阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сократите многословие и сделайте ответ более естественным: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных пояснения с примерами. Избегайте повторов («horizons» и «perception» близки по смыслу) и слов-паразитов.

範例: Yes, I do. Reading lets me see familiar things from new perspectives; for example, nonfiction books help me understand different cultures, while novels improve my empathy and imagination.

建議: Уберите фразу «It's a controversial question» (не нужно) и исправьте повторы/ошибки («what I I'm reading»). Начните с короткого топик‑предложения и объясните причину для каждого варианта, используя связку «because».

範例: It depends: I prefer nonfiction on a screen because I can search and highlight easily, but I prefer fiction on paper because I enjoy the tactile feel and find it easier to immerse myself.

建議: Уберите «uh» и упорядочьте мысль: начните с общей темы, затем приведите два четких примера (когда читаете тщательно и когда нет). Уточните, что значит «read carefully» — делать заметки, проверять факты и т.д. Исправьте ошибки и неловкие выражения («save I'm reading»).

範例: I read carefully when the material matters, such as nonfiction articles or study texts, because I take notes and check facts. By contrast, I skim social media posts when I just want a quick update.

建議: Избегайте общих фраз («quite individual») и слова-паразитов. Дайте ясный выбор и объясните в 1–2 предложениях, в каких ситуациях вы сканируете, а в каких — читаете подробно, с примерами.

範例: I usually choose scanning when I need to find specific facts quickly, for example checking emails or news headlines. I opt for detailed reading when I study or enjoy a novel, because I want to notice subtleties and understand the arguments.

× It's a controversial question and it depends on what I I'm reading at the moment.

✓ It's a controversial question and it depends on what I'm reading at the moment.

The original sentence contains a duplicated pronoun/auxiliary 'I I'm', which is a typographical/phonological error. Remove the extra 'I' so the contracted form 'I'm' correctly represents 'I am'. Use 'what I'm reading' to refer to the content currently being read. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× If it is nonfiction, I would prefer to read it on the screen, and if it is fiction, I would like to read it on paper.

✓ If it is nonfiction, I prefer to read it on the screen, and if it is fiction, I prefer to read it on paper.

The original mixes conditional/ hypothetical 'would' with a general habitual preference. For general preferences use the simple present 'prefer'. Use parallel structure for both clauses: 'I prefer... and I prefer...' Alternatively, 'I would prefer' is acceptable in hypothetical contexts, but here the question asks general preference, so simple present is better. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× It depends on the type of the content.

✓ It depends on the type of content.

Use of the definite article 'the' before an uncountable or general noun phrase like 'content' is unnecessary. 'Type of content' is the natural collocation. Removing 'the' makes the phrase more idiomatic. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Uh, if I'm reading at the moment, uh, nonfiction, I would like to read it carefully with the pen and save I'm reading at the moment something from social media, I won't read it carefully.

✓ If I'm reading nonfiction at the moment, I read it carefully and take notes with a pen, but if I'm reading something from social media, I won't read it carefully.

Original sentence has disrupted word order, repetition, and unclear connectors. Reorder to 'If I'm reading nonfiction at the moment' (time and object together), use simple present or present continuous for current habitual actions: 'I read it carefully and take notes with a pen.' Use 'but if' to contrast with social media reading. 'Save' was likely a mistake for 'save'->'take' notes; corrected to 'take notes'. Clear conjunctions and consistent tense improve readability. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× In this context, I would say that it's quite individual and it depends on our personal approach.

✓ In this context, I would say that it's quite individual and it depends on my personal approach.

The speaker refers to their own approach, so the possessive pronoun should match the subject 'I'. 'Our' suggests a group including the listener, which is inconsistent. Use 'my personal approach' to be consistent. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× And, uh, sometimes I prefer scanning to, uh, spend less time and sometimes I want to, umm, read, uh, nuances and detail.

✓ Sometimes I prefer scanning to spend less time, and sometimes I want to read nuances and details.

Keep infinitive 'to spend' after 'prefer scanning to' (correct). 'Nuances and detail' should be pluralized to 'nuances and details' for parallelism and natural usage. Also remove filler hesitations. Maintain parallel structure in coordinate clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 8}]}{