爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), correct grammar (listen to music), and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what kind of music you like and when you listen to it.

範例: I don't have a specific hobby, but I enjoy listening to music in my free time. For example, I usually listen to soft jazz or acoustic songs in the evenings to relax after work.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence and complete your supporting details. Avoid grammatical errors (I had a hobby; my friends and I), and finish the thought. Use linking words to explain why it was meaningful.

範例: Yes, when I was a child I enjoyed playing table tennis. It was a great experience because it helped me stay active and taught me teamwork, and my friends and I played almost every weekend.

建議: Start with a direct answer and correct grammar (when I have; I don't have). Reduce repetition and organize with a linking phrase (however). Be specific about continuity: mention a type of music or a memory showing it started in childhood.

範例: No, I don't have a single hobby I've had continuously since childhood. However, I have listened to music since I was young, especially folk songs, and it still relaxes me whenever I have free time.

建議: Answer directly and correct pronoun/grammar errors (she has; listen to music together). Remove fillers and be specific: mention how often you listen together and what you enjoy about it. Use one linking word to connect ideas.

範例: Yes, we share a hobby of listening to music, especially my mother who has a great ear for melody. For instance, we often play music together on weekends and enjoy discussing our favorite songs because it helps us relax and bond.

× I like uh, listening music when I have free time, uh, but unfortunately I don't have such a free time to umm, everyday or usually, uh, do this.

✓ I like listening to music when I have free time, but unfortunately I don't have much free time to do this every day.

The verb 'listen' when followed by an object requires the -ing form with the preposition to: 'listening to music' (verb + -ing form + preposition). Also 'such a free time' is incorrect article/quantifier use; use 'much free time' for uncountable 'time'. Word order 'every day' should be separate and placed naturally at the end. Suggestions: use 'listening to music' and 'much free time' and place 'every day' after the verb phrase.

× Yes, I have hobby.

✓ Yes, I have a hobby.

Countable nouns like 'hobby' require an article in singular form. Use the indefinite article 'a' before singular countable nouns. Suggestion: say 'a hobby' or 'some hobbies' if plural.

× When I was a child I used to play table tennis and it was my hobby.

✓ When I was a child, I used to play table tennis; it was my hobby.

This sentence mainly needs minor punctuation for clarity. 'Used to' expresses past habitual actions correctly. Suggestion: add a comma after the subordinate time clause and use a semicolon or separate sentences for clarity.

× I think it was also great experience for me.

✓ I think it was also a great experience for me.

'Experience' is a countable noun in this context and requires the article 'a'. Suggestion: include 'a' before 'great experience'.

× I and my friends always had such a.

✓ My friends and I always had one.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Start with 'My friends and I' (more natural order) and complete the idea; 'had one' refers back to 'hobby' (or say 'we always had one'). Suggestion: ensure sentences are complete and subject ordering is natural.

× To be honest, I don't have a hobby that I've had since childhood, but when I has, when I have a free time, I always listen to music and it was also in my childhood and for me it's relaxing and I feel great.

✓ To be honest, I don't have a hobby that I've had since childhood, but when I have free time, I always listen to music; it was also like that in my childhood, and for me it's relaxing and makes me feel great.

Errors include 'has' (wrong verb form) and article use 'a free time' (incorrect). 'Has' should be 'have' to match subject 'I'. Use 'free time' without 'a'. Tenses should be consistent: present simple 'I always listen' and past reference 'it was also like that in my childhood'. 'I feel great' is fine but 'makes me feel great' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct present-tense forms and correct article usage.

× I think, uh, yes, uh, because listening to music also is as a hobby, uh, for my family members, uh, especially for my mother, uh, he has a great sense of music and uh, we all sometimes together listen to music and feel comfortable and feel relax.

✓ I think yes, because listening to music is also a hobby for my family members, especially my mother; she has a great sense of music, and we sometimes listen to music together and feel comfortable and relaxed.

Multiple pronoun errors: 'he' is wrong for 'my mother' — use 'she'. 'Listening to music also is as a hobby' is awkward; correct to 'is also a hobby'. Word order 'we all sometimes together listen' should be 'we sometimes listen... together'. 'Feel relax' should be the adjective 'relaxed'. Suggestions: use correct gender pronouns, natural word order, and appropriate adjective forms.