阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 많이 어색하고 반복이 있으며 의미 전달이 불분명합니다. 먼저 명확한 주제문으로 시작하세요(예: I don't really enjoy reading). 그 다음 이유를 1~2개만 간단히 제시하고, 관련된 예시나 대안을 덧붙이세요. 문법(시제, 동사 형태, 관사)과 불필요한 반복을 고쳐 자연스럽게 말하는 연습이 필요합니다.

範例: I don't really enjoy reading; I prefer watching videos because they are more engaging and less tiring. For example, after a long day I find it easier to relax while watching a documentary than to focus on a book.

建議: 좋은 주제문(종이책 선호)을 제시했지만 문장이 중복되고 문법 오류가 있습니다. linking word(However, because 등)를 사용해 이유를 명확히 연결하고, supporting detail을 하나 더 추가해 구체성을 높이세요. 문장 수는 2~3문장으로 간결하게 유지하세요.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because I can concentrate better and avoid the distractions of notifications on screens. For instance, when I read a printed article I can take notes in the margins, which helps me remember key points.

建議: 대응이 매우 불분명하고 문장이 끊겨 의미가 전달되지 않습니다. 질문에 대해 먼저 직접적으로 답하고(예: I need to read carefully at work when handling official documents), 구체적인 이유와 예시를 덧붙이세요. 불완전 문장을 피하고 한 가지 상황에 대해 완결된 설명을 연습하세요.

範例: I need to read carefully at work when I handle official documents or contracts because small mistakes can cause legal problems. On the other hand, I don't read carefully when I scan emails for general updates.

建議: 의견과 이유는 적절하지만 문법(관사, 동사 형태)과 문장 흐름을 다듬으면 더 자연스럽습니다. linking words(For example, because 결과적으로 등)를 사용해 논리적으로 연결하고 예시를 하나 추가하세요. 답변은 2~3문장으로 압축하세요.

範例: I prefer scanning because I often need to go through many documents and extract the key information quickly. For example, when I summarize reports at work, I skim headings and topic sentences to save time.

× I like to watching videos.

✓ I like watching videos.

The verb 'like' can be followed by either the gerund (verb+ing) or the infinitive, but not a combination ('to watching'). Use the gerund 'watching' or the infinitive 'to watch'. For natural speech, 'I like watching videos' is preferred.

× Living is living gives me tired so I like I don't like the reading.

✓ Reading makes me tired, so I don't like it.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive. Use a clear subject and verb: 'Reading makes me tired' and then 'so I don't like it.' This corrects sentence structure and pronoun reference.

× I prefer I prefer to read on paper because it helps me more focus.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it helps me focus more.

Duplicate 'I prefer' should be removed. 'Helps me more focus' is awkward; place 'more' after the verb or use 'helps me to focus more.' Correct word order: 'helps me focus more.'

× When I watch the screen I it is difficult to concentrate, but read paper it is.

✓ When I watch a screen, it is difficult to concentrate, but when I read on paper, it is easier.

Pronoun and article use is incorrect and word order is confused. Use 'a screen' or 'the screen' and include conjunctions: 'but when I read on paper, it is easier.' Replace awkward 'it is' placements and add 'when' for parallel structure.

× I need to read carefully during my job. I have a lot of. Fork and it is very important because the government.

✓ I need to read carefully for my job. I have a lot of work, and it is very important because of government regulations.

Original contains fragment 'I have a lot of.' and 'Fork' is likely 'work.' Fix article/preposition: 'for my job.' Add missing words to complete sentences and clarify meaning: 'because of government regulations.'

× I prefer to scanning.

✓ I prefer scanning.

After 'prefer' you can use either the infinitive ('to scan') or the gerund ('scanning'). Do not mix 'prefer to scanning.' Use 'I prefer scanning' or 'I prefer to scan.'

× This is because I have to read a lot of documents and I summarize that, so I need to read quickly and so I prefer scanning.

✓ This is because I have to read a lot of documents and summarize them, so I need to read quickly; therefore I prefer scanning.

'Summarize that' is incorrect: use 'summarize them' to refer to documents. Combine clauses with logical connectors and correct pronoun reference. Use punctuation to improve clarity.