阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid minor grammar errors and redundancy, and keep responses concise (max 4–5 sentences). Add one specific example to make the answer more vivid. Use natural collocations (e.g., 'crime dramas' not 'Crimes dramas').

範例: I don't read very often. Instead, I usually spend my free time listening to indie music or watching crime-drama TV series such as "Broadchurch." Occasionally I do creative writing—jotting short stories or journal entries—to unwind after a busy day.

建議: Begin with a direct preference sentence, then contrast briefly with one clear reason. Avoid overgeneralized claims (e.g., 'harm your eyes')—be precise and balanced. Keep it to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen, such as my phone or tablet, because it's more convenient and lets me carry many books. That said, I also use paper books sometimes because they feel easier on the eyes for long reading sessions.

建議: Answer with a clear topic sentence, then give two contrasting specific situations with brief reasons. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., 'go through books' not 'take books through it'; 'novels' or 'magazines' instead of 'flight books'). Avoid awkward phrasing like 'read very carefully'—use 'study closely' or 'read in detail.'

範例: I read in detail when I'm preparing for exams because I need to understand concepts and review my notes thoroughly. In my free time I don't read closely; I usually skim articles or light novels just for enjoyment.

建議: Give a concise direct answer first, then explain with one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar and phrasing (e.g., 'Even if I have to read a long passage' and 'it is difficult to read all the details'). Use linking words for coherence ('because', 'so'). Avoid repetition of phrases like 'that passage'.

範例: I prefer scanning, because when I face a long passage it's difficult to read all the details. Scanning helps me quickly find the main idea or the specific information I need.

× I usually spend my free time listening to indie music or watching TV series like Crimes dramas.

✓ I usually spend my free time listening to indie music or watching TV series like crime dramas.

The word 'Crimes' is an incorrect form and should be the adjective 'crime' modifying 'dramas'. Use the singular adjective form 'crime' to describe the genre. Suggestion: use 'crime dramas' or 'crime shows'.

× Sometimes I do a bit of creative writing because putting my thoughts on paper will help me relax after a busy day.

✓ Sometimes I do a bit of creative writing because putting my thoughts on paper helps me relax after a busy day.

The use of 'will help' is inappropriate when describing a habitual or general effect; present simple 'helps' should be used to indicate regular outcomes. Suggestion: use present simple for general truths or habitual results.

× I prefer reading on a screen like my phone or tablet because it's more convenient and I can carry many books at once.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen, like on my phone or tablet, because it's more convenient and I can carry many books at once.

Preposition 'on' is needed before 'my phone or tablet' to indicate the medium. Also commas improve clarity. Suggestion: include the preposition 'on' when mentioning devices used as screens.

× However, paper is better for the eyes since screens emit blue light that can strain or harm your eyes.

✓ However, paper is better for the eyes since screens emit blue light that can strain or harm them.

Using 'your eyes' is inconsistent with the speaker's general statement; 'them' is more natural and concise here. Also avoid repetition of 'eyes'. Suggestion: use pronoun 'them' or rephrase to 'strain or harm the eyes'.

× I read very carefully during exam periods because I want to achieve a high score, so I review my notes and take books through it in my free time.

✓ I read very carefully during exam periods because I want to achieve a high score, so I review my notes and go through books in my free time.

The phrase 'take books through it' is incorrect. 'Go through books' is the correct idiom meaning to review books. Also 'review' fits present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'go through' or 'read through' when describing reviewing material.

× At other times I don't read closely.

✓ At other times, I don't read closely.

This sentence only needs a comma after the introductory phrase for correct punctuation and natural rhythm. Suggestion: include a comma after 'At other times' in written English.

× I usually relax and skim article or flight books for enjoyment.

✓ I usually relax and skim articles or light books for enjoyment.

'Article' should be plural 'articles' to match 'skim' and 'books'. 'Flight books' is likely a typo for 'light books' meaning easy reads; if 'flight books' was intended, clarify meaning. Suggestion: use 'articles or light books' or specify the intended noun.

× I would say I prefer scanning because even I have to read a long passage, it would be hard for me to like read all the detail that the information give to me.

✓ I would say I prefer scanning because if I have to read a long passage, it would be hard for me to read all the details that the information gives me.

Multiple structural errors: 'even I have to' should be 'if I have to'; 'to like read' is incorrect—use 'to read'; 'all the detail' should be 'all the details'; 'the information give to me' should be 'the information gives me'. Correct subject-verb agreement and word order. Suggestion: simplify clause structure and ensure correct verb forms and agreement.

× Scanning is more easy for me to find the answer of that passage or the main idea of that passage.

✓ Scanning is easier for me to find the answer to a passage or its main idea.

'More easy' is incorrect; use comparative 'easier'. 'Find the answer of that passage' should be 'find the answer to a passage' and repeat 'that passage' is redundant—use 'its main idea'. Suggestion: use 'easier' and correct preposition 'to' with 'answer'.