reading books on paper because I have worn glasses since childhood and screens make my eyes feel tired.

Pronoun/word choice and verb issues: 'screening' is incorrect; use 'screens' (noun plural) or 'looking at screens'. 'Cast my eyes to feel tired' is ungrammatical; use 'make my eyes feel tired'. Suggestion: replace 'screening cast my eyes to feel tired' with 'screens make my eyes feel tired'.

× For example, after reading one at a tablet for a few time I usually get headaches.

✓ For example, after reading on a tablet for a short time I usually get headaches.

Preposition and quantity word errors: use 'on a tablet' not 'at a tablet'; 'for a short time' or 'for a little while' rather than 'for a few time'. Suggestion: use 'after reading on a tablet for a short time'.

× So I read printed book when.

✓ So I read printed books instead.

Sentence is incomplete and singular/plural error: 'printed book when' is not a complete clause. Better: 'So I read printed books instead.' Suggestion: replace with a complete clause and plural 'books'.

× Usually I like reading book carefully because uh, I want to know all of, uh, details in book and uh, I don't want to, uh, forgot, uh, Sam.

✓ Usually I like reading books carefully because I want to know all the details in the book and I don't want to forget them.

Multiple issues: plural 'books', article 'the details', 'in the book' requires article, verb form 'forget' (base form) after 'don't want to', and object pronoun 'them' to refer to 'details'. Suggestion: use 'books', 'the details', 'forget', and 'them'.

× It's uh, so important for me.

✓ It's so important to me.

Prepositional choice: 'important for me' is allowable but 'important to me' is more natural for personal feelings. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'to me' and avoid fillers.

× The books have a lot of details and charters.

✓ The books have a lot of details and characters.

Spelling error: 'charters' should be 'characters' (people in a story). The rest is acceptable: plural nouns with plural verb 'have'. Suggestion: correct spelling to 'characters'.

× That's why, uh, we need to read it, uh, detailing.

✓ That's why we need to read it in detail.

Incorrect use of '-ing' and phrase choice: 'detailing' is incorrect here; use the noun phrase 'in detail' to mean thoroughly. Remove filler 'uh'. Suggestion: use 'in detail'.

× I like it and uh, I for that an example can uh, know about, uh, every charter.

✓ I like it because, for example, I can learn about every character.

Unnatural word order and multiple filler words. 'For that an example can know about every charter' is incorrect. Use 'because, for example, I can learn about every character.' Also correct 'charter' to 'character'. Suggestion: reorder to 'I like it because, for example, I can learn about every character.'