爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence naming 2–3 main hobbies, then give one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid filler words like “such as like”. Use correct verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

範例: I enjoy reading, writing and traveling. For example, I read historical novels every month to learn about different cultures, and traveling helps me relax and discover new places.

建議: Answer directly with past-tense phrasing and give one specific childhood hobby with a brief detail. Correct grammar (use past tense: ‘I liked’ not ‘I have’), avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “making ideal things”.

範例: Yes, I liked reading and drawing as a child. For instance, I used to read picture books every night and spent hours drawing animals and scenes from stories.

建議: Give a full, informative response: name the hobby and explain how long you have done it, using past-to-present continuity. Provide a supporting detail using a linking word to show development or reason.

範例: Yes, I have been reading since I was a child. I started with picture books and, as a result, I still read regularly now because it helps me relax and learn new ideas.

建議: Respond with a clear topic sentence and one specific example of a shared activity. Use a linking word to explain why you enjoy it together and correct small grammar issues (e.g., plural agreement and article use).

範例: Yes, we share several hobbies, especially traveling and watching movies. For example, we often plan weekend trips together because it gives us quality time to relax and watch films in the evenings.

× I have several hobbies such as like reading, writing, listening and also traveling.

✓ I have several hobbies such as reading, writing, listening to music and traveling.

The phrase 'such as like' is redundant; use either 'such as' or 'like'. 'Listening' requires an object (e.g., 'to music') so use 'listening to music'. Use consistent parallel gerund forms for items in a list.

× Traveling also give me a fresh and relaxed mood.

✓ Traveling also gives me a fresh and relaxed mood.

The subject 'Traveling' is singular (a gerund) so the verb must be singular 'gives'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: singular subject with singular verb.

× Yes, I have a hobby for my childhood like reading, shopping, travelling and also making make drawings, making ideal things.

✓ Yes, I had hobbies in my childhood such as reading, shopping, traveling and making drawings and crafts.

The question asked about past hobbies, so use past tense 'had' rather than 'have'. 'For my childhood' is unnatural; use 'in my childhood'. Remove 'making make' (redundant) and replace 'ideal things' with 'crafts' or 'creative projects'. Ensure parallel noun/gerund forms.

× Yes, my hobby.

✓ Yes, I do; I have enjoyed reading since childhood.

The original reply is a fragment lacking a verb and clear meaning. Provide a full sentence that answers the question: use 'Yes, I do' to affirm, then follow with a brief explanation in past/present perfect to show continuity ('have enjoyed reading since childhood').

× Yes, the same hobbies as my family members because my brothers and sisters also like travelling, reading, watching a movie for fun.

✓ Yes, I have the same hobbies as my family because my brothers and sisters also like traveling, reading and watching movies for fun.

The original sentence is awkward: add a verb 'have' after 'Yes' and remove 'members' (unnecessary). Use parallel gerund forms 'traveling, reading and watching movies'. Use plural 'movies' and omit 'for fun' or keep it if desired; keep consistent verb tenses and parallel structure.