阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문법 오류가 많습니다. 주제문을 명확히 말한 뒤 이유를 두세 문장으로 연결해 주세요. 예를 들어 'I don't enjoy reading'처럼 자연스러운 표현을 사용하고, 'boring' 대신 'boring'의 올바른 사용과 'sit for a long time' 같은 숙어를 쓰세요. 또한 'usually read on my phone or computer'처럼 동사 형태를 고쳐 문장을 매끄럽게 만드세요. 문장 수는 3~4문장으로 제한하고, 연결어(for, so, because)를 적절히 사용하세요.

範例: I don't enjoy reading very much because I find it boring and I don't like sitting for long periods. For this reason, I usually read on my phone or on a computer, which feels less formal and more comfortable. Occasionally, if something interests me, I will try to read a bit more carefully.

建議: 의견은 분명하지만 문법과 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다. 'hard to eyes' 대신 'hard on my eyes' 또는 'strains my eyes'를 사용하고, 'texture of book paper'는 좋습니다. 문장을 연결할 때는 'because' 한 번으로 이유를 명확히 말하고, 반복을 피하세요. 전체 답변을 2~3문장으로 간결하게 구성하세요.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because screens tend to strain my eyes and feel less comfortable. Also, I enjoy the texture and smell of physical books, which makes reading more pleasant for me.

建議: 의미 전달은 되지만 문장이 혼란스럽고 어법 오류가 많습니다. 'depend on the importance' 대신 'it depends on how important the material is'로 시작하고, 대조를 명확히 하기 위해 연결어(if/when/while)와 예시를 사용하세요. 'assessment' 대신 'important tasks'나 'exams' 같은 구체적 예를 들면 더 좋습니다.

範例: It depends on how important the text is. For example, I read carefully when I study for exams or need to complete an important assignment, but I skim articles or messages when they are not important.

建議: 의견은 있으나 반복과 문법 오류가 많고 논리 흐름이 약합니다. 'I prefer detailed reading'으로 주제문을 시작하고, 이유는 간단명료하게 하나나 두 개로 제한하세요. 'I can't do scanning' 대신 'I find it hard to scan'으로 자연스럽게 표현하고, 'gives me a good understanding of the book'처럼 구체적인 결과를 제시하세요.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I find it hard to just scan material. Detailed reading helps me understand the book better and remember important points.

× Actually I don't like reading because it is very bored and I don't like sitting a long time, so I usually reading with my phone or doing computer.

✓ Actually I don't like reading because it is very boring and I don't like sitting for a long time, so I usually read on my phone or use the computer.

'Very bored' is incorrect because 'bored' is an adjective describing a person; use the adjective 'boring' to describe the activity. Use 'sitting for a long time' with the preposition for to indicate duration. 'Usually reading' is incorrect verb form; use the base verb 'read' after an auxiliary context like 'usually'. 'Doing computer' is ungrammatical; use 'use the computer' or 'on the computer'. Overall, choose correct adjective forms and correct verb and preposition usage.

× Actually I prefer to read on paper because on a screen is very hard to eyes and I like the texture of book paper book. So I prefer paper book.

✓ Actually I prefer to read on paper because reading on a screen is very hard on the eyes and I like the texture of book paper. So I prefer paper books.

Missing subject for 'on a screen'; add 'reading' to make a verb phrase. Use the preposition 'on' with 'the eyes' to indicate impact: 'hard on the eyes'. 'Texture of book paper book' is redundant; use 'texture of book paper'. 'Paper book' should be plural 'paper books' or 'paper books' when speaking generally.

× I think it depends on degree of importance. If I do some assessment and it needs to lead something, it should be read carefully and it's not. I think it's not have to focus.

✓ I think it depends on the degree of importance. If I have to do an assessment and it affects something important, it should be read carefully. If it's not important, I don't have to focus as much.

Add the article 'the' before 'degree of importance'. 'Do some assessment' is unidiomatic; use 'have to do an assessment' or 'need to do an assessment'. 'Needs to lead something' is unclear; replace with 'affects something important'. 'It should be read carefully and it's not' is contradictory and ungrammatical; separate into two clauses: one for important documents and one for unimportant ones. 'I think it's not have to focus' is incorrect verb phrase; use 'I don't have to focus'.

× I prefer detailed reading reading because actually I I can't do scanning firstly and reading detailed give me some good running about the book and some.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because actually I can't do scanning at first and detailed reading gives me a good overview of the book.

Duplicate word 'reading reading' should be one 'reading'. 'Do scanning firstly' is awkward; use 'scan at first' or 'do scanning at first'. 'Reading detailed give' has a subject-verb agreement issue and wrong word order: use 'detailed reading gives'. 'Some good running about the book and some' is unclear; replace with 'a good overview of the book'. Ensure proper verb forms and clearer noun phrases.