爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 回答要更自然并且结构清晰。先用一句话直接回答（topic sentence），然后用1–2句补充细节。避免重复填充词（如 uh, I I）并注意时态和单复数（plays → play；Gujen/Guzheng拼写）。可以用连接词（and, because, also）使句子更流畅。

範例: Yes, I have two main hobbies: reading and playing the guzheng. I enjoy reading a variety of books because they help me gain new knowledge and perspectives, and I also attend a guzheng class to improve my musical skills.

建議: 需要用正确的时态和更完整的句子来回答童年经历。开头用过去时的主题句，然后补充具体原因和细节，避免句子未完成或重复。注意语法（When I was young；there didn't）。可用连接词（so, because）链接原因与结果。

範例: When I was young, I loved reading story books. Because I lived in the countryside with few parks or malls, reading was one of the main ways I entertained myself, so I read a lot of fairy tales and adventure stories.

建議: 回答要更精简且语法正确。先明确表示持续的爱好（使用现在完成时），然后说明现在的阅读兴趣与目的。避免冗长和口头语，注意代词和语序（improve myself）。

範例: Yes, reading is a hobby I've had since childhood. Nowadays I mostly read psychology books because they help me understand myself better and improve my personal development.

建議: 回答要更自然并用完整句子描述家庭成员的习惯。开头直接回答，再用具体细节（what she reads, when she reads）并用正确语法和时态（She usually reads after school or after finishing her homework）。

範例: Yes, my daughter also enjoys reading. She often reads story books and fairy tales, usually after school or once she has finished her homework.

× my hobby is reading and uh, plays uh, guzheng in my, in my little time.

✓ My hobby is reading and playing the guzheng in my spare time.

句中並列兩個動名詞時要保持形式一致。原句第一部分用動名詞reading，但第二部分用plays（第三人稱單數動詞），應改為playing（動名詞）以與is並列表示愛好；另外 little time 改為 spare time 更自然。建議練習動名詞與動詞原形、第三人稱形式之間的區別，並使用固定搭配例如“in my spare time”。

× I like reading different kind of books because I think I can get more knowledge from the books

✓ I like reading different kinds of books because I think I can get more knowledge from books.

“different kind of books”數量詞和單複數形式不一致，應為 different kinds of books 或 a different kind of book。此處用複數更合適；後半句中 the books 不必加定冠詞，泛指書籍時用 books。建議練習可數名詞單複數與量詞搭配，以及何時使用定冠詞。

× and also I have have a training class of the Gujen so I can.

✓ Also, I take guzheng lessons, so I can practice.

原句重複 have have，結構不完整且單詞拼寫 Gujen 錯誤（應為 guzheng）；“a training class of the guzheng”表達不自然，改為 take guzheng lessons 更地道；末尾 so I can 之後缺少內容，需補全。建議寫句子時注意完整主謂賓結構並檢查拼寫。

× When I'm young, I like reading books, uh, very much.

✓ When I was young, I liked reading books very much.

時間狀語“when I was young”指過去，主句動詞應用過去時，原句用現在時不一致。應將 am/like 改為 was/liked 以保持時態一致。建議練習在有明確過去時間詞時全部使用過去時。

× I like reading different kind of story books.

✓ I liked reading different kinds of story books.

同樣的可數名詞與數量詞搭配錯誤，應為 different kinds of story books；此外因為談論童年經歷，動詞用過去時 liked。建議注意 kind 的單複數形式和時態一致性。

× Uh, because I live in the countryside, there's don't have so many parks or shopping malls and uh, the only thing I can get is is the.

✓ Because I lived in the countryside, there weren't many parks or shopping malls; the only things I could get were books.

原句存在多處錯誤：1) 時態與時間背景不一致（談過去應用過去時）；2) there's don't have 是錯誤結構，應用 there were not 或 there weren't；3) the only thing I can get is is the. 結尾不完整且重複 is。需要重組句子並補全意思。建議練習 there be 結構的過去式以及主語動詞一致，並確保句子完整。

× Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

✓ Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?

此句本身語法正確，無需更改。保持不變。

× I like reading is the only hobby that I start from childhood and right now I like reading too.

✓ Reading is the only hobby that I started in childhood, and I still like reading now.

原句語序和時態混亂：應將主語 reading 放在句首，並使用過去時 started 來表示從童年開始；right now 與從童年開始的對比需用現在完成或現在時表明持續性，改為 I still like reading now 更清晰。建議練習將主語置於句首並保持時態一致。

× Right now I like reading the some psychological books so I can improve you, I can make myself much better.

✓ Right now I like reading some psychology books so I can improve myself and become a better person.

錯誤包括：1) the some 不正確，應為 some；2) psychological books 改為 more natural 的 psychology books（兩者可用，但這裡用 psychology 更常見）；3) improve you 錯誤代詞，應為 improve myself；4) 句子冗長且不連貫，改為 become a better person 更自然。建議注意限定詞用法（some/the）並正確使用反身代詞。

× My daughter likes reading too. She likes reading different kind of story books and fairy tales.

✓ My daughter likes reading too. She likes reading different kinds of story books and fairy tales.

again “different kind of” 應為 different kinds of，注意可數名詞的複數形式和量詞搭配。建議記住固定搭配 different kinds of + 可數名詞複數。

× She usually reading after school or finished her homework.

✓ She usually reads after school or after finishing her homework.

原句缺少助動詞或主謂不一致：She usually reading 不正確，應為 She usually reads（第三人稱單數現在時）；或用動名詞結構 after finishing her homework。且 or finished her homework 時態不匹配，應統一為現在時或使用完成動名詞。建議練習第三人稱單數現在時變化和完成/動名詞從句的正確用法。