阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题，并注意语法与词汇选择。避免重复，使用连接词组织细节，具体说明书籍类型和感受。比如把“climb”改为“calm”，将“diving them”改为“diving into them”或“immersing myself”。另外注意时态和单数/复数形式，如“different personal emotions”也应更自然地表达为“different emotions”或“characters’ emotions”。

範例: Yes, I do. Reading helps me relax and calm my mind. I enjoy different kinds of books, and immersing myself in them lets me understand characters’ emotions. For example, last week I read a novel that made me reflect on the meaning of friendship.

建議: 回答要直接并注意词汇与句子结构，避免拼写和搭配错误（如“people”应为“paper”）。使用原因时用连词如“because”并给出具体例子；尽量说清分心的方式并用更自然表达，例如“get distracted by notifications”。

範例: I prefer reading on paper because when I read on a screen I often get distracted by notifications from apps like WeChat. Reading a physical book helps me focus better.

建議: 回答要有清晰的主题句并用具体情境说明何时需要细读与泛读。注意语法（如时态和动词形式）和词汇搭配。用连词连接原因和例子，避免重复。把“function”改为“form”或“short messages/notes”并明确说明为什么不需要仔细阅读。

範例: I need to read carefully when studying technical or skill-based materials, such as English grammar books or computer tutorials, because I need to understand details. However, I don’t read carefully when I’m skimming short notes or messages, since I only need the main points.

建議: 表述要更简洁准确，避免多余重复和错误词汇（如“person emotions”应为“people’s emotions”或“characters’ emotions”；“forgot many pressure”应为“forget my stress/pressure”）。用一两个连贯的句子说明原因并给出具体效果。

範例: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand ideas more deeply and appreciate characters’ emotions. When I get absorbed in a book, I often forget my stress and feel more relaxed.

× Yes I do, I think reading can make me relax and climb.

✓ Yes, I do. I think reading can help me relax and unwind.

句子结构混乱：“make me relax and climb”中“climb”用法不当且语义不通。用“help me relax and unwind”更自然。建议分成两句，首句回答考官问题，第二句说明原因。

× Reading different kinds of books and diving them I can feel different person emotions.

✓ Reading different kinds of books and diving into them, I can feel different people's emotions.

“diving them”缺少介词，应为“diving into them”；“person emotions”应为“people's emotions”表示人的情感，且需所有格。整体用现在分词短语作状语，前面加逗号更清晰。

× Uh, for example last week I read a novel, it chased me idea about friendship.

✓ For example, last week I read a novel; it changed my ideas about friendship.

“chased”用错，正确应为“changed”（过去式已正确使用）；原句为逗号连接两个独立分句，需用分号或分句连接。中文解释：动词选择错误，且句子连接方式不当。

× I prefer read on people because if I read on screen I will divert on other things for WeChat or other different boring things.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because if I read on a screen I get distracted by WeChat or other uninteresting things.

“prefer read”应使用动名词形式“prefer reading”（动词+ -ing问题）；“people”应为“paper”；“divert on other things”错误，应为“get distracted by…”；“different boring things”表达冗余，改为“uninteresting things”。

× For example, if I read some skill books or technology books, for example English or computer books, I will concentrate on better on the better.

✓ For example, if I read some skill or technology books, such as English or computer books, I will concentrate better.

冗余重复（double “for example”），并且“concentrate on better on the better”结构错误，应为“concentrate better”或“concentrate more”。保持时态为一般现在时的条件句（first conditional 不适用）。建议删除重复并简化谓语。

× If I would function or some notes I will not carefully.

✓ If I just need to glance at some notes, I will not read them carefully.

原句结构混乱且词汇错误：“would function”无意义，缺少动词或介词；“I will not carefully”缺少动词补足，应为“not read them carefully”。建议明确主语与谓语，使用“glance at”表达浏览。

× I prefer detailed reading because I think if I do detailed reading I can get knowledge more carefully and I can feel many different person emotions.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I think if I read in detail I can learn more and feel many different people's emotions.

“do detailed reading”可改为“read in detail”更自然；“get knowledge more carefully”搭配不当，改为“learn more”；“person emotions”应为“people's emotions”。保持一般现在时。

× While diving in the book I will forgot many pressure or other things it may make me.

✓ While diving into a book, I forget many pressures and other worries; it helps me relax.

“diving in the book”应为“diving into a book”；“forgot”时态错误，应为一般现在时“forget”以匹配习惯性动作；“many pressure”应为“many pressures”或“pressure”；句尾“it may make me”不完整，意图为“它让我放松”，改为“it helps me relax”。