阅读— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Good direct answer with a clear reason and a relevant example. To improve further, shorten and vary sentence structures, avoid redundancy (e.g., “learn and stay up to date” is repetitive). Add one more specific detail about what you learned from a particular biography to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes, I love reading because it helps me learn new things quickly. For example, when I read the biography of Elon Musk, I learned how persistence and risk-taking shaped his career, which inspired me to be more patient with long-term goals.

建議: The answer is unclear and contains an apparent word choice error (“PayPal” instead of “paper”) and some repetition. Fix vocabulary errors, give a clear direct statement (paper or screen), and provide one concise reason and a brief comparison using linking words.

範例: I usually prefer paper because it is easier on my eyes and I can read for longer without discomfort. In contrast, screens often cause headaches, so I limit my screen reading to short sessions.

建議: Good structure with a clear contrast. Correct minor word-choice and grammar issues (e.g., “skim test” should be “skim text”), and tighten phrasing. Add one specific method you use when reading carefully (e.g., taking notes or highlighting) to show strategy.

範例: I read very carefully when preparing for important events like a job interview, an exam, or a presentation because I need to grasp every detail. By contrast, when I read for pleasure I usually skim the text and skip sections that are less interesting.

建議: Clear and relevant answer with appropriate contrast. Improve by correcting minor grammar (e.g., “I read in detail” and “writer's idea”), and include a brief linking phrase to connect the two reasons. Consider giving a specific example of each type to enrich the response.

範例: It depends on my purpose: I scan texts for pleasure or quick information, but I read in detail when the material is important and I need to understand the writer's ideas. For instance, I skim news articles for general updates, but I study textbooks closely before exams.

× I usually prefer PayPal because it doesn't strain my eyes so I can read for long periods.

✓ I usually prefer paper because it doesn't strain my eyes, so I can read for long periods.

The student wrote 'PayPal' instead of 'paper', likely a typo. 'Paper' is a noun that does not need a definite article here. Also add a comma before 'so' to join clauses correctly. Suggestion: proofread for typos and ensure the intended word is used.'

× However, screen often causes headaches so I can only read on them for a short time.

✓ However, screens often cause headaches, so I can only read on them for a short time.

'Screen' should be plural 'screens' to match the plural pronoun 'them' and to generalize the statement. Also add a comma before 'so'. Suggestion: match singular/plural and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents.'},{

× However, I usually skim test when I'm reading for pleasure.

✓ However, I usually skim texts when I'm reading for pleasure.

'Test' is incorrect; the intended word is 'texts' (plural) meaning written material. Use plural because 'skim' applies to pieces of writing plural in general. Suggestion: choose the correct noun and ensure number matches the intended meaning.'

× I scan passages when I'm reading for pleasure or fun, but I read in details when the material is important and I need to understand the writers idea and specifics.

✓ I scan passages when I'm reading for pleasure or fun, but I read in detail when the material is important and I need to understand the writer's ideas and specifics.

Use 'in detail' (fixed expression) not 'in details'. 'Writer's' needs an apostrophe to show possession and 'ideas' should be plural to match 'specifics'. Suggestion: learn fixed expressions and possessive forms; check noun-verb agreement and pluralization.'