阅读— Part 1 評分報告
對話
Part 1
考官
Do you like reading?
考生
Yes, I like reading a special before I go to bed. I usually read a story which is interesting topic and I think which is can help me uh, stay concentrate on this interesting, uh, story and I can feel relaxed after busy day.
考官
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
考生
I prefer reading on paper because I can highlight and underline key points, and I like being able to write notes in the margins. I usually read the story books on paper because holding a physical book feels more immersive and helps me remember the story.
考官
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
考生
I need to read carefully when I want to get some information, important information, for example, uh, instruction. I usually follow the instruction before I, uh, use that, uh, like, uh, table or table or computer, so.
考官
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
考生
I usually prefer scanning because I want to get the general outline of story. Let's help me, uh, understand better to this story and I can also I can know what is the main point of this book.
評估
總分
Part 1
Do you like reading?
分數: 65.0建議: 简短回答要直接并且结构清晰。注意语法（冠词、时态、词序）和口语停顿过多的问题；减少填充词（如 uh）。回答可用一到两句话给出观点，再用一到两句具体说明阅读的类型和原因，保持总句数不超过5句。
範例: Yes, I enjoy reading before bed. I usually choose short, interesting stories because they help me relax and stay focused after a busy day.
Do you prefer to read on paper or on a screen?
分數: 85.0建議: 回答清晰且具体，語言流暢度良好。可以稍微精简以避免重复（例如不必两次說喜歡紙質書），并尽量用連接詞使句子更自然。注意句子长度控制在5句內。
範例: I prefer reading on paper because I can highlight and jot notes in the margins. Holding a physical book also feels more immersive and helps me remember details better.
When do you need to read carefully, and when not?
分數: 60.0建議: 回答要更有條理並使用準確詞彙。避免重複和語音停頓，具體說明何種情況需要仔細閱讀並舉例（如使用設備、藥品說明）。可用一兩句概括主旨，再補充一兩句具體例子。
範例: I need to read carefully when I’m looking for important information, such as instructions. For example, I always read the user manual before assembling furniture or using a new computer to avoid mistakes.
Do you prefer scanning or detailed reading?
分數: 70.0建議: 表達要更自然並修正語法錯誤。說明偏好時可先給出直接答案，接著用一兩句具體理由，避免口頭禪和重複。可補充一個例子說明何時會選擇精讀。
範例: I usually prefer scanning because it helps me get the general outline and identify the main points quickly. However, I will read in detail when the text is difficult or when I need to fully understand a specific chapter.
文法
× Yes, I like reading a special before I go to bed.
✓ Yes, I like reading a short story before I go to bed.
原句中“a special”词不符常用表达，且影响句子语义。此处意图应为“short story（短篇故事）”。并非现在分词错误本身，但按题给列表最接近的是“10: Verb in the present participle form”。建议使用常见搭配“reading a short story”。
× I usually read a story which is interesting topic and I think which is can help me uh, stay concentrate on this interesting, uh, story and I can feel relaxed after busy day.
✓ I usually read a story with an interesting topic, and I think it can help me stay concentrated on the story, and I can feel relaxed after a busy day.
句中有多个问题：1) “which is interesting topic”结构错误，应用介词短语“with an interesting topic”或“which has an interesting topic”；2) “which is can help me”混用关系代词和情态/谓语，改为“it can help me”；3) “stay concentrate”应为“stay concentrated”或“concentrate”（形容词/动词形式错误）；4) “after busy day”缺冠词，改为“after a busy day”。这些问题对应“10: Verb in the present participle form”和“17: Incorrect use of the definite article/22: Article errors”，综合归类为句子结构和动词形式错误。建议多注意关系从句的主语和谓语对应、形容词与副词的选择与冠词使用。
× I prefer reading on paper because I can highlight and underline key points, and I like being able to write notes in the margins.
✓ I prefer reading on paper because I can highlight and underline key points, and I like being able to write notes in the margins.
该句实际上语法正确，无需改动。保留原句。提示：‘in the margins’与‘key points’均为正确搭配。这里归类为12/22以说明无错误。
× I usually read the story books on paper because holding a physical book feels more immersive and helps me remember the story.
✓ I usually read story books on paper because holding a physical book feels more immersive and helps me remember the story.
原句中“the story books”中的定冠词不必要，改为复数可去掉“the”。句子结构和时态均正确。归类为26/22。建议注意名词前冠词的使用，泛指复数名词通常不用定冠词。
× I need to read carefully when I want to get some information, important information, for example, uh, instruction.
✓ I need to read carefully when I want to get some information, important information, for example, instructions.
“instruction”此处应为可数复数“instructions”（指示/使用说明），并且短语中重复可简化。问题涉及名词的单复数和词形选择，对应1/22。建议确认可数名词是否需要复数或冠词。
× I usually follow the instruction before I, uh, use that, uh, like, uh, table or table or computer, so.
✓ I usually follow the instructions before I use, for example, a table or a computer.
原句乱序且重复“table”，缺冠词或复数形式。改为“follow the instructions before I use, for example, a table or a computer.” 注意“instructions”使用定冠词或复数，列举物品时每项前可用不定冠词。归类为26/11/22。建议理顺句子，去掉重复并正确使用冠词。
× I usually prefer scanning because I want to get the general outline of story.
✓ I usually prefer scanning because I want to get the general outline of the story.
名词前缺定冠词“the”，应为“the story”。归类为22/26。建议注意表示特定事物时使用定冠词。
× Let's help me, uh, understand better to this story and I can also I can know what is the main point of this book.
✓ It helps me understand the story better, and I can also know the main point of the book.
原句中“Let's help me”错误且不合上下文；“understand better to this story”中介词“to”多余，且重复“I can also I can”冗余。改为“It helps me understand the story better, and I can also know the main point of the book.” 归类为26/20。建议注意固定搭配（help sb do sth），避免冗余和多余介词。
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