爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Сформулируйте ответ ясно и грамматически корректно: начните с общей темы, затем добавьте конкретику (как часто, почему). Избегайте повторов и неправильных слов (например, “watch” вместо “wash” или “wash cars” вместо “watch cars”). Используйте связки для плавности (for example, because, so).

範例: Yes, I enjoy washing cars. In my family we own two cars, and I usually wash them twice a week because I find it relaxing and rewarding. For example, I spend about an hour each time cleaning and polishing the exterior.

建議: Исправьте лексику и произношение названий активностей; говорите последовательно: сначала скажите хобби, затем опишите действия и с кем вы это делали. Избегайте заполнителей (uh) и используйте связки (when I was a child, I used to / I would often).

範例: When I was a child, I used to climb trees and build small huts with my friends near my home. We often spent whole afternoons making these little houses by hand and playing games there.

建議: Сформулируйте четко: назовите хобби, укажите длительность и эффект на вас. Уберите повторения, используйте правильные времена и связки (I have done this since, it helps me to). Добавьте конкретику (сколько раз в день, как долго).

範例: Yes, I have kept the habit of doing push-ups since childhood. I do them every morning, usually three sets of 15, and they help me feel relaxed and energetic for the day.

建議: Ответьте структурировано: начните с утвердительного предложения, затем объясните, как часто вы занимаетесь этим вместе, и почему вам это нравится. Избегайте слов-паразитов (uh) и повторов; используйте подходящие фразы (we go fishing together every weekend, it is peaceful because...).

範例: Yes, I share a hobby with my father: we go fishing together every weekend. I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and the chance to relax without noise, and my father likes it because it lets us spend quality time together.

× I have a hobby washing car.

✓ I have a hobby: washing cars.

The noun 'car' should be plural because the activity refers to washing cars in general. Use the gerund phrase 'washing cars' to describe a hobby. Also adding a colon or 'of' improves clarity: 'a hobby: washing cars' or 'a hobby of washing cars'.

× My in my family there are two cars that I really love to watch every.

✓ In my family, there are two cars that I really love to look at every day.

The original sentence has word order and missing/incorrect words: 'My in my family' is incorrect; 'watch every' is incomplete. Replace 'watch' with 'look at' for cars and add 'day' to complete 'every day'. Also add commas and correct word order: 'In my family, there are...'.

× I watch car every week twice I think I love watching cars.

✓ I watch cars twice every week. I think I love watching cars.

Use plural 'cars' and place frequency adverb correctly: 'twice every week' or 'twice a week'. Split into two sentences for clarity. 'I think I love watching cars' is fine after correction.

× when I was a child, I really love, uh, ranking to trees or, or doing, uh, chalice with my friends nearby to my home with keeping time in this chalice or, uh, in small houses that we made by hand in top.

✓ When I was a child, I really loved climbing trees or playing games with my friends near my home, spending time in those games or in small houses that we made by hand on top of trees.

The context is past, so 'love' should be past 'loved'. 'Ranking to trees' likely intended 'climbing trees'. 'Chalice' seems to be wrong; interpreted as 'playing games' or 'challenges'—choose 'playing games'. Prepositions corrected: 'near my home', 'spending time in those games', 'made by hand on top of trees'. Ensure verbs match past tense.

× OK, I have a hobby from my childhood that's I have a sense that's.

✓ OK, I have a hobby from my childhood; I feel that it still remains with me.

The sentence is awkward and ungrammatical. Use present tense 'have' appropriately and express 'I feel that' rather than 'I have a sense that's'. Rephrase for clarity and correct sentence structure.

× Doing push-ups every day Push push-ups give me relaxed and I get.

✓ Doing push-ups every day relaxes me and makes me feel good.

Use the gerund 'Doing' as subject with appropriate singular verb 'relaxes'. 'Give me relaxed' is incorrect; use 'relaxes me' and 'makes me feel good'. Complete the sentence with a proper object/state.

× we are going to fishing, uh, every week.

✓ We go fishing every week.

Use 'go fishing' (verb + gerund) rather than 'going to fishing'. For habitual action use simple present: 'We go fishing every week.' If continuous is intended: 'We are going fishing this week.'

× I love keeping time there, uh, relaxing and there are no songs and there are very peaceful place to relax.

✓ I love spending time there, relaxing; there is no noise and it is a very peaceful place to relax.

'Keeping time' is awkward; use 'spending time'. 'There are no songs' likely means 'no noise' — corrected. 'There are very peaceful place' has article and number errors: use 'it is a very peaceful place' or 'there is a very peaceful place'. Ensure singular/plural agreement and proper articles.

× That's why I really love that hobby and also for my father really love.

✓ That's why I really love that hobby, and my father really loves it too.

Pronoun and verb agreement fixed: 'for my father really love' is ungrammatical. Use subject 'my father' with verb 'loves' (third person singular) and pronoun 'it' to refer back to 'hobby'. Combine into a clear sentence.