爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence naming hobbies, avoid filler words (uh), use correct verb forms and word choice (crocheting, reading). Provide brief supporting detail for one hobby with a linking word. Keep responses under five sentences.

範例: I have three hobbies: crocheting, reading, and swimming. For example, I crochet small blankets and scarves in my free time, which helps me relax. I also enjoy reading novels, especially historical fiction. Additionally, I swim three times a week to stay fit.

建議: Use correct tense and sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence in past tense (I used to swim). Use linking words to add a specific detail (for example, how often or where). Avoid uncertainty phrases like "I'm not sure"—give an approximate time politely (about ten years).

範例: Yes, I used to swim a lot when I was a child. For example, I took lessons at the local pool twice a week and competed in school meets. I continued swimming into my teenage years for about ten years in total.

建議: Answer directly and avoid repetition and fillers. Use a clear present perfect or present simple structure to show continuity (I have been swimming since childhood). Add a concise supporting detail with a linking word (for example, what you gained or how often you practice).

範例: Yes. I have been swimming since I was a child. For instance, swimming taught me discipline and became my main form of exercise, and I still swim several times a week.

建議: Be clear and use correct vocabulary (like 'swim' not 'submit'). Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, my sister also swims). Use linking words (so, because) to explain the situation concisely and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, my sister also swims. Because the pool is near our home, we often go there together and usually swim at the same time so we can practise together.

× It's uh, one of them is croqueting something.

✓ One of them is crocheting.

The student used 'croqueting', which is a misspelling and incorrect form. The verb should be in the gerund form 'crocheting' to name a hobby. Also remove 'something' which is vague. Suggestion: learn correct spelling 'crochet' -> gerund 'crocheting' and use concise phrasing for hobbies.

× And I also like to reading and I, I really enjoyed swimming.

✓ And I also like reading, and I really enjoy swimming.

After 'like' use the gerund form 'reading' (not the infinitive 'to reading'). Also maintain consistent tense: use present simple 'enjoy' to describe current hobbies rather than past 'enjoyed'. Suggestion: use 'like + -ing' for habits and present simple for current preferences.

× When I was a child, I also swimming.

✓ When I was a child, I also swam.

The sentence lacks a finite past-tense verb. Use the simple past 'swam' to describe a past habit. 'I also swimming' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: use subject + past verb for past time references.

× I really enjoyed swimming in my life.

✓ I have really enjoyed swimming in my life.

The student used simple past 'enjoyed' with 'in my life', which suggests an experience up to now; the present perfect 'have enjoyed' is appropriate. Suggestion: use present perfect for life experiences or continuing states.

× I swim for I think more than 10 years, but I'm not sure.

✓ I have been swimming for, I think, more than ten years, but I'm not sure.

To express an activity that began in the past and continues to the present, use the present perfect continuous 'have been swimming' or present perfect 'have swum' plus 'for' + duration. Also restructure fillers and write numbers in words in speech transcripts. Suggestion: use 'have been swimming for...' for ongoing activities.

× Yes, I have, I have uh, had uh hobby, uh, as I said before, I swim uh, when I I swim uh, when I was a child and I know swimming.

✓ Yes, I have had this hobby since childhood. As I said before, I swam when I was a child, and I still know how to swim.

The original is unorganized with tense and repetition errors. 'I have had this hobby since childhood' uses present perfect to show duration. 'I swam when I was a child' is simple past for that period. 'I know swimming' is incorrect; say 'I still know how to swim' or 'I can swim'. Suggestion: break into clear sentences, use present perfect for duration, simple past for past events, and 'know how to' or 'can' for ability.

× Yeah, my sister also like to submit.

✓ Yeah, my sister also likes to swim.

Multiple problems: 'like' needs third person singular 'likes' (subject-verb agreement). 'submit' is incorrect word choice, likely a phonetic error for 'swim'. Also after 'like' use gerund 'swimming' or infinitive 'to swim'; here 'likes to swim' or 'likes swimming' are both correct. Suggestion: use 'likes to swim' and check word choice.

× Uh, we, we go to the same pool, uh, right now, uh, but it's, it's close to our home and we, we try to, uh, try to use this pool in the same time.

✓ We go to the same pool right now because it's close to our home, and we try to use the pool at the same time.

Awkward phrasing and repetition. 'In the same time' is incorrect; use 'at the same time' (preposition error). Also streamline repetitions and choose consistent tense. Suggestion: remove filler words, use 'because' for reason, and use the preposition 'at' with 'the same time'.