阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and organized: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), correct repetitions, and give one or two specific examples of what you read and why. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, such as).

範例: Yes, I really enjoy reading. I mainly read religious texts like the Quran and non-fiction books about topics I care about because they give me detailed information and help me understand complex issues.

建議: Make the preference clearer and reduce hesitation. Give a short reason for each format and use a linking word to contrast (however, although).

範例: I like both, but I usually prefer paper for novels and study materials because it's easier to annotate. However, if paper copies are unavailable or I'm travelling, I read on a screen since it's more convenient.

建議: Correct vocabulary and pronunciation errors, and structure the answer: state when you read carefully, explain why, then give an example of casual reading. Avoid unclear words (e.g., 'beast') and use linking words (for instance, whereas).

範例: I read carefully when I'm studying scientific or technical articles because I need to understand the methods and reasoning. For example, when reading a research paper I take notes and check references. Conversely, if I'm reading the news casually, I skim to get the main points.

建議: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, give a reason and an example of when detailed reading is useful. Use linking words like because and for example to structure your response.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand all the details and see how information connects. For example, when I study history I read full chapters and cross-check sources so I can form a complete picture.

× I prefer reading, uh, books, reading for the Quran, reading what I'm concerned about.

✓ I prefer reading books, reading the Quran, and reading about what I'm concerned about.

Run-on repetition of 'reading' interrupted clarity. Use parallel structure with nouns/phrases after 'reading' and join with 'and' to list items. This keeps the verb form consistent and the sentence clear.

× I prefer to read and find out the the detailed information.

✓ I prefer to read and find out the detailed information.

Duplicate word 'the the' is typographical. Keep 'find out the detailed information' as the infinitive structure parallel to 'prefer to read.'

× Sometimes I prefer to read on paper and if there is no if there is a limitation in paper availability, it's OK for me to read on screen.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to read on paper, but if paper is not available, it's OK for me to read on a screen.

Redundant phrase 'if there is no if there is a limitation' causes confusion. Use 'but' to contrast preferences and simplify 'if paper is not available' for clarity. Add article 'a' before 'screen.'

× I need to reach carefully if there is a scientific piece, so I have to figure out the ideology behind that beast and when when it's only just for my information, it's OK, I just go.

✓ I need to read carefully when there is a scientific article, so I have to figure out the ideas behind it; when it is only for my information, it's OK to just skim.

Multiple issues: 'reach' is incorrect verb (should be 'read'). 'Piece' is vague; 'article' or 'paper' fits academic context. 'Ideology behind that beast' is incorrect word choice—'ideas behind it' is appropriate. Remove duplicate 'when', fix tense and verb choices, and use 'skim' to express quick reading.

× I need to reach carefully if there is a scientific piece, so I have to figure out the ideology behind that beast and when when it's only just for my information, it's OK, I just go.

✓ I need to read carefully when there is a scientific article, so I have to figure out the ideas behind it; when it is only for my information, it's OK to just skim.

Pronoun reference 'that beast' is inappropriate and unclear. Replace with 'it' referring to 'article' and use neutral noun 'ideas' rather than 'ideology' unless specifically meant. Ensure pronouns clearly refer to the previous noun.

× Indeed, I prefer detailed reading because I'm not a person who like to just get the idea.

✓ Indeed, I prefer detailed reading because I'm not a person who likes to just get the idea.

Subject-verb agreement error: after 'who' the verb must agree with the antecedent 'person' (third singular), so 'likes' is required. This is categorized under article errors by list but functionally is subject-verb agreement; correct to 'likes.'

× No, I am the person who wants to understand each detail and relate the information with others.

✓ No, I am the kind of person who wants to understand every detail and relate the information to other things.

'The person' is acceptable but 'the kind of person' is more natural. 'Each detail' can be 'every detail.' Use 'relate the information to other things' or 'to other information'—the preposition 'to' is required for 'relate ... to'.

× So I prefer to read detailed pieces.

✓ So I prefer to read detailed pieces.

Sentence is acceptable; kept the present participle structure consistent. No grammatical change needed but 'detailed pieces' could be replaced with 'detailed texts' for clarity.