爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Improve accuracy, fluency and coherence: give a clear topic sentence, correct pronunciation/word choice, and concise supporting details (max 4–5 short sentences). Use linking words and correct grammar. For example, say that you enjoy painting and reading online news, mention frequency, and give a brief reason or favorite topic to be specific.

範例: Yes, I have a few hobbies. Mainly I enjoy painting, and I often paint landscapes and portraits on weekends. I also read articles on the BBC website almost every day because I like staying informed about world news. These activities help me relax and improve my creativity.

建議: Focus on past tense, clearer structure and concise details. Start with a past-tense topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (what, when, how often, why). Use linking words like 'also' or 'besides' and avoid repetition.

範例: Yes, I did. As a child I loved riding my red bicycle; I rode it every afternoon around my neighborhood. Also, I enjoyed painting and would spend hours drawing with watercolors on weekends.

建議: Answer directly and use present perfect or simple present to show continuity. Be specific about which hobby has lasted and give a brief reason or example to support your answer. Keep it natural and concise (2–3 sentences).

範例: Yes, painting has been a hobby of mine since childhood. I still paint regularly because I find it calming, and I often work on small landscapes or portraits in my free time.

建議: Use correct word order and grammar, and add specific details (when, where, how often). Start with a clear topic sentence and then give brief supporting information, using linking words like 'for example' or 'we usually'.

範例: Yes, my mother and I share a hobby: we like hiking. For example, we go for a morning walk in the nearby mountains almost every day because it helps us exercise and enjoy nature together.

× Yes, I have a homies.

✓ Yes, I have some hobbies.

'Homies' is incorrect for 'hobbies' and 'have a homies' mixes singular article 'a' with plural noun. Use 'some hobbies' for plural countable nouns or 'a hobby' for singular. Improve by matching article/quantifier with noun number.

× It's especially to painting a lot of pictures and also read a book, read a article on the website BBC News.

✓ I especially enjoy painting many pictures and also reading books and articles on the BBC News website.

After verbs like 'enjoy' or expressions of preference we use verb+ing (gerund). 'To painting' is incorrect; use 'painting' or 'to paint' depending on structure. Also maintain parallel structure: 'painting... and reading...' and pluralize 'article' to 'articles' when general. Use correct word order 'BBC News website.'

× So when I was a child in my childhood, I have any hobbies like Rd. bicycle.

✓ When I was a child, I had hobbies like riding a red bicycle.

Talking about the past requires past tense 'had' not 'have'. 'Have any hobbies' is incorrect in this past context. Use gerund 'riding' after 'like'. 'Rd.' is incorrect abbreviation; use 'red'. Remove redundant phrase 'in my childhood.'

× So I have my red bicycle and every day I rode it.

✓ I had a red bicycle and rode it every day.

Maintain past tense consistently: 'had' instead of 'have'. 'Every day I rode it' is fine but natural order is 'I rode it every day.'

× And also I really like liked painting.

✓ And I really liked painting.

Mixing present 'like' with past 'liked' is incorrect. For past habits use past simple 'liked.' Remove duplicate verbs to avoid redundancy.

× So yeah, I think it's maybe painting so and also reading a book.

✓ Yes, I think it's probably painting and also reading books.

Use 'probably' rather than 'maybe' after 'think' for fluency, and avoid filler 'so'. When speaking generally, use present simple 'is' for current preference: 'it's painting.' Use plural 'books' for general reading.

× Oh of course, me and my mom every day prefer to walking in the mountain.

✓ Oh of course, my mom and I prefer walking in the mountains every day.

Subject pronoun 'I' should be used (not 'me') when combined with another subject. Use gerund 'walking' after 'prefer.' 'In the mountain' is incorrect; use plural 'in the mountains' or 'on the mountain.' Place adverb 'every day' after the verb phrase for natural order.

× It's actually morning walk.

✓ It's actually a morning walk.

This countable noun requires an article 'a' before 'morning walk.' Alternatively use 'a morning walk' or 'our morning walk' for specificity.

× So yeah, my mom and me, we have the same hobbies.

✓ So yeah, my mom and I have the same hobbies.

Use subject pronoun 'I' not object 'me' when paired with another subject. Remove the extra comma and redundant 'we' for conciseness.