阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, correct grammar, and give a clear reason plus one brief example. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid redundancy. Focus on natural phrasing (e.g., 'I'd rather watch movies and read subtitles' and 'only when necessary').

範例: Not really. I usually find reading a bit boring, so I'd rather watch films and read the subtitles. However, I do read when I have to for school or job applications.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence, then give specific conditions and a linking phrase. Correct small grammar issues and avoid short fragmented sentences. Add one concise example to illustrate.

範例: It depends on the situation. When I'm studying in depth I prefer paper because it's easier to highlight and concentrate, but for quick reading or job applications I use my tablet or phone. I switch depending on my mood and convenience.

建議: Provide a clear topic sentence, fix grammar, and use linking words to contrast the two situations. Be specific about the kinds of texts that need careful reading and give a short example.

範例: You should read carefully when the text is important, such as exam questions or instructions, because mistakes can cause problems. In contrast, you don't need to read carefully when you're just scrolling social media or skimming news headlines.

建議: Correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g., ‘detailed reading’ not ‘detailed greeting’), give a clear reason and one concise example. Use linking words to show purpose and keep within 3–4 sentences to sound natural.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand every sentence fully. For example, when I'm preparing for exams or following instructions, detailed reading helps me avoid mistakes.

× No, I don't like reading because it's a bit boring so I'd rather watch a movies and read the subtitles.

✓ No, I don't like reading because it's a bit boring, so I'd rather watch movies and read the subtitles.

Use of the plural count noun 'movies' does not require the indefinite article 'a'. Remove 'a' before the plural noun. Also add a comma before 'so' to link clauses clearly.

× I only read when I have for school or for applying.

✓ I only read when I have to for school or when I'm applying for something.

The sentence is missing the infinitive 'to' after 'have' and lacks clarity about 'applying'. Add 'to' and restructure to 'when I'm applying for something' to make a complete, grammatical clause.

× If I am studying I prefer paper and for quick reading or when I am applying a job I use my tablet or phone.

✓ If I am studying, I prefer paper; for quick reading or when I am applying for a job, I use my tablet or phone.

Add commas for clarity and the correct preposition 'for' before 'a job'. Structure the sentence into two coordinated parts. Also keep 'a job' with preposition 'for'.

× I switch between them. Depends on my mood or situation.

✓ I switch between them; it depends on my mood or the situation.

The fragment 'Depends on my mood or situation' lacks a subject. Add 'it' as the subject and optionally 'the' before 'situation' for natural phrasing.

× You need to read carefully if have an important like have a instruction or exam questions and if if you don't need to read carefully when you when you just when you scroll.

✓ You need to read carefully if there is something important, like an instruction or exam questions, and you don't need to read carefully when you are just scrolling.

The original misses 'there is' to introduce existence and misuses articles: use 'an instruction' not 'a instruction'. Remove duplicate 'if' and add 'are' for progressive 'scrolling'. Reorder phrases for clarity.

× I prefer detailed greeting because I want to read the sentence carefully to fully understand the information, like for example.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I want to read the sentences carefully to fully understand the information, for example.

'Greeting' is the wrong word; the correct noun is 'reading'. Use plural 'sentences' or 'a sentence' depending on meaning. Remove redundant phrase 'like for example' and use just 'for example'.

× For exams or read the instruction, uh through reading helps me.

✓ For exams or when I read the instructions, thorough reading helps me.

The clause is ungrammatical. Use 'when I read the instructions' to mark the time and 'thorough reading' (not 'through') to express careful reading. Reorder to create a clear subject and verb.