阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 注意语法和时态一致性，避免冗长句子并增加衔接词使表达更自然。例如“broaden”应为原形，分句之间用连接词替代逗号拼接。可把例子更具体化以增强内容。

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading because it broadens my horizons and helps me learn about events around the world. For example, I often read geography books, which give me detailed information about different countries, their traditions and cultures.

建議: 注意动词形式和时态一致（例如“made”应为“makes”或“make”），减少无关描述并增加一两点具体原因或对比，使用衔接词如“because”后的并列结构更清晰。

範例: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the smell and texture of books, and I find printed text less tiring for my eyes. In contrast, screens often make me blink more and feel uncomfortable after long periods.

建議: 注意语法（如不定式和动名词的正确使用：avoid making mistakes；省略或修正多余词如“to”），并用连接词更自然地对比两种情况。另外把“browsing”时的场景更具体化。

範例: I need to read very carefully during exams because I must understand the exact meaning of each question to avoid making mistakes. However, when I am casually browsing a book at home, I usually scan the pages for interesting parts and skip the details.

建議: 表述清晰但可在答案开头加主题句并用连接词扩展细节，避免重复词（如“the characters”重复）。可以补充具体阅读习惯或举更生动的例子来加强说服力。

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand the plot and the characters' emotions. For example, when I read a novel slowly and pay attention to descriptions, I can imagine the setting and feel the characters' struggles, which makes the story more memorable.

× Yes, I like reading very much because I think reading can broadens my horizons and let me know what happened all over the world.

✓ Yes, I like reading very much because I think reading can broaden my horizons and let me know what happens all over the world.

句子中有多处动词形式错误：1) 'can broadens' 中使用了情态动词 can 后不应再加第三人称 -s，正确形式为 can broaden。2) 'let me know what happened all over the world' 的时态不一致。说的是一般事实或持续性的情况，应使用一般现在时 happens，而不是过去时 happened。建议：情态动词后用动词原形；描述一般事实或现在的情况用一般现在时。

× For example, I like reading geography books, I think it helps me know about other countries, traditions and cultures.

✓ For example, I like reading geography books. I think they help me learn about other countries, traditions and cultures.

原句为逗号连接的两个独立分句（逗号拼接错误）。此外，主语从 'geography books' 到下一句应保持一致，使用复数代词 they；'help me know about' 更自然的表达是 'help me learn about'。建议：将两个独立分句拆成完整句，代词与数要一致，动词搭配更自然。

× I prefer to read on paper because I like the smell of ink on the paper and I think reading on paper will preserve my eyesight and made me feel more comfortable.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I like the smell of ink on the paper and I think reading on paper will preserve my eyesight and make me feel more comfortable.

句中 'made me feel more comfortable' 用了过去时，与前面的将来时/一般现在时不一致，应使用动词原形或将来形式 'make'（因为前面用 will preserve，后面并列应为 make），或改为 'makes me feel'。建议保持时态一致，注意并列谓语的动词形式。

× When I have an exam, I need to read carefully because I need to understand the exact meanings of the questions to avoid to making mistakes.

✓ When I have an exam, I need to read carefully because I need to understand the exact meanings of the questions to avoid making mistakes.

短语 'avoid to making' 是错误结构。动词 avoid 后应接动名词（-ing），正确为 'avoid making mistakes'。建议记住某些动词（如 avoid, consider, enjoy）后面接动名词。

× But when I browsing a book I scan the pages and don't read the details.

✓ But when I'm browsing a book, I scan the pages and don't read the details.

原句缺少正确的助动词，主语 'I' 与动词 'browsing' 应构成进行时 'I'm browsing' 或 'I browse'。根据句意表示正在做的动作，应使用现在进行时 'I'm browsing'。此外在从句末尾要在主句前加逗号以分隔从句和主句。建议在描述正在进行的动作时使用 be + -ing 结构，并注意标点。

× I prefer detailed reading because it helps me really understand what happens and how the characters feel.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because it helps me really understand what happens and how the characters feel.

该句本身语法正确，无需修改。保持一般现在时表述偏好和普遍情况是恰当的。解释（中文）：句子使用一般现在时来表达习惯性或普遍真理，时态正确，结构清晰。