爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be clear, grammatically correct and concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, my main hobby is reading.”). Use correct verb forms and articles, avoid unclear words like “nowhere,” and limit to 2–4 sentences. Add one specific example with a short detail. Use linking words (because, and, for example) correctly.

範例: Yes, my main hobby is reading. I read novels regularly because they expand my horizons and help me see different perspectives. For example, I recently finished a historical novel about World War II that gave me a new understanding of that period.

建議: Answer directly in past tense and be specific. Start with a clear past-topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I used to enjoy reading as a child.”). Use correct tense and vocabulary (“used to,” “as a child”), avoid invented phrases like “fiction snowballs,” and give one concrete detail about what you read and why.

範例: Yes, I used to enjoy reading as a child. I often read fairy tales and adventure stories because they sparked my imagination and helped me learn new words. For example, I loved the Enid Blyton books, which encouraged me to read more every week.

建議: Combine tense accuracy with concise structure. Say clearly that you have had the hobby since childhood and give two supporting details with correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear words like “Nowheres.” Keep to 2–3 sentences and include a current habit to show continuity.

範例: Yes, I have read since I was a child, especially short stories and adventure novels. Reading still sparks my imagination and helps me relax after a busy day, and I usually finish a few books every month.

建議: Use correct pronouns and subject-verb agreement, and answer directly. Begin with a clear statement about similarities and differences. Use linking words (but, however) and provide a short example of shared activities to make it specific.

範例: Yes, I share a hobby with my mother because she also loves reading and we often recommend books to each other. My father, however, prefers watching movies and usually spends his free time on films instead of books.

× I read novels regularly because it's expand my horizons and help me understand different perspectives and I find it relaxing and enjoyable.

✓ I read novels regularly because they expand my horizons and help me understand different perspectives, and I find it relaxing and enjoyable.

The phrase 'it's expand' is incorrect: 'it's' is a contraction of 'it is' which cannot be followed by a base verb 'expand'. The intended subject is 'novels' (plural), so use the plural pronoun 'they' and the plural verb 'expand'. Also add a comma before the conjunction 'and' to connect independent clauses clearly. Grammar problem type ID:10

× For example, I really finished a historical novel that.

✓ For example, I recently finished a historical novel.

The original sentence ends with a dangling 'that' and uses 'really' awkwardly. 'Recently' correctly indicates the time of completion. Removing the stray 'that' fixes the sentence structure and makes the meaning clear. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I will say that when I was child I still enjoy with reading books or even fiction snowballs.

✓ Yes, I would say that when I was a child I still enjoyed reading books and even fiction stories.

The use of 'will say' is inappropriate in this past-reflective context; 'would say' or simply 'I would say' is better. 'When I was child' needs the article 'a'. 'I still enjoy with reading' mixes tenses and prepositions incorrectly: use past tense 'enjoyed' and the verb 'enjoy' does not take 'with'. 'Fiction snowballs' is unclear; likely 'fiction stories' or 'short stories'. Overall tense must be consistent in past narration. Grammar problem type ID:7

× I find that it's still broaden my knowledge and help me to understand the perspectives of the books as well.

✓ I find that it still broadens my knowledge and helps me understand the perspectives in the books as well.

The subject 'it' (referring to reading) requires third-person singular present tense verbs 'broadens' and 'helps'. Remove the unnecessary 'to' before 'understand' and use 'in the books' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:6

× So after the times I still.

✓ So even after all this time, I still do.

Original is incomplete and unclear. 'So after the times I still' lacks an object and verb. Rewriting to 'So even after all this time, I still do' completes the sentence and conveys the intended meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, I love reading since I was a child, especially short stories and adventures.

✓ Yes, I have loved reading since I was a child, especially short stories and adventure tales.

When referring to a state that began in the past and continues to the present, use present perfect 'have loved' rather than simple present 'love'. 'Adventures' as a noun is better expressed as 'adventure tales' or 'adventure stories' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Nowheres I enjoy reading because it sparks my imagination and help me relax after school.

✓ Nowadays I enjoy reading because it sparks my imagination and helps me relax after school.

'Nowheres' is not a correct adverb; 'Nowadays' expresses the intended meaning. 'Help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Grammar problem type ID:20

× I share the same hobby as my mother because he loves reading and often spend time with her favorite books.

✓ I share the same hobby as my mother because she loves reading and often spends time with her favorite books.

Pronoun 'he' is incorrect for 'my mother'; use 'she'. Verb 'spend' must be 'spends' to agree with third-person singular subject 'she'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× My father is different, he prefers watching movies and spend most of his time doing that rather than reading.

✓ My father is different; he prefers watching movies and spends most of his time doing that rather than reading.

Verb 'spend' should be 'spends' to agree with third-person singular subject 'he'. Use a semicolon or period to separate the two independent clauses for proper punctuation; here a semicolon is suggested. Keeping tense present is appropriate because this describes habitual action. Grammar problem type ID:16