阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, ngắn gọn và mạch lạc. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và lặp từ (ví dụ “and and”, “go for reading books”). Bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu hỗ trợ chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ thể loại sách yêu thích hoặc ví dụ về thời gian đọc). Sử dụng liên từ thích hợp để kết nối ý và kiểm soát độ dài không quá 5 câu.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially contemporary fiction and short stories. I usually read during my commute or before bed because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I recently finished a short story collection that kept me entertained during long train rides.

建議: Câu trả lời thiếu cấu trúc ngữ pháp chính xác và có từ sai (ví dụ “Is obviously”). Nên trả lời trực tiếp, nói rõ lý do cụ thể và cung cấp một minh chứng ngắn. Tránh câu dài lúng túng; dùng liên từ như “because” hoặc “so” hợp lý và giữ trong 1–3 câu.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because e-books are cheaper and more convenient. For example, I can download textbooks instantly and save money that I would otherwise spend on paper books.

建議: Ý chính rõ ràng nhưng câu nên tự nhiên hơn và cụ thể hơn về hoàn cảnh cần đọc kỹ và khi nào không cần. Thêm một ví dụ ngắn về loại tài liệu cần đọc kỹ (ví dụ sách giáo khoa, bài báo khoa học) và khi có thể đọc lướt (ví dụ tin tức, email). Giữ 1–3 câu, rõ ràng và mạch lạc.

範例: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or when I read textbooks, because understanding details is essential for good grades. On the other hand, I only skim news articles or casual emails when I want a quick overview.

建議: Câu trả lời bắt đầu tốt nhưng bị bỏ lửng và lặp ý. Nên hoàn thiện câu, đưa ví dụ cụ thể và dùng liên từ để chuyển ý. Nói rõ khi bạn chọn “scanning” và khi nào “detailed reading”, kèm một ví dụ ngắn cho mỗi trường hợp.

範例: It depends on the purpose. If I’m researching for an assignment, I read in detail to understand everything, but if I’m looking for a specific fact in an article, I scan the text quickly to find it.

× Yes, I do like reading, especially interesting books.

✓ Yes, I do like reading, especially interesting books.

The sentence is grammatical but awkward; change for naturalness by adding an article or adjective placement: 'especially interesting books' is acceptable though 'especially interesting ones' or 'especially interesting books to read' is more natural. Suggestion: 'Yes, I do like reading, especially interesting books to read.'

× Whenever I have free time, I go for reading books.

✓ Whenever I have free time, I read books.

Use the verb 'read' (base form) rather than 'go for reading'. 'Go for' plus -ing is not used here; say 'I read' or 'I like reading'. Suggestion: Replace 'go for reading books' with 'read books' or 'do some reading'.

× It's not only and and will help me unwind after a hectic day but.

✓ It's not only enjoyable, but it also helps me unwind after a hectic day.

Original sentence has broken word order, extra 'and', and missing subject for 'will help'. Use correlative conjunction 'not only... but also' and ensure correct verb and subject: 'it also helps'. Suggestion: Use 'not only... but also' and place the verb after the subject: 'It's not only enjoyable, but it also helps me unwind after a hectic day.'

× Is obviously online books because it can help me save money instead of buying paper books so that it can allocate its money to do all the tasks.

✓ Obviously I prefer online books because they help me save money instead of buying paper books, so I can use the saved money for other things.

Missing subject 'It' at start and incorrect pronoun 'it' referring to the student; 'books' is plural so use 'they'. Also awkward phrase 'allocate its money to do all the tasks' should be 'use the saved money for other things'. Suggestion: Supply subject 'I' and match pronouns to plural nouns; use natural expressions for spending/saving money.

× Whenever I prepare for exams, I will focus on reading carefully because it can help me get a high score in this exam.

✓ Whenever I prepare for exams, I focus on reading carefully because it helps me get a high score in exams.

When describing habitual actions, use present simple rather than 'will'. Also use 'helps' instead of 'can help' for general truth; avoid repeating 'this exam' if speaking generally. Suggestion: Use present simple for routines: 'Whenever I prepare for exams, I focus on reading carefully because it helps me get high scores.'

× It depends on the information that I need to know. For example, if I need to prepare for exams, I go for reading carefully if.

✓ It depends on the information I need. For example, if I am preparing for exams, I read carefully.

Remove unnecessary 'to know', correct 'go for reading carefully' to 'read carefully', and fix incomplete clause ending with 'if'. Use 'am preparing' or present simple 'prepare' depending on context; present continuous is natural for planned preparation. Suggestion: Use complete clauses and natural verb forms: 'If I am preparing for exams, I read carefully.'