阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be direct, correct grammar, and give concise reasons with specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms.

範例: No, I don't enjoy reading. When I read for long periods I get sleepy and lose focus, so I usually prefer watching videos or listening to podcasts instead. For example, I often learn about history from documentary podcasts because they hold my attention better.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, support it with specific reasons, and use linking words for coherence. Correct collocations (read on paper/screen) and avoid vague phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because paper feels easier on my eyes and does not cause headaches. Moreover, reading printed books helps my posture because I'm less tempted to stare at devices for long periods.

建議: Answer directly and give a clear distinction with examples. Use linking words like 'however' or 'on the other hand' to contrast careful and casual reading. Avoid hesitations and repeat words.

範例: We should read carefully when the information affects safety or official procedures, for example, instructions for medicine or work regulations. However, I skim casually when the content is informal, such as social media posts or short news headlines.

建議: Start with a clear preference sentence, then contrast with when you use the other method. Use linking words ('but', 'however', 'when') and provide a brief concrete example of each method in use. Reduce fillers and repetition.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand complex ideas, for instance when studying a textbook. However, when I need information quickly, such as checking a news article or finding a date in an email, I use scanning to save time.

× No, I don't like reading because whenever I start to read I feel sleepy and and boring because I'm not interesting in the reading.

✓ No, I don't like reading because whenever I start to read I feel sleepy and bored because I'm not interested in reading.

Pronoun and adjective errors: 'boring' describes something that causes boredom, but the student means they feel 'bored' (a feeling). 'I'm not interesting in the reading' is incorrect: use the adjective 'interested' and omit the article before 'reading'. Also remove the duplicated 'and'. Suggestion: use 'bored' for feelings and 'interested in' + noun/verb-ing to show interest. Grammar_problem_type_id':12},{'grammar_problem_type':'Singular and plural issue','problem_sentence':'I prefer other thing rather than the doing reading the books.','correction':'I prefer other things rather than reading books.','explanation':'Use plural 'things' when speaking generally, and use the gerund 'reading' without extra auxiliaries. Remove 'the' before 'books' when speaking in general. Suggestion: say "prefer other things to reading books" or "prefer other activities to reading books." Grammar_problem_type_id':1},{'grammar_problem_type':'Incorrect use of articles','problem_sentence':'Most of the time when I have to read, I mostly prefer the reading to do on the paper because I feel that the IT is a good and to read on the paper it will be not affect our eyesight or there will be any not any health problem While reading on the screen.','correction':'Most of the time when I have to read, I prefer reading on paper because I feel that it is better and reading on paper will not affect our eyesight or cause health problems, while reading on a screen may cause headaches, posture issues, and eye strain.','explanation':'Multiple article and word-choice errors: remove unnecessary 'the' before 'reading' and 'paper'; use 'reading on paper' not 'on the paper'; "the IT is a good" is incorrect and unclear—use "it is better". Use plural 'problems' and consistent terms: "eye strain" or "eyesight". Also separate contrasting clause with "while". Suggestion: simplify phrases, use correct articles (a/an/the) and noncount nouns properly. Grammar_problem_type_id':22},{'grammar_problem_type':'Sentence structure errors','problem_sentence':'It may cause many health issues related to headache, posture and the eyesight.','correction':'It may cause many health issues related to headaches, posture, and eyesight.','explanation':'Parallel structure and article use: use plural 'headaches' to match 'issues', remove 'the' before 'eyesight', and keep items parallel. Suggestion: list items in the same grammatical form. Grammar_problem_type_id':26},{'grammar_problem_type':'Present tense issue','problem_sentence':'I think so we should read carefully when there is any instruction related to any, uh, any important thing, that time we should read the read that instruction.','correction':'I think we should read carefully when there are any instructions related to important matters; at that time we should read the instructions carefully.','explanation':'Tense and number: use 'there are' for plural 'instructions' and plural nouns for general statements. Remove filler words and correct word order: 'read the read that instruction' is redundant. Suggestion: use clear, concise phrasing and correct subject-verb agreement. Grammar_problem_type_id':6},{'grammar_problem_type':'Incorrect use of adverbs','problem_sentence':'We are very carefully, but whenever there is anything which is not important to me, I feel that it is not important.','correction':'We must be very careful, but if something is not important to me, I feel I can skip it.','explanation':'Use the adjective 'careful' after 'be' rather than the adverb 'carefully'. Also tighten repetition and improve modality: 'we are very careful' should be 'we must be very careful' or 'we should be very careful'. Suggestion: use 'careful' for state descriptions and 'carefully' for actions. Grammar_problem_type_id':20},{'grammar_problem_type':'Sentence without a verb','problem_sentence':'So at that time, I feel that I should skip that. I, uh.','correction':'So at that time, I feel that I should skip it.','explanation':'Use an object pronoun 'it' rather than 'that' at the sentence end; remove trailing filler 'I, uh.' which leaves the sentence incomplete. Suggestion: finish sentences with a clear verb and object. Grammar_problem_type_id':23},{'grammar_problem_type':'Third person singular issue','problem_sentence':'I prefer detailed reading but sometime whenever I have to do any reading in the fast way, so at that time I feel that I should try the scanning.','correction':'I prefer detailed reading, but sometimes when I have to read quickly, I try scanning.','explanation':'Use 'sometimes' (adverb) and correct verb forms: 'when I have to read quickly' instead of 'do any reading in the fast way'. Use 'try scanning' rather than 'try the scanning'. Suggestion: use adverbs like 'quickly' and concise verbs. Grammar_problem_type_id':2},{'grammar_problem_type':'Verb + -ing form','problem_sentence':'But most of the time I do the detailed reading by by explaining that each line uh, because I feel that it is more easy to me to understand that really.','correction':'But most of the time I do detailed reading by going through each line because I feel that it is easier for me to understand.','explanation':'Gerund and verb choice: 'explaining that each line' is incorrect; use 'going through each line' or 'reading each line carefully'. Use 'easier for me' not 'more easy to me'. Remove duplicated 'by'. Suggestion: use correct -ing forms for actions and common collocations like 'easier for me'. Grammar_problem_type_id':8}]} (Note: single quotes used inside JSON strings where required)