阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and grammatically correct, be concise, and avoid redundancy. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Fix verb/noun agreement and phrasing (e.g., 'a favorite hobby' → 'a favorite hobby' is redundant; say 'one of my favorite hobbies' or 'a favorite pastime').

範例: I enjoy reading because it helps me unwind and reduce stress. For example, I often read fiction to relax and self‑help books to learn practical tips, which also help expand my vocabulary.

建議: Be more fluent and avoid hesitations and repetitions. Use one clear sentence to state preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Correct small language issues (e.g., 'I need not' → 'I don't need to').

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. For example, I can read on my phone or tablet anywhere, so I don't have to carry heavy books.

建議: Organize the answer into a clear topic sentence followed by two specific contrasting examples. Eliminate hesitations and correct grammar (e.g., 'Play totally dependent' → 'It depends on the situation'; 'got' → 'receive'; 'I not need' → 'I don't need'). Use linking words like 'for example' and 'however' appropriately.

範例: It depends on the situation. For example, I read official emails and study materials carefully because they may contain important information, but I don't read social media notifications in detail and usually ignore them.

建議: State your preference clearly and give a specific, logically connected example. Avoid contradictory phrasing (scanning vs. official email detail). If you scan official emails, explain why scanning is sufficient, or mention exceptions. Reduce fillers and correct small errors ('got' → 'receive').

範例: I prefer scanning because it saves time and often gives the main idea quickly. For instance, when I receive an email I usually read the subject line and first paragraph to decide whether it needs a detailed read later.

× Well, reading is one of my favorite hobby because it helps me to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

✓ Well, reading is one of my favorite hobbies because it helps me to unwind and escape from my daily stress.

The noun 'hobby' should be plural 'hobbies' because it follows 'one of my', which requires a plural noun. Suggestion: use 'one of my favorite hobbies' or rephrase to 'a favorite hobby of mine'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 1

× So I generally read fiction novels or self help books because it not only increases my knowledge but also improves my vocabulary and language skills.

✓ So I generally read fiction novels or self-help books because they not only increase my knowledge but also improve my vocabulary and language skills.

There are two issues: 'self help' should be hyphenated as 'self-help' (compound adjective/noun), and subject-pronoun agreement: 'books' is plural, so use plural pronoun and verbs 'they... increase... improve' instead of singular 'it... increases... improves'. This fits subject-verb agreement (ID 27) and singular/plural (ID 1). Use plural verbs to match plural noun 'books'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 27

× Well, I generally prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient and portable as I need not uh, I can. I can read it and anywhere, for example from my phone or a tablet without carrying such heavy books.

✓ Well, I generally prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient and portable; I can read anywhere, for example on my phone or a tablet, without carrying heavy books.

Problems: awkward pronoun/phrase 'read it and anywhere' and unnecessary repetition 'I can. I can'. Use 'read anywhere' and preposition 'on my phone or a tablet'. Remove filler 'uh' and 'such'. This addresses sentence structure errors (ID 26) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11). Use concise phrasing. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Play totally dependent on situation, for example, uh, when I got the information or notification or from official emails or from my study materials, so that the thing that I need to go through clearly.

✓ It is totally dependent on the situation; for example, when I get information or notifications from official emails or from my study materials, I need to read them carefully.

Multiple issues: missing subject 'It is' (sentence without verb/structure, ID 23/26), incorrect past tense 'got' should be present 'get' because speaking about general habits (present tense, ID 6), and awkward phrase 'the thing that I need to go through clearly' corrected to 'I need to read them carefully'. Also change singular/plural for 'notification(s)'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× However, on the other side, if I got the notification of about some, uh, some social network insider post, so I not need to go through clearly carefully, I can ignore it and read it us.

✓ However, if I get a notification about some social network post, I do not need to read it carefully; I can ignore it.

Fixes: use present tense 'get' for habitual actions (ID 6), remove redundant 'on the other side' and filler 'uh', correct negation 'do not need' and word order 'read it carefully'. Remove extra words 'of about', 'insider', and incorrect 'read it us'. This addresses tense issue (ID 6), pronoun/word misuse (ID 12), and sentence structure (ID 26). Grammar Problem Type ID: 6

× Well, I choose to do scanning because it saves my time and even gives a whole meaning through reading some of the text.

✓ Well, I choose scanning because it saves me time and gives me an overall understanding from reading some of the text.

Use 'choose scanning' or 'choose to scan' (verb form correction, ID 8), and correct 'saves my time' to natural 'saves me time' (pronoun/object usage, ID 12). 'Gives a whole meaning' is unnatural; use 'gives me an overall understanding'. Also avoid unnecessary 'even'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 8

× For example, if I got any official e-mail so I just read the uh subject line or the first paragraph to get the meaning of the whole text.

✓ For example, if I get any official e-mail, I just read the subject line or the first paragraph to get the meaning of the whole text.

Use present tense 'get' for habitual actions (ID 6) instead of past 'got'. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary conjunction 'so'. The rest is acceptable; keep 'the subject line' and 'the first paragraph'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 6