阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Clarify vocabulary and grammar, make the answer more natural and concise, and add a brief reason. Replace unclear phrase "sale improvement" with correct term (e.g., "self-improvement") and correct grammar ("my favorite type of books is"). Keep answer to 1–2 sentences.

範例: Yes, I really enjoy reading. My favorite type of books is self-improvement because they offer practical tips I can apply in my daily life.

建議: Correct vocabulary and sentence structure, explain briefly why paper is better (comfort, less eye strain). Avoid unclear phrases like "near side" and "scene". Use linking phrase to connect reason.

範例: I prefer reading on paper because it's more comfortable and causes less eye strain; when I read on a screen for a long time I often feel tired.

建議: Fix small grammar errors and unclear wording, and use linking words to contrast the two situations. Replace "pressure" and "get 0 idea" with clearer expressions like "for quick information" or "to get a general idea". Keep answer within 2–3 sentences.

範例: I read carefully when the material is difficult or technical because it requires understanding the details. In contrast, if I'm reading for quick information or to get a general idea, I usually skim and focus on the main points.

建議: Use correct phrasing and provide a concise reason. Replace "detail reading" with "detailed reading" and clarify "dip in understanding" to "deeply understand the content." One clear sentence is enough.

範例: I prefer detailed reading because I like to fully understand the ideas and follow the arguments carefully.

× I really enjoy reading, especially my favorite book type is sale improvement because it can apply in real life.

✓ I really enjoy reading, especially books about sales improvement because they can be applied in real life.

The original sentence misuses nouns and adjectives: 'my favorite book type is sale improvement' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'books' to match general category and the adjective 'sales' (or 'sales-improvement') to describe the topic. Change 'it can apply' to passive 'they can be applied' to show the books' content can be applied. Also use 'they' to agree with the plural 'books'. Suggested improvement: rephrase categories as 'books about X' and ensure subject-verb and pronoun agreement.

× I prefer it on paper because I am near side so when I read on a scene a long time it make me some exhausted.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because I am near-sighted, so when I read on a screen for a long time it makes me somewhat exhausted.

Several errors: 'prefer it on paper' should be 'prefer to read on paper' (correct verb structure). 'near side' is incorrect; the intended meaning is 'near-sighted' (an adjective). 'scene' is a wrong word; use 'screen'. 'a long time' needs 'for' to indicate duration. Subject-verb agreement: 'it make' should be 'it makes' because singular subject 'it' requires third-person singular verb. 'some exhausted' should be 'somewhat exhausted' or 'a bit exhausted' (use adverb 'somewhat'). Suggestions: use correct medical adjective for vision, choose correct nouns 'screen', include 'for' with durations, and match verb forms to subjects.

× When I read difficult or complicated material, I usually read carefully because they require a deeper understanding of details.

✓ When I read difficult or complicated material, I usually read carefully because it requires a deeper understanding of details.

The pronoun 'they' is inconsistent with the singular mass noun 'material', causing a tense/pronoun mismatch. Use 'it requires' to agree in number with 'material'. Also ensure present simple tense 'require(s)' matches the subject. Suggestion: identify whether the noun is singular or plural and match the verb and pronoun accordingly.

× But when I read for pressure or to get 0 idea, I tend to skim the text and focus only on the main point.

✓ But when I read under pressure or to get an overview, I tend to skim the text and focus only on the main points.

'Read for pressure' is unidiomatic; use 'read under pressure'. 'to get 0 idea' appears to be a typo; likely 'to get an idea' or 'an overview'. 'main point' should be plural 'main points' when skimming multiple ideas. Suggestions: use idiomatic prepositional phrase 'under pressure', replace '0' with 'an' and choose 'overview' if you mean general understanding, and pluralize 'main points' if appropriate.

× I prefer detail reading because I tend to dip in understanding.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I tend to delve into understanding.

'Detail reading' is incorrect; the adjective form 'detailed' should modify 'reading'. 'Dip in understanding' is unidiomatic; 'delve into understanding' or 'focus on understanding' conveys the intended meaning. Suggestions: use correct adjective forms and common verbs collocated with 'understanding' such as 'delve into' or 'focus on'.