爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make the answer grammatically correct, concise, and provide a brief reason with a linking word. Avoid filler sounds like “umm.” Use a topic sentence followed by one supporting detail. Also correct verb forms and pronouns.

範例: Yes. I go running at least twice a week because it helps me feel more relaxed and energized.

建議: Give a clear topic sentence, use correct tense and vocabulary, and be specific about what you collected. Remove confusing phrases and use linking words to add a detail or reason.

範例: Yes. I used to collect stamps and small souvenir items from snacks or toys because I enjoyed finding interesting designs and remembering where each one came from.

建議: Start with a direct topic sentence, use correct tenses (past simple for start, present perfect for continuation), and avoid fillers. Use one linking phrase to explain the current situation and add a specific example of what you read.

範例: Yes, I have been reading since I was six. I have continued it into adulthood, although recently I have less time, so I mainly read short novels and articles on my commute.

建議: Answer directly, use correct subject-verb agreement and sentence boundaries. Use linking words to contrast your hobby with your family’s and give a brief specific example about a family member.

範例: No, we don't. I enjoy reading, but my parents don't have many hobbies; my sister, for example, loves watching movies in her free time.

× Yes I do, I'm running at least twice a week.

✓ Yes, I do. I go running at least twice a week.

Original mixes present continuous ('I'm running') with a habitual frequency 'at least twice a week'. Use the simple present for habitual actions: 'I go running' or 'I run' (subject-verb agreement requires 'I run'). Also add a comma after 'Yes' and separate clauses into two sentences for clarity.

× Umm, it's make me feel more relaxed and energized.

✓ Umm, it makes me feel more relaxed and energized.

The contraction 'it's' (it is) requires the verb in third person singular form 'makes', not 'make'. Change 'make' to 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Yes I did. I love to collect the stamps or the cigar from the souvenir and the fee item when I bought a snack or the toys.

✓ Yes, I did. I loved to collect stamps and souvenir cigars, and small free items I got when I bought a snack or toys.

The question asks about childhood, so use past tense 'loved' instead of present 'love'. Remove unnecessary articles ('the stamps' -> 'stamps') and correct 'fee item' to 'free items'. Reorder for natural English: list items with 'and', and use 'got' for past possession.

× Umm, well I would say reading. I start reading since I was six years old and I keep doing it until now.

✓ Umm, well, I would say reading. I started reading when I was six years old and have kept doing it until now.

For an action that began in the past and continues to the present, use the present perfect ('have kept') and past simple to mark the start ('started'). 'Since' should be used with a point in time and paired with present perfect; using 'when' with past simple for start is more natural here.

× But this day I don't have much time to read it but I try to keep this hobby.

✓ But these days I don't have much time to read, but I try to keep this hobby.

Use 'these days' to refer to the current general period. Do not use the object pronoun 'it' after 'read' when referring to reading in general. Maintain parallel structure with commas.

× No we don't my family members have a different hobbies I love reading but my mom and dad they don't do much hobbies and my sisters she love watching movie.

✓ No, we don't. My family members have different hobbies. I love reading, but my mom and dad don't have many hobbies, and my sisters love watching movies.

Multiple issues: run-on sentences need separation into shorter sentences. 'Have a different hobbies' is incorrect: use 'different hobbies' (no 'a'). Use 'don't have' rather than 'they don't do'. 'Many' is the correct quantifier for countable 'hobbies'. Subject-verb agreement: 'my sisters love' (not 'she love'). Use plural 'movies' after 'watching'. Add commas and periods to fix sentence structure.