阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Cevap net değil ve tekrarlamalar, dolgu kelimeleri (uh) var. Konu cümlesi açık olmalı, ardından kısa destekleyici detaylar verin. Örneğin ne tür kitaplar veya programlar okuduğunuzu ve neden sevdiğinizi belirtin. Cümleleri 2-3 kısa ve akıcı cümlede tutun, tekrar ve gereksiz sözcüklerden kaçının.

範例: Yes, I do enjoy reading. I usually read fiction novels and articles about technology because they help me relax and keep me informed. For example, I recently finished a science-fiction book that opened my eyes to new ideas.

建議: Cevap kısa ve yüzeysel; "technology and other technology" gibi tekrarlar ve belirsizlik var. Tercihinizi net ifade edin ve bir veya iki neden verin, mümkünse bir karşılaştırma yapın. Bağlaçlar kullanarak mantıklı akış sağlayın.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because it's more convenient and portable. Additionally, I can adjust the font size and access many books instantly, whereas paper books take up space and are less flexible.

建議: Cevaplar kısa, düzensiz ve tekrarlı. Soruyu doğrudan yanıtlayın: hangi durumlarda dikkatli okuma gerektiğini ve hangi durumlarda hızlı veya yüzeysel okuma yeterli olduğunu açıkça ayırt edin. Sebep verin ve kısa örnek ekleyin.

範例: I need to read carefully during exams or when studying important instructions because accuracy matters. However, I read casually when browsing social media or skimming news headlines, since I only want the general idea.

建議: Cevap anlaşılır ama dolgu kelimeler ve belirsiz zaman ifadesi var. Tercihinizi net belirtin ve nedeninizi açıkça verin; örnek bir durum ekleyin. Bağlaç kullanarak cümleyi akıcı hale getirin.

範例: I prefer scanning because I'm often short on time and need to find key information quickly. For instance, when I research a topic, I scan articles to locate relevant facts before reading in detail if needed.

× Yes, I of course I like reading uh, I already read some books uh, maybe uh TV, TV shows I read uh, it's.

✓ Yes, of course I like reading. I have already read some books, and I also watch TV shows.

The original sentence misuses pronouns and has redundant subjects ('I of course I'). It also mixes reading and watching incorrectly ('TV shows I read'). Use 'of course' after 'Yes,' remove the extra 'I', use present perfect 'have already read' for completed actions relevant now, and change 'read TV shows' to 'watch TV shows' to use the correct verb for that activity. Combine into two clear sentences for better structure.

× I prefer screen because I like technology and other technology.

✓ I prefer the screen because I like technology and other technological things.

The phrase 'prefer screen' lacks the definite article 'the' when referring to a medium in general. 'Other technology' is repetitive; use 'other technological things' or 'other technologies' for clarity. Alternatively, 'I prefer reading on a screen because I like technology and other digital devices.' would be more natural.

× Yes it is good question. I already read carefully in exam but I I usually read not carefully.

✓ Yes, that's a good question. I read carefully during exams, but I usually do not read carefully otherwise.

'Yes it is good question' is missing 'that's' and an article; 'a good question' is needed. 'I already read carefully in exam' is awkward — use 'read carefully during exams' and present tense habit 'usually do not read carefully' for general habit. Remove duplicate 'I'. Reorder clauses for natural English.

× I prefer scanning because I don't, uh, I don't have some, uh, minutes.

✓ I prefer scanning because I don't have much time.

The phrase 'have some minutes' is unnatural here. Use 'much time' or 'enough time' when speaking negatively. Remove hesitation fillers and duplicate 'I don't' to make a concise sentence: 'I prefer scanning because I don't have much time.'