阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 전반적으로 자연스럽고 간결한 답변입니다. 하지만 답변을 더 설득력 있게 만들려면 주제문 뒤에 구체적 예시나 이유를 하나 더 추가하세요(예: 특정 작가나 작품, 감정적 연관성). 또한 연결 표현을 사용해 문장들을 매끄럽게 연결하세요.

範例: Yes, I enjoy reading. I try to read at least one book every month. My favorite genre is Korean literature because I can easily relate to the characters and cultural themes; for example, I recently read a novel by Han Kang that explored family relationships in a way that felt very familiar to me.

建議: 문장이 몇 개가 단문으로 끊겨 자연스러움이 떨어집니다. 첫 문장에서 이유를 바로 이어서 연결어(so, because, as a result)를 사용해 매끄럽게 이어주고, 마지막 미완성 문장은 제거하거나 완성하세요. 구체적인 장점(예: 검색 기능, adjustable font)을 하나 더 제시하면 좋습니다.

範例: I prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient and efficient; for instance, e-books allow me to adjust the font size and search for key terms, so I can read anytime and anywhere.

建議: 내용은 적절하지만 일부 단어 선택과 문법이 어색합니다('patient' 대신 'patients', 'test reserve'는 부정확). 더 자연스럽게 보이려면 구체적 예시(어떤 정보인지)와 연결어를 사용하세요. 예컨대 업무에서 읽어야 하는 문서 종류와 왜 주의가 필요한지 설명하세요.

範例: I tend to read very carefully at work because I need to extract specific information about patients, their symptoms, and test results; for example, missing a detail in a medical report could affect treatment decisions. In contrast, I usually skim short messages from friends because they are informal and low-stakes.

建議: 아이디어는 명확하지만 표현이 반복적이고 일부 문법이 어색합니다('engaging into'는 부적절). 스캐닝을 선호하는 이유를 더 구체적으로 설명하고, 연결어를 사용해 논리적 흐름을 강화하세요. 또한 스캐닝과 정독의 차이를 간단히 비교하면 좋습니다.

範例: I prefer scanning because I tend to lose concentration during long texts; by quickly identifying key points, I can follow the main plot and stay engaged. However, I still do detailed reading when the material is technical or emotionally important.

× I try to read at least one book every month.

✓ I try to read at least one book every month.

No correction needed; sentence correctly uses present simple to express a habitual action.

× I prefer to read on a screen. Because it is more convenient and effective.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient and effective.

Starting the second clause with 'Because' as a standalone sentence creates a sentence fragment. Combine the clauses with a lowercase 'because' to form one complete sentence that shows cause and effect.

× Also it.

✓ Also, it is more convenient for me.

'Also it.' is a sentence fragment lacking a verb and an object. Provide a complete clause with a verb and clarify the idea; adding a comma after 'Also' helps flow.

× By reading carefully, I can get specific information about patient, symptom and test reserve.

✓ By reading carefully, I can get specific information about the patient, symptoms, and test results.

Countable nouns require appropriate articles and pluralization. 'Patient' should be 'the patient' if referring to a specific patient; 'symptom' should be plural 'symptoms' to match 'specific information about multiple symptoms'; 'test reserve' is unclear and likely meant 'test results' so replace with the correct noun phrase.

× On the other hand, I tend to pay less attention when I read short messages from friends.

✓ On the other hand, I tend to pay less attention when I read short messages from friends.

No correction needed; present simple correctly expresses habitual behavior.

× I prefer scanning. This is because I often lose concentration when I read. By scanning I can be more concentrated and engaging into stories.

✓ I prefer scanning. This is because I often lose concentration when I read. By scanning I can concentrate more and become more engaged in stories.

'Be concentrated' and 'engaging into stories' are incorrect collocations. Use 'concentrate' for the verb form and 'become more engaged in stories' for correct passive/resultative expression; 'engaged in' is the correct preposition.