阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng, nhưng có thể ngắn gọn hơn và mạch lạc hơn bằng cách bắt đầu với một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó dùng một hoặc hai chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Tránh các mệnh đề dài có thể làm giảm tính mạch lạc. Thêm một liên kết chuyển như “because” hoặc “so” để nối ý hợp lý.

範例: I don't read much, because I'm nearsighted and long periods of reading strain my eyes. So I usually use AI text-to-speech tools to listen to articles, which helps me absorb information without reading every word.

建議: Câu trả lời mạch lạc, có câu chủ đề rõ ràng và chi tiết hỗ trợ cụ thể. Để cải thiện hơn nữa, kết hợp các ý bằng liên từ để tránh liệt kê rời rạc và thêm một ví dụ ngắn cụ thể (ví dụ: đọc e-books on the subway) để tăng tính cụ thể.

範例: I prefer reading on a screen because I can adjust the font size for comfort and carry many books on my phone. For example, I often read e-books on the subway, which is much more convenient than carrying physical books.

建議: Ý chính rõ ràng và có đối chiếu (khi cần đọc kỹ và khi không). Tuy nhiên cần chú ý lỗi nhỏ về từ vựng (ví dụ 'scheme through' sai; nên dùng 'skim through') và cấu trúc câu để tránh lặp. Sửa từ không chính xác và dùng liên từ như 'however' để liên kết hai ý tương phản.

範例: I read carefully when studying or preparing for exams because I don't want to miss important details. However, when I'm on social media I usually skim articles, often only reading the headings to get the main idea.

建議: Trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và phù hợp với yêu cầu. Để nâng cao, thêm một liên kết nguyên nhân-kết quả và một ví dụ cụ thể về tình huống học tập để minh họa. Giữ không quá 4–5 câu để đảm bảo tự nhiên và súc tích.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand and remember information better. For example, when I study for a university module I read textbooks carefully and take notes to ensure I grasp complex concepts.

× One reason is that I'm nearsighted, so staring at a page full of text for a long time can make my eyes feel strained.

✓ One reason is that I'm nearsighted, so staring at a page full of text for a long time can make my eyes feel strained.

No correction needed; gerund 'staring' is correctly used after the comma to indicate an action that causes strain. Suggestion: none.

× I often use AI tools to convert text into speech, which allows me to absorb information without having to read every word myself.

✓ I often use AI tools to convert text into speech, which allows me to absorb information without having to read every word myself.

No correction needed; structure 'without having to' is correct. Suggestion: none.

× I can adjust the font size to whatever feels comfortable for me.

✓ I can adjust the font size to whatever feels comfortable for me.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Suggestion: none.

× Another advantage is portability.

✓ Another advantage is portability.

No correction needed; sentence is correct and concise. Suggestion: none.

× I usually read very carefully when I'm studying or preparing for an exam because I don't want to overlook any important information.

✓ I usually read very carefully when I'm studying or preparing for an exam because I don't want to overlook any important information.

No correction needed; present simple and present continuous are correctly used. Suggestion: none.

× On the other hand, when I'm browsing articles on social media, I tend to scheme through them.

✓ On the other hand, when I'm browsing articles on social media, I tend to skim through them.

The verb 'scheme' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'skim', meaning to read quickly to get the main points. Replace 'scheme' with 'skim' to convey the intended meaning.

× In fact, if an article has headings at the beginning of each session, I sometimes only read those headings to get the main idea.

✓ In fact, if an article has headings at the beginning of each section, I sometimes only read those headings to get the main idea.

The word 'session' is incorrect here; the correct word is 'section', which refers to parts of an article. Replace 'session' with 'section' to be precise.

× I prefer detailed reading.

✓ I prefer detailed reading.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct. Suggestion: none.

× Although it takes more time, it helps me understand the content more thoroughly and remember the information for longer.

✓ Although it takes more time, it helps me understand the content more thoroughly and remember the information for longer.

No correction needed; sentence structure and tense are appropriate.

× I especially rely on detailed reading when I'm learning something new or dealing with academic materials.

✓ I especially rely on detailed reading when I'm learning something new or dealing with academic materials.

No correction needed; sentence is grammatically correct.