阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be slightly more specific about what you read, and avoid redundancy. Use one clear topic sentence and a supporting detail with a linking phrase.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading in my free time. For example, I often read short stories and articles because they help me relax and take a break from screens.

建議: Correct minor pronunciation/writing repetition and grammar, and expand with a brief reason using a linking word. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes. Additionally, paper helps me concentrate better, especially for long texts.

建議: Clarify meaning and fix the confusing fragment. Provide a clear contrast using linking words and specific examples. Avoid unrelated or incorrect words and keep to a logical structure: topic sentence + supporting detail.

範例: I read carefully when the material is important, such as instructions or official emails. However, I skim casually when I'm browsing news or social media because I only need the main idea.

建議: Improve grammar (word order and article use) and use a linking phrase to contrast the two modes. Be specific about examples to make the answer more concrete.

範例: Most of the time I scan to find key information quickly. However, when I'm learning something new—like a language rule or a technical concept—I read in detail to understand it fully.

× Yes, I like reading in my free time. It's help me switch off screen.

✓ Yes, I like reading in my free time. It helps me switch off screens.

The verb after 'it' should be in third person singular present ('helps') to agree with the singular subject; this is a subject-verb agreement/third person issue (use of present tense). Also 'screen' as a countable noun referring to device displays should be plural or preceded by an article; 'switch off screens' or 'switch off the screen' are correct depending on meaning. Suggestion: use 'It helps me switch off the screen' if referring to one device, or 'It helps me switch off screens' in general.

× I I prefer reading on paper because it feels so easier on my eyes.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because it feels much easier on my eyes.

There is a duplicated pronoun 'I I'—remove the extra 'I'. The adjective 'easier' should be modified by an adverb such as 'much' or 'so' but 'so easier' is incorrect; use 'much easier' or 'so much easier'. Also maintain present tense 'feels'. Suggestion: say 'I prefer...' and 'much easier'.

× I read carefully when it's something important like instructions, but I came. But ice cream when it's just a news or social media.

✓ I read carefully when it's something important like instructions, but I come back to light reading when it's just news or social media.

This response contains incorrect and fragmented clauses ('but I came. But ice cream') that break sentence structure. 'Came' is the wrong verb and tense; context likely intended a contrast about less careful reading. Also 'a news' is incorrect because 'news' is uncountable and should not take 'a'. Suggested correction uses present tense 'come back to light reading' to fit context and replaces 'a news' with 'news'. Alternatively: '...but I don't if it's just news or social media'—better to use 'I skim when it's just news or social media.' Ensure coherent structure and correct verb forms.

× Most of the time I scan for the key information, but I read in details when I am learning new something new.

✓ Most of the time I scan for the key information, but I read in detail when I am learning something new.

Use 'in detail' (fixed phrase) rather than 'in details'. Also word order 'learning something new' is correct; remove duplicate 'new'. 'Scan' and 'read' are correctly used but adjust noun phrase to 'key information' (no article). Suggestion: 'read in detail when I am learning something new.'

× It's help me switch off screen.

✓ It helps me switch off screens.

The auxiliary contraction 'it's' (it is) requires the main verb to be third person singular present 'helps' rather than base form 'help'. This is a subject-verb agreement/third person singular issue. Also 'switch off screen' needs article or plural; 'screens' fits general meaning.