阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence answering the question, then give one or two specific reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid repetition and long unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly. Try to keep the response to 2–4 short sentences.

範例: I don't enjoy reading much. When I was a child I preferred playing games to reading because games helped me relax after school. Now I still read only when I have to for classes, so I usually choose relaxing activities instead.

建議: Answer directly and use correct words ('paper' not 'people'; 'read' not 'list'). Give a clear reason and a brief comparison. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'so' to connect ideas and keep sentences grammatical.

範例: I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information from a physical book. Also, reading on paper is more comfortable for my eyes, so I don't feel strained after long study sessions.

建議: Address both parts of the question in a clear two-part answer. Use correct verb forms ('read' not 'list') and give a specific example for each part. Use linking words ('for example', 'but') to structure the response and avoid vague statements.

範例: I need to read carefully when I'm studying for exams because I must understand and remember details from the textbook. However, I don't read news articles carefully; I usually skim them quickly for main points unless an article is very important to me.

建議: Give a clear preference and explain why with a concise reason and perhaps a short example. Use correct verbs ('read' not 'list') and avoid filler words like 'umm'. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

範例: I prefer scanning rather than detailed reading because I often just need the main ideas quickly. For example, when I study for homework I scan chapters to find key points instead of reading every sentence in depth.

× No, not Lily for me because when I was a child I don't like bleeding anymore.

✓ No, reading is not for me because when I was a child I did not like reading.

The sentence has multiple issues: wrong word 'Lily' and 'bleeding' likely typos for 'reading' and incorrect tense/matching. Use past simple 'did not like' to describe a past habit. Also reorder to make a clear negative statement 'Reading is not for me.' Improve by using correct word choice and consistent tense.

× I would like to play game instead because when I finish school that is make I would like to make myself relax that why I would prefer to.

✓ I would like to play games instead because after I finish school I want to relax, so I prefer that.

Multiple structural and word-choice errors: 'play game' should be plural 'play games'; 'when I finish school' is fine but 'that is make I would like to make myself relax' is ungrammatical. Use 'after I finish school I want to relax' and 'so I prefer that' to express preference. Keep verb tenses consistent.

× I will prefer it on people because uh, when I list on the people, I can remember what I list and comfortable with my eyes as well.

✓ I prefer paper because when I read on paper I can remember what I read and it is comfortable for my eyes.

Wrong preposition and words: 'on people' should be 'on paper'; 'list' is wrong form of 'read'; 'comfortable with my eyes' should be 'comfortable for my eyes' or 'easy on my eyes'. Use simple present 'I prefer' for general preferences and correct object 'paper'.

× When I need to list carefully is for exams.

✓ When I need to read carefully, it is for exams.

Use 'read' not 'list'. Also insert a comma and subject 'it' to form a complete clause: 'When I need to read carefully, it is for exams.' This matches present general statement.

× Like when I go to school and the teacher taught me about the exam tomorrow, I have to list carefully with that book.

✓ For example, when I go to school and the teacher tells us about an exam tomorrow, I have to read that book carefully.

Tense mismatch: 'taught' (past) conflicts with 'tomorrow' (future); use present 'tells' for scheduled events. 'List' should be 'read' and 'with that book' should be 'that book' or 'read the book carefully.' Maintain present simple for habitual classroom statements.

× If I don't list carefully is a news because I don't like to list a new anymore.

✓ If I don't read carefully, it is usually for news because I don't like to read novels anymore.

Many errors: 'list' -> 'read'; 'is a news' -> 'it is usually for news' or 'it's just for reading news'; 'a new' likely 'novel' meaning fiction. Clarify meaning: they read news casually and no longer like novels. Use articles correctly and correct nouns.

× Well I would say I will prefer scanning because umm, I don't want to list much on the book so I will prefer scanning instead.

✓ Well, I would say I prefer scanning because I don't want to read much in a book, so I prefer scanning instead.

Use 'prefer' rather than 'will prefer' for general preference (present simple). 'List' should be 'read'. Keep parallel structure: 'I prefer scanning because I don't want to read much in a book.' Avoid unnecessary future tense.