阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details. Avoid redundant phrases and correct collocations (e.g., 'passion for reading', 'favorite leisure activity'). Use linking words briefly if needed.

範例: Yes, I have a passion for reading. I read regularly in my free time, especially fiction and personal-development books, because they help me relax and learn new ideas.

建議: Provide a direct preference sentence and a clear reason with concise linking words. Fix small errors ('during the day', 'at night'). Keep to two or three sentences maximum.

範例: I don't have a strong preference because I do both, but I usually read on paper during the day because of comfort, and on a screen at night for convenience.

建議: Clarify meaning and use correct grammar. Begin with a clear topic sentence answering both parts, then give specific examples (e.g., mystery or technical texts require careful reading; simple narratives can be skimmed). Avoid unclear phrases like 'logical 1' and 'if ever'.

範例: I read carefully when a book contains important clues or complex ideas, such as a mystery or a technical text, because missing details matters. I skim when the text is simple or purely descriptive and there are no surprises that affect the ending.

建議: Answer directly and explain reasons clearly with correct word choice. Replace unclear words like 'cunning' and 'logical one' with 'skim' or 'analytical texts'. Limit to two sentences and give a brief consequence or plan to improve.

範例: I prefer scanning or skimming because I learned to read quickly when I was young, which helps me cover more material but makes remembering details harder. To improve, I try to slow down for important or analytical texts so I don't miss key points.

× Yes, I have a passion in reading.

✓ Yes, I have a passion for reading.

Use 'passion for' not 'passion in'. Change preposition to 'for' because certain nouns collocate with specific prepositions; 'passion' is followed by 'for' when indicating what one is passionate about.

× It is one of my favorite leisure activity if boredom strikes.

✓ It is one of my favorite leisure activities when boredom strikes.

Subject 'one of my favorite' requires a plural noun 'activities'. Also use 'when' instead of 'if' for general situations and add 's' to 'activity' to match 'one of the...'.

× I read a lot of books in different genres such as fiction, romance and self reflection or personal growth.

✓ I read a lot of books in different genres such as fiction, romance and self-reflection or personal growth.

Use a hyphen in the compound noun 'self-reflection' and include the article pattern consistency. Hyphen clarifies that 'self-reflection' is a compound noun used as a genre label.

× It's difficult to choose because I do both, but I will give a precise explanation on how I do it.

✓ It's difficult to choose because I do both, but I'll give a precise explanation of how I do it.

Use contraction 'I'll' for consistency with spoken style (optional) and use preposition 'of' not 'on' with 'explanation'. 'Explanation of' is the correct collocation.

× So I read on paper when on daytime and I read on screen when in night time.

✓ So I read on paper during the daytime and I read on a screen at night.

Use 'during the daytime' and 'at night' for correct time expressions. Also 'on a screen' is more natural than 'on screen' in this context.

× I will read carefully if the book that I was reading is getting intense and getting a hint, especially if it's a logical 1.

✓ I read carefully when the book I'm reading becomes intense or gives hints, especially if it's a logical one.

Use present simple for habitual actions ('I read carefully when...') and present continuous reduced to present simple for 'becomes'. Replace 'was reading' with 'I'm reading' to match time, use 'gives hints' for clarity, and change 'logical 1' to 'logical one'.

× And I will not read carefully if ever.

✓ And I won't read carefully otherwise.

'If ever' is awkward and nonstandard here; use 'otherwise' to express the contrasting condition. Use contraction 'won't' for spoken style.

× There is no main idea or no plot twist, just a few information that will not help on the end of the book.

✓ There is no main idea or plot twist, just a few pieces of information that will not help at the end of the book.

'Information' is uncountable, so use 'a few pieces of information' to pluralize correctly. Use 'at the end of the book' for correct preposition and remove redundant 'no' before 'plot twist'.

× I more prefer scanning because of how I grew up.

✓ I prefer scanning more because of how I grew up.

Place 'more' after the verb 'prefer' or use 'I much prefer' for emphasis. 'Prefer' already requires the object directly; correct word order is 'prefer X more'.

× My foundation in terms of reading is just to use cunning and that is also a bad factor because I wanted to have a good memory of little reading, especially if I am reading a logical one.

✓ My reading habit is based on scanning, which is a bad habit because I want to remember small details, especially when I'm reading something logical.

Rewrite for clarity: 'foundation in terms of reading' is awkward; 'reading habit' is natural. 'Use cunning' is unclear; 'scanning' fits. Use 'want' instead of 'wanted' to match present habitual desire and 'when I'm reading something logical' is clearer than 'a logical one'.

× But I can't because my mind is focused on scanning.

✓ But I can't remember them because my mind is focused on scanning.

Add the object 'remember them' to show what 'can't' refers to; original sentence lacked clarity. This fixes a sentence structure issue by providing the missing verb object.