爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer grammatically correct and more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Use linking words like 'also' or 'for example' correctly, and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I have several hobbies. I enjoy DIY projects because they let me be creative, and I also like baking since it helps me relax. For example, last weekend I made chocolate chip cookies while watching a film.

建議: Clarify past habits using correct past tense and simple structure. Give specific activities and a concise reason or example. Avoid unclear phrases and questions to the examiner.

範例: Yes, I did. As a child I often watched cartoons and sketched with my cousins because we liked drawing characters together. For example, we spent many afternoons drawing superheroes and sharing our pictures.

建議: Use consistent tense and natural phrasing. Start with a clear statement that you have a long-term hobby, then give a specific age and brief supporting detail. Remove filler words like 'obviously' and awkward phrasing.

範例: Yes, I have. I have enjoyed baking since I was about ten years old. I learned to make pastries with my cousins, and we used to try new recipes together every weekend.

建議: Answer directly and provide a concise reason with one specific example. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement) and replace unclear phrases like 'heart recipe' with 'secret recipes' or 'family recipes.'

範例: No, I don't. I am the only one in my family who knows how to cook well, so I often prepare family meals. For instance, I cook dinner for everyone on Sundays and use our family's special recipes.

× Yes, I have not only one but I'm also have many hobbies like doing DIY or baking.

✓ Yes, I don't have just one; I also have many hobbies, such as doing DIY and baking.

Original sentence uses incorrect verb forms and repetition ('have not only one' and 'I'm also have'). Use 'don't have just one' or 'I don't have only one' and 'I also have'. Use 'such as' for examples and coordinate nouns with 'and'. Avoid mixing contractions with wrong verb forms.

× Sometimes I spend my time for watching movies.

✓ Sometimes I spend my time watching movies.

When using 'spend time' followed by an activity, use the gerund directly without a preposition: 'spend time watching', not 'spend time for watching'.

× Yes I have, when I was a kid I used to short suck up, watch cartoons and sketching with my cousins for example.

✓ Yes I did. When I was a kid, I used to play, watch cartoons and sketch with my cousins, for example.

Response to 'Did you have' should be 'Yes I did' (past). 'Used to' is correct for past habitual actions but verbs following it should be base form: 'used to play' and 'used to sketch'. 'Short suck up' is unclear; likely meant 'play' or another verb.

× I usually I used to spend my time to my cousins.

✓ I usually used to spend time with my cousins.

Remove the extra 'I'. Use 'used to' plus base verb 'spend'. Use 'spend time with' someone, not 'to'. Also 'usually used to' is redundant; 'used to' already implies habitual past, but 'usually used to' can be simplified to 'used to'.

× Yes, absolutely. Yes it is baking pastry or sweetened food.

✓ Yes, absolutely. It is baking pastries and sweet foods.

Use plural nouns 'pastries' and 'sweet foods' to sound natural. 'Yes it is' is awkward—better 'It is' or 'I enjoy baking pastries and sweet foods' to match the question about a long-term hobby.

× So when I was a kid, obviously is 10 years old, I hooked in on doing the bakery with my cousins.

✓ When I was a kid, around ten years old, I got into baking with my cousins.

Use past tense 'got into' for starting a hobby. 'Obviously is 10 years old' is incorrect tense and word order; use 'around ten years old'. 'Doing the bakery' is unnatural; use 'baking'.

× Uh, no I don't. So in my family I am the only one person who know how to cook, who knows the heart recipe, and I usually spend my time to cook for some meals for my family.

✓ No, I don't. In my family, I am the only person who knows how to cook and knows the secret recipes, and I usually spend my time cooking some meals for my family.

Use 'only person' not 'only one person'. Subject-verb agreement: 'who knows' not 'who know'. 'Heart recipe' is unclear; likely 'secret recipe' or 'special recipes'. Use 'spend my time cooking' rather than 'spend my time to cook'.