阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise, fix grammar errors, and give one clear reason plus a brief example. Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., "self-improvement").

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. My favorite genres are science fiction and self-improvement because sci-fi excites me with imaginative worlds, while self-improvement books give practical tips I can apply to my daily routine.

建議: Answer directly with correct tense and smoother connectors. Remove filler words (uh) and finish the sentence with a specific reason. Use one sentence for preference and one supporting detail using a linking word like "because" or "so".

範例: I used to prefer paper books, but now I usually read on a tablet because it is more convenient and lightweight for travel.

建議: Provide a clear structured response: a topic sentence stating the general rule, then two brief examples (one for careful reading and one for casual reading). Avoid hesitations and complete the second example. Use linking words like "when" and "but" correctly.

範例: It depends on the purpose: when I read academic references for a project, I read very carefully to understand details; but when I read science fiction or picture books, I read more casually for enjoyment.

建議: Give a clear preference first, then explain the exception with correct grammar and linking words. Remove fillers like "mmm" and "hmm," and correct verb forms ("I also read" not "I also reading").

範例: Mostly I prefer scanning to get an overview quickly; however, when I need important information, I read the text very carefully to make sure I understand everything.

× Yes I prefer to read and my favorite genre is sci-fi or self improve self improvement because sci-fi is also make makes me feel excited and self improvement is also.

✓ Yes, I prefer to read, and my favorite genres are sci-fi and self-improvement because sci-fi also makes me feel excited, and self-improvement does too.

This sentence has several issues: subject-verb agreement (makes, not make) and incorrect conjunctions and repetition. 'Genre' should be plural 'genres' because two items are listed. Use 'and' to join items and 'does too' to avoid repeating 'is also'. Add commas for clarity and use the noun form 'self-improvement'. Suggestion: list items in parallel form and ensure verbs agree with singular/plural nouns.

× Previously I prefer to read on paper, but nowadays I usually use uh tablet PC to reading a book because it is really comfortable and.

✓ Previously I preferred to read on paper, but nowadays I usually use a tablet PC to read books because it is really comfortable.

The contrast 'previously' requires past tense 'preferred' instead of present 'prefer'. After 'to' use the base verb 'read', not the gerund 'reading'. Use the article 'a' before 'tablet PC' and plural 'books' for a general statement. Remove filler and trailing conjunction. Suggestion: match tense to time adverbs and use infinitive after 'to'.

× MMM it depends. I when I read some references for my project or assignment, then I read read a book or paper really carefully. But when I read some sci-fi or picture.

✓ It depends. When I read references for my project or an assignment, I read the books or papers very carefully, but when I read sci-fi or picture books I do not.

Sentence fragments and word order problems: remove filler 'I' before 'when', avoid duplicating 'read'. Use articles 'an' before 'assignment' and pluralize 'books or papers' for general statements. The final clause was incomplete ('or picture' -> 'picture books'). Finish the contrast with a complete clause ('I do not' or 'I read them less carefully'). Suggestion: eliminate fillers, ensure complete clauses, and keep parallel structure in contrast.

× Mostly I MMM, scanning a book. Hmm. But when I need some important information from books, I also reading a book very carefully.

✓ Mostly I scan books. But when I need some important information from books, I also read them very carefully.

Incorrect use of continuous/gerund forms: use simple present 'scan' for habitual actions, not 'scanning'. 'I also reading' is wrong; use 'I also read'. Replace 'a book' with 'books' or 'them' for consistency. Remove filler sounds. Suggestion: use simple present for habits and ensure correct verb forms after subjects.