阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 문장이 자연스럽지 못하고 문법적 오류가 많습니다. 먼저 ‘like’와 ‘I'm’의 조합 오류를 바로잡고, 불필요한 반복과 어색한 표현을 줄이세요. 한 문장에 하나의 핵심 생각을 담고, 연결어(for example, because)를 사용해 이유를 명확히 하세요. 발음과 유창성을 위해 문장을 천천히 명확하게 말하는 연습을 하세요.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy reading. For example, I like comic books because they are easy to understand and help me read quickly. This lets me save time to do other activities.

建議: 의미 전달이 혼란스럽고 불필요한 정보(배터리 관련 이야기 등)가 길게 이어집니다. 질문에 직접 답한 뒤 한두 개의 구체적 이유만 제시하세요. 연결어(because, so, for example)를 사용해 이유를 논리적으로 연결하고, 문법(주어-동사 일치 등)을 고치세요.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it is more comfortable for my eyes. For example, screens strain my weak eyes and paper does not depend on battery power.

建議: 질문에 대한 핵심은 잡았지만 문장 구조와 시제 사용이 불안정합니다. ‘when’에 대한 두 상황을 명확히 구분하고, 각 상황을 주제문 + 이유 형태로 간결하게 말하세요. 연결어(when, because, but)를 정확히 사용해 문장 흐름을 개선하세요.

範例: I need to read very carefully when I take exams because mistakes can affect my grades. However, when I read for fun, I read more casually and do not focus on every detail.

建議: 생각은 전달되지만 표현이 반복적이고 어휘 선택이 부정확합니다. ‘scan’과 ‘detailed reading’을 정확한 용어로 사용하고, 왜 스캐닝을 선호하는지 구체적 이유(시간 절약 등)를 간결하게 말하세요. 예시를 하나 들어서 근거를 보강하세요.

範例: I prefer scanning because detailed reading takes too long and I often have many tasks. For example, when I research articles, I scan headings and summaries to find relevant information quickly.

× Yes, I'm like reading exceptionally.

✓ Yes, I really like reading.

Use of 'I'm like' is incorrect; 'like' should be a verb not an adjective. 'Exceptionally' is an adverb but sounds unnatural here. Correct: 'I really like reading.' Suggestion: use 'really' to modify 'like' and use simple present for habits.

× Funny story like comic book umm comic book is easy to read and understand the best so I can read fast and restore my time so I can do many things for the time.

✓ For example, comic books are easy to read and understand, so I can read quickly and save time to do many other things.

Run-on sentence and awkward phrasing. 'Like' used incorrectly as filler; subject-verb agreement needed: 'comic books are'. 'Read fast' -> 'read quickly'. 'Restore my time' incorrect; use 'save time'. Suggestion: break into shorter clauses and use correct word forms.

× Antique woman see I prefer read on paper because cream is too much disturbed and I don't like disturb and the screen is heart comfort to my eyes because my eyes is very weak I I don't like screen because screen has battery and battery can slow down fast and when I was young I want to read a book for screen but.

✓ Honestly, I prefer to read on paper because the screen disturbs me and is uncomfortable for my eyes, which are very weak. Also, screens need batteries that can run out quickly, so when I was young I could not finish reading on a screen.

Multiple pronoun and noun reference errors and ungrammatical fragments. 'Antique woman see' is unintelligible; replace with 'Honestly' or 'Actually'. 'I prefer read' -> 'I prefer to read'. 'Cream' is wrong word; 'screen' is intended. 'Screen is heart comfort' -> 'uncomfortable for my eyes'. 'My eyes is' -> 'my eyes are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Screen has battery' -> 'screens need batteries'. Suggestion: use clear pronouns and correct verb forms; split into sentences.

× My battery is low so I can read it, so I think paper is better.

✓ My battery was low so I could not read, so I think paper is better.

Tense mismatch: talking about past event ('when I was young'), so use past tense: 'was' and 'could not read' instead of present. Suggestion: keep tense consistent when recounting past experiences.

× Umm, when I do my test, I very, very carefully in the reading because reading test is very important to my major or my major is social work, but there are a lot of writing tests, so.

✓ When I take tests, I read very carefully because the reading test is very important for my major, which is social work, and there are a lot of writing tests.

Use present simple for habitual actions: 'When I take tests'. 'I very, very carefully in the reading' lacks verb and adverb placement; correct to 'I read very carefully'. 'Important to my major' -> 'important for my major'. Suggestion: use complete clauses and correct adverb placement.

× I must be carefully read question to writing down, so I have to carefully read when I was do my test, but just to read a book in the hobby I just read real.

✓ I must read the questions carefully before writing my answers, so I have to read carefully when I take tests, but when I read a book as a hobby I just read for pleasure.

Incorrect prepositions and word order: 'carefully read question to writing down' -> 'read the questions carefully before writing'. 'When I was do my test' -> 'when I take tests'. 'Read real' -> 'read for pleasure' (correct expression). Suggestion: use 'before' for sequence and 'for' to express purpose.

× I prefer scanning because detail reading take a long time but my time is very vanish so I just do reading scanning just to because I want to store my time and the time and I do diverse things so I think my time is very important and so I just.

✓ I prefer scanning because detailed reading takes a long time and my time is limited, so I scan to save time and do many different things.

Article and adjective forms: 'detail reading' -> 'detailed reading'. Subject-verb agreement: 'reading take' -> 'reading takes'. 'My time is very vanish' -> 'my time is limited'. 'Store my time' -> 'save time'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms and idiomatic phrases like 'limited time' and 'save time'.

× It scanning or for example I want to read and writing and more taking a photo from so I want I just rescan you.

✓ For example, if I want to read and write or take photos, I will just scan the material quickly.

Unclear sentence structure and wrong verb forms: 'It scanning' is incorrect; use clause 'I will just scan'. 'read and writing' -> 'read and write'. 'more taking a photo from' unclear; interpret as 'take photos'. Suggestion: use parallel verb forms and clear connectors like 'if' or 'for example'.