阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh), and give one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Keep it under five sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially fiction and books about psychology. For example, I recently read a novel that explored memory and behaviour, which helped me learn new words and think more clearly. I usually read in the evening before bed because it helps me relax.

建議: Organise your answer with a clear topic sentence then explain reasons with linking words. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and replace vague phrases with specific ones.

範例: It depends. If a book is affordable and available in stores, I prefer to buy a paper copy because I like the feel of pages. However, when books are expensive or hard to find, I read PDFs on my tablet to save money and access them quickly.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and use linking words to contrast situations. Reduce hesitation and correct grammar (e.g., 'research' plural, 'in my language I don't read as carefully'). Provide a concise reason for each case.

範例: I read carefully when the material is technical or in English because I need to understand precise terms and improve my language skills. In contrast, I skim texts in my native language when they are informal or not important, since I can grasp the main idea quickly.

建議: Answer directly, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and filler words. Make grammar natural and concise.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand every word and apply the information in real life. For instance, when I study research papers I take notes and re-read difficult sections so I can use the ideas later.

× Absolutely yes.

✓ Absolutely.

'Absolutely yes' is unnatural; 'yes' is redundant after 'absolutely'. Use 'Absolutely' alone as an emphatic affirmative. Keep responses concise in spoken English.

× Especially fiction and psychological books.

✓ I especially like fiction and psychology books.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'I especially like' makes it a complete sentence. Also 'psychological books' is awkward; use 'psychology books' to refer to books about the subject.

× reading books helps me to expand my vocabulary and, uh, think clearly.

✓ Reading books helps me expand my vocabulary and think more clearly.

The original is mostly correct but awkward: 'helps me to expand' is acceptable but 'helps me expand' is more natural. Add 'more' before 'clearly' to improve clarity.

× And I like reading them in the, uh, evening before going to bed.

✓ And I like reading them in the evening before going to bed.

The phrase 'the evening' requires removal of the extra comma and filler 'uh'. Use 'in the evening' to indicate habitual time.

× It depends, if the book is affordable and available to buy, I will buy it.

✓ It depends; if the book is affordable and available, I will buy it.

Use a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses. 'Available to buy' is redundant; 'available' implies can be bought. Tense and modal usage are fine but punctuation and redundancy should be fixed.

× But where in my country some books is very expensive and in this way I just choose reading it on PDF.

✓ But in my country some books are very expensive, so I choose to read them as PDFs.

Use 'are' (plural) instead of 'is'. 'Choose reading it' is incorrect; use 'choose to read them'. 'PDF' should be plural 'PDFs' or 'as PDFs'. Use 'so' to show result instead of 'in this way'.

× Generally speaking, uh, when I read scientific researches and articles or I need to read uh, in English, I try to read it carefully and to understand every word, uh, and, but in my language, when I reach in my language, I uh, wouldn't read carefully.

✓ Generally speaking, when I read scientific research and articles, or when I need to read in English, I try to read carefully and understand every word; but in my own language I usually do not read so carefully.

Multiple issues: 'scientific researches' should be 'scientific research' (uncountable) or 'research studies'. Remove filler 'uh'. Replace 'I need to read in English' with 'when I need to read in English'. Use consistent pronouns: 'read it carefully' -> 'read carefully'. 'Wouldn't read' is inappropriate; 'usually do not read so carefully' matches habitual meaning.

× Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

✓ Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?

This question sentence is fine; no correction needed. Included here to indicate no changes per instruction to only correct listed types. (Returned unchanged.)

× Detailed reading for sure.

✓ I prefer detailed reading, for sure.

As a standalone reply, add 'I prefer' to make a full sentence. 'For sure' is conversational; placing it after the statement is natural.

× It's so because it's important for me to understand every word, uh, and in on the paper, and they get the meaning and the uh, to use it in real life because, uh, knowledge without consuming it is not knowledge.

✓ It's because it's important for me to understand every word on the page, to get the meaning and use it in real life, because knowledge that is not applied is not real knowledge.

Multiple errors: 'It's so because' -> 'It's because'. 'in on the paper' is wrong preposition; use 'on the page' or 'on paper'. 'They get the meaning' is vague; use 'to get the meaning'. 'Knowledge without consuming it is not knowledge' is awkward; better: 'knowledge that is not applied is not real knowledge.' Remove filler 'uh' and streamline sentence.