爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid fillers like 'like' and repeated words.

範例: I enjoy playing sports, especially volleyball and basketball. I play them regularly because exercising helps me relax and refresh my mind, which improves my focus for study and work. For example, after a game I feel calmer and more productive.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and support it with specific details. Use correct tense (past) and avoid hesitations and repetition. Mention one or two clear details about how you learned and what you enjoyed.

範例: Yes, I used to enjoy bowling when I was a child. A friend taught me the basic techniques, and I practiced regularly, which helped me improve my accuracy and made the game really fun.

建議: Answer with a clear topic sentence and organize supporting details with linking words. Use correct past time expressions and plural forms, and be specific about how the hobby affected you (skills, relationships, routine).

範例: Yes, I've played baseball since childhood. I started training in sixth grade, and after practice I often felt more focused on my schoolwork. Also, being on the team helped me make many close friends and learn teamwork.

建議: Respond briefly and clearly. Use natural phrasing and correct grammar (articles, pronouns). Provide one specific example of how you enjoy the hobby together using linking words.

範例: Yes, singing is a shared hobby in my family. All of us enjoy going to karaoke on weekends, and singing together is a fun way to bond and relax after a busy week.

× Yes I have especially on the sport such as I always play volleyball and basketball in my country because like when I having a sports and I can feel relaxed and also I can refresh my mind and keep me for focus on the things I'm gonna to do. So I would say I have a sports habit.

✓ Yes, I do, especially sports. I always play volleyball and basketball in my country because when I play sports I feel relaxed, I can refresh my mind, and it helps me focus on the things I am going to do. So I would say I have a habit of doing sports.

Multiple preposition and verb form errors: 'especially on the sport' should be 'especially sports' (no preposition needed). 'when I having a sports' uses wrong tense and preposition; correct is 'when I play sports'. 'keep me for focus' is incorrect use of 'for' and verb form; use 'helps me focus'. Also 'I'm gonna to do' mixes informal 'gonna' with 'to' and is ungrammatical; use 'I am going to do'. Suggestions: remove unnecessary prepositions, use present simple for habitual actions, and use 'help + verb' to express assistance.

× Yes, I have such a like bowling because I have a teammate which is a bowling player now and he told me how to play bowling and I learned lots of, uh, skill on, on him. So I would say like bowling is the, the hobbies when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I used to like bowling because I had a teammate who is a bowling player now and he taught me how to play bowling, and I learned a lot of skills from him. So I would say bowling was one of my hobbies when I was a child.

Tense and verb choice errors: 'I have such a like bowling' should be 'I used to like bowling' or 'I liked bowling' to indicate past preference. 'which is a bowling player now' should be 'who is a bowling player now' (use 'who' for people). 'he told me how to play' is acceptable but 'taught me' is more natural. 'I learned lots of, uh, skill on, on him' is ungrammatical; use 'learned a lot of skills from him'. 'the hobbies when I was a child' should be 'one of my hobbies when I was a child'. Suggestions: use past simple for past habits, choose 'who' for people, and 'learn from' to indicate source of learning.

× Yes, the hobby is baseball because when I was a 6th grade of elementary school students I started to practice baseball and baseball can make me feel focused on my study after the training and also I met a lot of friend in the baseball team.

✓ Yes, my hobby is baseball because when I was in the 6th grade of elementary school I started to practice baseball, and baseball helps me feel focused on my studies after training. I also met a lot of friends on the baseball team.

Singular/plural and article errors: 'a 6th grade of elementary school students' is incorrect; use 'in the 6th grade of elementary school' or 'in sixth grade'. 'make me feel focused on my study' should be 'helps me feel focused on my studies' (plural). 'a lot of friend' should be 'a lot of friends' (plural). Suggestions: use correct noun forms for countability, use 'help' + verb to describe effect, and use 'studies' to refer to academic work generally.

× Yes, I have a same hobby which is like singing because all of my family members, they they can sing well and so did I. So we sometimes we just go to the karaoke to sing together and enjoy the fantastic weekend in my country.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobby, which is singing, because all of my family members can sing well and so can I. Sometimes we go to karaoke to sing together and enjoy a nice weekend.

Pronoun and article issues: 'a same hobby' should be 'the same hobby' (use definite article with 'same'). Repetition 'they they' is redundant. 'so did I' is grammatically past; use 'so can I' to match present ability. 'we sometimes we just go' duplicates subject; use 'Sometimes we go'. 'the karaoke' usually is 'karaoke' or 'the karaoke' depending on dialect; 'go to karaoke' is natural. Suggestions: avoid repeating pronouns, match auxiliary verbs to time (can for present ability), and use 'the' with 'same'.