爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Your answer is clear, natural and relevant with good use of reasons and examples. To improve, make sentences more concise, vary vocabulary, and use a linking phrase to join ideas smoothly. Also avoid repeating words like “absolutely” at the start of multiple answers.

範例: Yes, I do. I often play badminton because it keeps me fit and helps me relieve stress. In addition, I enjoy spending time with close friends — for example, we might go shopping or grab coffee and catch up, which helps me relax.

建議: Your response addresses the question but has grammar and clarity issues (tense consistency and awkward phrasing). Be careful with past tense, correct collocations, and give one specific example or memory to enrich the answer. Keep it concise and avoid repetition of opening phrases.

範例: Yes. When I was a child I loved dancing and singing because my family encouraged performances at gatherings. However, as I started working full-time I had less free time, so I rarely practice those hobbies now.

建議: Good direct answer with reasons and examples. To improve, use more natural phrasing (e.g., “keeping in touch with friends” rather than “a hobby of talking”) and add a brief specific example or frequency phrase to make it more vivid.

範例: Yes — keeping in touch with friends is something I’ve enjoyed since childhood. It helps me relax, and we usually catch up once or twice a week, either on the phone or at a cafe.

建議: You answered directly and compared yourself to family, which is good. Improve grammar (use 'more social' without 'a') and be cautious with labeling people as 'introvert' — say 'more introverted'. Add a concise example to illustrate the difference.

範例: Not really. My hobbies are more social — I enjoy attending meetups and group activities. By contrast, my sister and brother are more introverted and prefer quiet family time with their spouses and children.

× When I was a child I like dancing and singing because I enjoyed performing from my family.

✓ When I was a child I liked dancing and singing because I enjoyed performing for my family.

Tense inconsistency: 'When I was a child' sets past time, so 'like' should be past 'liked' (Grammar Problem Type 6). Also preposition 'from my family' is incorrect; use 'for my family' to indicate audience (Grammar Problem Type 11). Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout the sentence and use 'for' to show whom you performed for.

× I like to play badminton in my free time because it keeps me fit and helps me relieve stress.

✓ I like playing badminton in my free time because it keeps me fit and helps me relieve stress.

Style/verb form: After 'like' both infinitive and -ing are possible, but 'like playing' is more natural for habitual activities (Grammar Problem Type 10). Suggestion: Use 'like playing' to emphasize the activity itself; either form is grammatically acceptable though.

× I enjoy spending a whole day with my close friends, for example going shopping or grabbing a coffee and catching up.

✓ I enjoy spending a whole day with my close friends, for example, going shopping or grabbing a coffee and catching up.

Missing comma after 'for example' makes the sentence slightly awkward; punctuation clarifies the introductory phrase (Grammar Problem Type 11). Suggestion: Add a comma after 'for example' for clearer structure. No major grammar error otherwise.

× I have had a hobby of talking with friends since childhood and I still enjoy it today.

✓ I have had the hobby of talking with friends since childhood, and I still enjoy it today.

Article choice: 'a hobby of' is awkward; 'the hobby' is clearer when specifying one hobby that has persisted (Grammar Problem Type 22). Also add a comma before 'and' to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use 'the hobby' or rephrase as 'My hobby of talking with friends has lasted since childhood.'

× My hobbies are a more social, for example I enjoy attending meetups and group activities.

✓ My hobbies are more social; for example, I enjoy attending meetups and group activities.

Incorrect use of article and adjective: 'a more social' is incomplete; 'more social' should modify 'activities' or 'I am more social' (Grammar Problem Type 13). Also punctuation: use semicolon or period before 'for example' and comma after it. Suggestion: Say 'My hobbies are more social' or 'I am more social; for example, I enjoy...' depending on intended meaning.

× Whereas my sister and brother are introvert and they prefer spending time only with the close family like the spouses and children.

✓ Whereas my sister and brother are introverted, and they prefer spending time only with close family, such as spouses and children.

Word choice and form: 'introvert' is a noun; use adjective 'introverted' to describe people (Grammar Problem Type 13). 'the close family' is unnatural; use 'close family' or 'their close family'. 'like the spouses and children' is vague; use 'such as spouses and children'. Suggestion: Use 'introverted' for adjective form and rephrase the family phrase for clarity.