爱好— Part 1 評分報告

建議: 你的回答主题明确，但有语法错误和冗余表达。注意时态和介词用法（例如 'started learning singing when I was 10' 应为 'started learning to sing when I was 10'，'on my daily basis' 应为 'on a daily basis' 或 'every day'）。回答可以更自然并简洁一点，最多五句；补充一两句具体细节（如参加合唱团、练习时长）会更有说服力。

範例: Yes, I enjoy singing. I started learning to sing when I was ten and practice almost every day for about 30 minutes. I often sing in school choirs and sometimes perform at local events, which helps me improve my confidence.

建議: 回答表达有意思但存在多处语法和用词问题（例如 'particularly into' 应为 'was particularly into' 或 'particularly liked'；'I could set there grabbing a book' 应为 'I could sit there with a book'；'focusing on my word' 不清楚，应为 'focused on the story'）。尽量用连贯句子并用连接词（for example, because）说明原因和感受。

範例: Yes, I was particularly fond of reading when I was a child. I could sit for hours with a book and get completely absorbed in the story, which helped me feel calm and relaxed.

建議: 回答重复且有语法问题（例如 'have started learning singing since I was 10' 应为 'have been learning to sing since I was ten' 或 'I started learning to sing when I was ten'；避免重复信息，控制在五句内）。可以补充具体持续练习的方式和场合，让内容更具体。

範例: Yes, I've been learning to sing since I was ten and I still enjoy it. I usually practice for about 20–30 minutes every evening and sing while doing light chores or warming up before performances.

建議: 回答清晰但可以更自然、更具体。注意搭配和表达（例如 'I'm more like singing or dancing' 应为 'I prefer singing and dancing'）。可以用一两句比较或举例说明差异，增强内容丰富性。

範例: No, my hobbies are different from my family's. They prefer practical activities such as gardening and cooking, while I enjoy performing arts like singing and dancing, so we usually spend our free time in different ways.

× I have started learning singing when I was 10 years old and now I still keep singing on my daily basis.

✓ I started learning to sing when I was 10 years old, and now I still sing every day.

原句中 “have started learning singing when I was 10 years old” 时态和动词形式混用。事件发生在过去，应使用一般过去时（started）；动词搭配上，英语习惯用 learn to do sth 或 learn doing（多数用 learn to do），此处用 “learn to sing”。“keep singing on my daily basis” 用法不自然，应改为 “still sing every day” 或 “sing on a daily basis”。建议：把动词时态与时间状语保持一致，使用固定搭配 learn to do sth，并用常见表达 every day/ on a daily basis。

× Yes, when I was little I particularly into reading books.

✓ Yes, when I was little I was particularly into reading books.

原句缺少系动词 be：短语 be into 表示“喜欢/热衷于”，需要 be 动词。应在 when I was little 后加 was。建议：记住 be into 的结构，注意在过去时使用 was/were。

× I could set there grabbing a book and read for the whole day, just focusing on my word.

✓ I could sit there, grab a book and read for the whole day, just focusing on my world.

原句有多处拼写和结构错误：set there 应为 sit there； grabbing a book 与 read for the whole day 的时态和形式不一致，改为并列动词短语 grab ... and read ...；单词 word 应为 world（可能是想说“我的世界/我的思绪”或“我的词汇”但上下文应为 world 更合适）。建议：检查常见动词和拼写，保持并列结构的一致形式。

× It helped me stay calm.

✓ It helped me to stay calm.

原句语法上也可接受（help 后可接动词原形或 to 不定式），但在正式写作中常用 help to do sth；为与其他修改保持一致，建议使用 help to do。说明：help 后接不带 to 的动词原形也可，但两者皆正确。

× Yes of course, just like what I said, I have started learning singing since I was 10 and I still love singing nowadays.

✓ Yes, of course. As I said, I started learning to sing when I was 10, and I still love singing nowadays.

重复了之前的时态错误：have started ... since 与时间状语 since + 过去时间不搭配，应用一般过去时 started；同样 learn to sing 更自然。建议：注意 since 引导的具体过去时间应与现在完成时连用（例如 'have been learning since I was 10'），若要用一般过去时则改为 'started when I was 10'。

× And now I still keep singing on daily basis whenever I'm doing something that doesn't need many focus.

✓ And now I still sing on a daily basis whenever I'm doing something that doesn't need much focus.

原句问题：keep singing on daily basis 表达不自然，改为 sing on a daily basis；many focus 用法错误，focus 是不可数名词，应该用 much focus 或 better 用 'much concentration' 或 'a lot of concentration'；whenever I'm doing something 表达可接受。建议：注意不可数名词的修饰词（much 而不是 many），以及固定短语 'on a daily basis'。

× No, I don't think I have the same hobbies as my family members.

✓ No, I don't think I have the same hobbies as my family members.

此句语法正确，无需修改。说明：句子结构和时态恰当。

× My family members are more into practical things like gardening or cooking. For me, I'm more like singing or dancing.

✓ My family members are more into practical things like gardening or cooking. As for me, I'm more into singing or dancing.

原句最后一句中的 'I'm more like singing or dancing' 用法不正确。表达喜好应使用 be into 或 prefer，改为 'I'm more into singing or dancing' 或 'I prefer singing or dancing'。建议：使用正确的固定搭配 be into sth 来表达喜欢。