爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Javobingizda fikringizni aniq va sodda qilib ifoda qilish kerak. Hozirgi javob grammatik xatolar va chalkash jumlalar bilan berilgan. Avvalo to‘g‘ri mavzu jumlasini ayting (masalan, “Yes, I enjoy listening to music.”), keyin 1–2 qo‘shimcha tafsilot bering (qachon, qanday musiqa, nima uchun). Gaplarni bog‘lash uchun and/so/because kabi bog‘lovchilardan foydalaning. Javob uzunligini 2–4 jumla oralig‘ida saqlang.

範例: Yes, I enjoy listening to music because it improves my mood. I often listen to pop and acoustic songs in the evening to relax after work. This helps me feel calmer and more focused.

建議: Bu javobda vaqtni ifodalash va grammatikani to‘g‘rilash kerak. “When I was a child” boshlangan jumla bilan to‘g‘ri o‘tish qiling va o‘tgan zamonda gapiring. Aniq ma’lumot: kim bilan o‘ynardingiz, qayerda va necha yoshda. Keraksiz to‘xtatishlarni (uh, umm) kamaytiring va gaplarni bog‘lash uchun when/with/so/and ishlating.

範例: When I was a child, my favourite hobby was playing football with my friends. We used to meet on the street near our houses every afternoon and play for hours. Those games helped me stay active and make close friends.

建議: Javobni yanada aniqroq va tartibli qiling. Savol “since childhood” – shuning uchun bolalikdan beri davom etayotgan hobbi bor-yo‘qligini aniq ayting. Agar bor bo‘lsa, “since I was a child” kabi iborani qo‘shing. Mumkin bo‘lgan takrorlarni va “uh”larni olib tashlang va sababini qisqacha tushuntiring.

範例: Yes, I have liked listening to music since I was a child. I usually play soft or upbeat songs in the morning because they lift my mood and help me get ready for the day.

建議: Javob aniq emas va grammatik xatolar bor. Savolga to‘g‘ridan-to‘g‘ri “Yes/No” bilan javob berib, keyin qisqacha sabab bering. Misollar keltiring: qaysi hobbi o‘xshash yoki boshqacha. Soddaroq so‘zlash va grammatik jihatdan to‘g‘ri gaplar tuzing.

範例: No, my hobbies are different from my family’s. While my parents enjoy gardening and cooking, I prefer listening to music and playing sports. We sometimes share hobbies, but mostly we have different interests.

× I thought the years I have hobbies one of my hobbies is listening mood because it's give me a good emotions and if I have birding they I just listen music and I relax.

✓ I have had hobbies for years. One of my hobbies is listening to music because it gives me good emotions, and when I am bored I just listen to music and relax.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure and verb form issues: run-on sentence, incorrect verb tenses and forms (thought the years → have had; listening mood → listening to music), subject-verb agreement (it's give → it gives), wrong word choice (birding → bored), and missing preposition (listening to). Suggestion: break into shorter sentences, use present perfect for duration (have had), use correct noun (music), use 'gives' for third person singular, and 'when I am bored' for the state.

× When I was child, I have forbids and my big hobbies is playing football with my teenagers.

✓ When I was a child, I had friends and my main hobby was playing football with other teenagers.

Errors: missing article (a child), wrong tense and verb (have forbids → had friends), wrong noun (forbids → friends), incorrect adjective (big hobbies → main hobby), subject-verb agreement and tense (is → was). Suggestion: use simple past for past habits (was/had/was), include articles ('a child'), and correct word choice ('friends', 'main hobby').

× And at this time, uh, I go to the street and we have a, our group, football group and uh, we play the football with each other.

✓ At that time, I would go out to the street and we had a football group where we played football with each other.

Errors: tense and aspect inconsistency (go → would go or went), awkward phrasing ('we have a, our group'), article usage ('the football' unnecessary). Suggestion: use past habitual form ('would go' or 'went') or simple past ('we had'), combine ideas fluently ('football group where we played').

× I didn't think about this before, but uh, in my opinion, I have like this Hobbit, uh, for example, I have hobby that is, I'll listen to music in the morning and it's give me the good mood, a good mood, uh, and it's, uh, help me to prepare the new day.

✓ I haven't thought about this before, but in my opinion I have this habit: for example, I have a hobby of listening to music in the morning and it gives me a good mood and helps me prepare for the new day.

Errors: tense mismatch (didn't think before → haven't thought before), wrong words (Hobbit → habit), modal/tense misuse (I'll listen → I listen), subject-verb agreement (it's give → it gives), verb form (it's help → it helps), missing preposition ('prepare for the new day'). Suggestion: use present simple for routines (I listen, it gives, it helps), correct vocabulary ('habit'), and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× I have a number of hobbies, but any of them like my family members and UMM. I have a many kind of interesting hobbies but it's not like others.

✓ I have a number of hobbies, but none of them is the same as my family members'. I have many kinds of interesting hobbies, but they are not like others'.

Errors: incorrect quantifiers and pronouns ('any of them like my family members' should be 'none of them is the same as my family members''), article mistakes ('a many kind' → 'many kinds'), and incorrect possessive form ('others' → others'). Suggestion: use 'none' to express negation, 'many kinds of' to indicate variety, and use possessive for 'family members' and 'others' when comparing.