阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve clarity, coherence and conciseness. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and minor grammar errors (e.g., tense consistency, articles, and plural nouns).

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. When I was a child I visited the library almost every day for two to three hours, where I mainly read books about singing, dancing and famous scientists.

建議: Make the answer more natural and correct grammar and word choice. Begin with the preference, then give two concise, specific reasons connected with linking words. Correct mistakes like “re own screen”.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it feels healthier for my eyes and helps me concentrate. Also, I enjoy collecting physical books, so I can build a personal library.

建議: Clarify the meaning and correct vocabulary. Answer directly: state situations when careful reading is necessary and when it is not, with clear reasons and linking words. Fix phrases like “use carefully”, “silent screen”, and “no one trouble with me.”

範例: I need to read carefully when I study or prepare for exams because I must understand details and remember facts. By contrast, I don’t read carefully when I’m browsing social media or skimming news headlines, because I only want a quick overview.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence stating the preference, then explain specific reasons with correct vocabulary and linking words. Replace unclear words like “booth” and “screening reading” with appropriate terms (e.g., books, skimming). Keep it concise and grammatical.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the subject deeply and remember important facts. For example, when I read a novel or a scientific article, I take my time to note key ideas rather than just skimming.

× When I was a child, I usually went to the library every day for about two to three hours.

✓ When I was a child, I usually went to the library and stayed for about two to three hours every day.

The original sentence is understandable but awkwardly places the duration phrase; reordering for clarity makes the past habitual action and duration clear. Use 'stayed for' to express spending time in the library in the past.

× And I read many books about singing, dancing, scientists.

✓ And I read many books about singing, dancing, and scientists.

A list of items requires commas and the conjunction 'and' before the final item. Without 'and' the list feels incomplete.

× I prefer to read on paper because I think reading on paper is more healthy than re own screen and I can buy many books that I want to read.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I think reading on paper is healthier than reading on my own screen, and I can buy many books that I want to read.

Use the comparative adverb/adjective 'healthier' rather than 'more healthy'. Also 're own screen' seems to be a typo; correct to 'my own screen'. Add 'reading on' for parallel structure. Use a comma before 'and' to join independent clauses.

× When I stay at home alone, I usually use carefully because I have a silent screen and I can reboot by myself and no one trouble with me.

✓ When I stay at home alone, I usually use my time carefully because I have a quiet space, I can relax by myself, and no one bothers me.

The original sentence has several problems: 'use carefully' lacks an object—add 'my time'; 'silent screen' is incorrect for meaning—use 'quiet space'; 'reboot by myself' is unclear—replace with 'relax by myself'; 'no one trouble with me' should be 'no one bothers me'. Also join items in parallel with commas and 'and'.

× It makes me relaxed.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed.

Use the verb 'feel' with the adjective 'relaxed' to express a state produced by something. 'Makes me relaxed' is understandable but less natural.

× I prefer to detail reading because I think I can learn more detail from the booth and more things I can read before screening reading and I like it.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I think I can learn more details from the book, and I can read more things than with scanning; I like it.

Use the adjective 'detailed' with 'reading' (not 'detail reading'). 'More detail' should be 'more details'. 'Booth' is a wrong word for 'book'. 'Screening reading' should be 'scanning'. For clarity, compare detailed reading to scanning and keep parallel structure.