阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundancy and incorrect word choices (e.g., ‘drama comedy book’ and mixing movies with books). Use linking words to add one or two specific supporting details such as why you enjoy that genre and a brief example. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

範例: I enjoy reading, though I’m not an avid reader. I mainly read comic or dramatic fiction because the characters and dialogue are engaging. For example, I liked The Suit for its witty dialogue and emotional scenes.

建議: Make a clear topic sentence (paper or screen) then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetitions and grammar mistakes (e.g., ‘this this’, ‘as I as I’m’). Use cleaner phrasing and limit to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen. This is because paper is more comfortable for me and I find I understand the text better, especially during long reading sessions.

建議: Begin with a direct answer, then give specific contrasting examples. Correct grammar (tense and word choice) and remove fillers like ‘uh’. Clarify the second part: when it is okay not to read carefully (e.g., casual articles or headlines). Use linking words such as ‘however’ or ‘on the other hand’. Keep to 2–4 sentences.

範例: You need to read carefully when following instructions, for example on forms or manuals, because mistakes can have consequences. However, you can skim casual items like news headlines or short blog posts when you only want the main idea.

建議: Start with a clear preference statement then provide two concise reasons using linking words (e.g., ‘because’, ‘although’). Correct grammar (article use, plural/singular) and avoid repetition. Briefly acknowledge when detailed reading is necessary to show balance.

範例: I prefer scanning because it lets me grasp the main idea quickly and saves time when I just need an overview. However, I use detailed reading for complex texts like research articles when I need to understand all the details.

× Yes, I do like to do reading but I am not a avid reader.

✓ Yes, I like reading, but I am not an avid reader.

The phrase 'do like to do reading' uses unnecessary auxiliary 'do' and an incorrect infinitive 'to do reading'. Use the gerund 'reading' after 'like' to express preference: 'I like reading'. Also add a comma before 'but' to join two independent clauses.

× I only prefer to read the drama comedy book because I found it more interesting and engaging.

✓ I prefer to read drama-comedy books because I find them more interesting and engaging.

'Only prefer' is redundant; 'prefer' already conveys preference. 'The drama comedy book' implies a single book; use the plural 'books' for general preference. Use hyphen 'drama-comedy' as a compound adjective. Tense should be present 'find' to match general statement, and pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'books'.

× There are many drama movies, for example The Suit which is one of my favorite movie.

✓ There are many drama movies, for example The Suit, which is one of my favorite movies.

Mismatch between plural 'movies' and singular 'movie'. Use plural 'movies' after 'favorite' to match count, or make earlier reference singular. Also insert commas to set off the nonrestrictive clause.

× Usually I prefer to read on a paper because this this is more convenient and easy way for me to read because as I as I'm not used to read on the computers or any screen so I really prefer to read on paper and I can understand in a better way and it's helped me a lot.

✓ Usually I prefer to read on paper because this is a more convenient and easy way for me, as I am not used to reading on computers or any screen, so I really prefer paper and I can understand better; it has helped me a lot.

Incorrect article 'a paper' and repeated 'this this'. Use 'on paper' without article. Use 'a more convenient and easy way' (or better: 'a more convenient and easier way'). 'Not used to reading' requires gerund. 'Computers' plural without 'the'. Use 'I can understand better' (adverb placement) and correct tense 'it has helped me' for present relevance.

× if we, you need to read carefully when you were reading the instructions, because this is a very important to read the instructions, uh, if we have to follow that.

✓ You need to read carefully when you are reading the instructions, because it is very important to follow them.

Mix of past 'were reading' and present context; use present continuous 'are reading' for current/general instruction. 'This is a very important to read the instructions' is ungrammatical; use 'it is very important to follow them' or 'to read them carefully'. Use pronoun 'them' for 'instructions'.

× So read it, uh, wisely and clearly.

✓ So read them carefully and clearly.

'Read it' refers to plural 'instructions'; use 'read them'. 'Wisely' is odd collocated with 'read'; 'carefully' is the natural adverb. Keep sentence concise.

× And whenever, whenever there are some, there are some extra convent convenient paragraphs which are not.

✓ And sometimes there are extra, irrelevant paragraphs that are not necessary.

Original is disfluent and contains filler and repeated words. 'Convent' is incorrect; likely 'convenient' or 'relevant' but context suggests 'irrelevant' or 'not necessary'. Rephrase to a clear, grammatical sentence.

× Yes, most of the time I prefer the scanning because it's I can understand it quickly because I just need one idea of that topic or paragraph.

✓ Yes, most of the time I prefer scanning because I can understand it quickly; I just need the main idea of the topic or paragraph.

Do not use definite article 'the' before gerund 'scanning' in this context. Remove extra 'the' and 'it's'. Use 'main idea' rather than 'one idea'. Keep present simple 'I can understand'.

× So I prefer scanning. It's more time saving than detailed reading.

✓ So I prefer scanning. It's more time-saving than detailed reading.

Use compound adjective 'time-saving' with a hyphen. Alternatively 'saves time' is clearer. 'Detailed reading' is acceptable but consider 'detailed reading' or 'close reading'.

× Detail reading are more concentration as an item, not too much focused person.

✓ Detailed reading requires more concentration and is for someone who can focus more.

'Detail reading' should be 'detailed reading' (adjective form). 'Are' disagrees with singular 'reading'—use 'requires'. Original second clause is unclear; rephrase to express that detailed reading needs a focused person.

× So scanning is best option for me.

✓ So scanning is the best option for me.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'best option'. Also add 'the' to make the noun phrase grammatical.