爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the response more natural and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Fix grammar (remove extra words, use correct verb forms) and avoid redundancy.

範例: Yes, I play basketball every Saturday with my friends. It helps me stay fit and also improves my social skills and teamwork because we practise passing and tactics together.

建議: Give a clear past-tense reply and complete your supporting details. Use linking words and be specific about what you played and what you gained. Avoid sentence fragments.

範例: Yes, I did. As a child I often played computer games with my school friends, usually for two to three hours after school. Playing together helped us relax and improved my problem-solving and coordination.

建議: Use correct tense and natural phrasing. Start with a concise topic sentence, then explain why you continue the hobby and what specific skills it improves. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

範例: Yes, I still play computer games in my free time after work because I enjoy them. They also help me improve my reaction time and strategic thinking, so I find them both fun and useful.

建議: Combine sentences into a natural, grammatical response. State the relationship and describe the shared hobby with specifics about frequency and benefits. Use linking words to connect ideas.

範例: Yes. My brother and I both enjoy computer games, and we often play together after work. Playing as a team helps us communicate better and improves our cooperative skills in-game.

× We play basketball with my friends because it this is help me to improve my social life and the teamwork.

✓ We play basketball with my friends because it helps me improve my social life and teamwork.

The sentence mixes incorrect pronouns and verb forms. 'It this is help me' is ungrammatical. Use third person singular 'helps' for the subject 'it' and follow with the base verb 'improve' (not 'to improve' after 'helps' is optional but base form is common). Remove the article 'the' before 'teamwork' because 'teamwork' is uncountable here. Suggestion: simplify to 'it helps me improve my social life and teamwork.'

× Yes, I have a hobby with my childhood friends.

✓ Yes, I had a hobby with my childhood friends.

The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense. 'Have' is present; change to 'had' to match the time frame. Also 'a hobby with my childhood friends' is acceptable, but consider 'I used to share a hobby with my childhood friends.' for natural phrasing.

× We play computer games.

✓ We played computer games.

Again the context is childhood (past). Use past tense 'played' instead of present 'play' to match the time frame indicated by the examiner's question.

× We often play after school two to three hours.

✓ We often played after school for two to three hours.

Past context requires 'played'. Also duration expressions need the preposition 'for' before 'two to three hours.' Place 'often' before the verb is acceptable: 'We often played after school for two to three hours.'

× We enjoy playing to improve our.

✓ We enjoyed playing to improve ourselves.

The sentence is incomplete: 'improve our' requires an object. Use the reflexive pronoun 'ourselves' to indicate that the subjects improved themselves. Also use past tense 'enjoyed' to match the childhood context.

× Yes I have. I'm still playing computer games after work because I enjoy it.

✓ Yes, I do. I still play computer games after work because I enjoy them.

For the question 'Do you have a hobby that you've had since childhood?' a natural short answer is 'Yes, I do.' 'I'm still playing' is continuous and acceptable but 'I still play' is simpler. 'Computer games' is plural, so use the plural pronoun 'them' rather than 'it.' Also keep present simple to express habitual action.

× And give me improving my skills.

✓ They also help me improve my skills.

Original fragment lacks a clear subject and verb. 'Give me improving my skills' is ungrammatical. Rephrase to 'They also help me improve my skills' to state that games help skill development. Use present simple 'help' for habitual effect and 'improve' (base form after 'help').

× Yes, I have a brother. We same play a computer games.

✓ Yes, I have a brother. We both play computer games.

'We same play a computer games' is incorrect word order and article use. Use 'both' to indicate shared activity. 'Computer games' is plural, so no 'a' article. Correct: 'We both play computer games.'

× We often play after work together because we improve our skill.

✓ We often play together after work because we improve our skills.

Use present simple 'play' for habitual actions. 'After work together' is better as 'together after work.' 'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to refer generally to abilities. Optionally: 'We often play together after work to improve our skills.' if expressing purpose.

× Gaming and teamwork.

✓ We enjoy gaming and the teamwork it involves.

As written, 'Gaming and teamwork.' is a sentence fragment without a verb. Expand to a full sentence: 'We enjoy gaming and the teamwork it involves.' This makes the relationship clear and completes the thought.