阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Start with a direct, natural topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting reasons. Avoid conversational fillers like “by the way” and vague goals such as “be clever.” Use linking words (e.g., although, but, because) to make relations clear.

範例: I don't particularly enjoy reading, but I read every day because I want to improve my knowledge. For example, I usually read short news articles and language-learning materials to build vocabulary.

建議: Answer directly and use correct grammar and vocabulary. Remove filler phrases like “speaking of which.” Be concise and give a clear reason with a linking word (because, as) and correct phrasing (e.g., "on paper rather than on a screen").

範例: I prefer reading on paper rather than on a screen because paper is easier on my eyes. For instance, I find printed books more comfortable for long reading sessions.

建議: Give a direct answer addressing both parts (when careful reading is needed and when it is not). Avoid unnecessary remarks like “you understood it.” Use specific examples and linking words (for example, whereas, while) and correct tense and articles.

範例: I need to read carefully during the school term, especially when studying textbooks or preparing for exams. By contrast, I don't read carefully when I skim short messages or social media posts because they are informal and brief.

建議: Start with a clear topic sentence stating the preference, then give one or two specific reasons. Avoid repetitive phrases and improve grammar (e.g., “I love reading in detail because I like to learn about each character”). Use linking words like because or since to connect idea and examples to illustrate.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy understanding characters' motivations and details of the plot. For example, when I read novels I often re-read chapters to notice small clues and character relationships.

× By the way, I don't like reading, but I do it every day because I want to be clever.

✓ By the way, I don't like reading, but I do it every day because I want to be clever.

No correction needed for grammar types listed. Sentence is grammatically correct: 'don't like reading' and 'do it every day' are correct. Keep as is.

× Speaking of which, I like read on paper more that's on screen because I don't want to have a bad eyes.

✓ Speaking of which, I prefer reading on paper more than on a screen because I don't want to have bad eyes.

Errors: 'like read' should use the gerund 'reading' after 'prefer/like' (Grammar Problem Type 8). 'like...more that's on screen' is incorrect comparative structure; use 'more than on a screen' (Types 26/25). 'a bad eyes' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'bad eyesight' or 'bad eyes' without 'a' (Article/word choice: Type 22/13). Suggestion: use 'prefer reading' or 'prefer to read', 'more than', and 'bad eyesight'.

× Furthermore, I need to read only at summer because I read school books.

✓ Furthermore, I only need to read in the summer because I read school books.

Errors: English uses 'in the summer' for seasons (preposition error: Type 11) and the placement of 'only' is better before the verb or time expression for clarity (word order: Type 20). Also 'need to read only at summer' is unnatural; use 'only need to read in the summer'.

× Anyhow, I don't like reading and you understood it.

✓ Anyhow, I don't like reading, as you understand.

'You understood it' is past tense and mismatches the present context; use 'you understand' (tense error: Type 6/5) or rephrase to 'as you know/understand'. Also 'and you understood it' is awkward conjunction use (Type 16). Suggest using 'as you understand' or 'as you know'.

× In addition to, I love detailed reading because I love read all about every character.

✓ In addition, I love detailed reading because I love reading about every character.

'In addition to' is incorrect here; use 'In addition' (preposition/conjunction error: Type 11/16). 'I love read' should be 'I love reading' (gerund after 'love': Type 8). 'read all about every character' is wordy; 'reading about every character' is natural. Suggest: 'In addition, I enjoy detailed reading because I enjoy reading about every character.'