聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words and awkward phrasing like “since especially.” Give a brief reason or example to support your statement. Keep it to 1–2 sentences.

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I’m quite talkative, so I like discussing everyday events and sharing funny stories to stay connected.

建議: Use present tense and reduce fillers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific examples of topics. Use linking words (for example, such as) to make it coherent.

範例: We usually talk about our daily lives and recent updates. For example, as a teacher I often discuss students’ progress, classroom challenges and lesson ideas with my colleagues.

建議: Remove fillers and unclear words (e.g. “machines,” “Alright”). State preference clearly, give specific reasons and an example, and use linking words like because or while to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer chatting in a group because there are more topics and perspectives. For instance, in a group I can switch between conversations about work, hobbies or news, which keeps the discussion interesting.

建議: Good clear preference and reason; improve fluency by removing repetitions and tightening language. Use one concise example of how non-verbal cues help communication.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and body language, which helps you understand feelings better. For example, it’s easier to tell if a student is confused when you speak in person.

建議: Be concise and avoid contradictions (e.g. “always argue” vs “small arguments”). Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific example of the typical disagreement and its outcome. Use linking words like however or for example to clarify.

範例: Yes, we sometimes argue, but usually it’s just small debates about teaching methods. For example, we might disagree on classroom management techniques and then discuss pros and cons to find a better approach.

× I love chatting with my friends since especially I am a very talkative person.

✓ I love chatting with my friends, especially because I am a very talkative person.

The original sentence misuses 'since' and has awkward word order. 'Since' can mean 'because' but sounds formal; 'especially because' clarifies the reason. Also place 'especially' before the clause it modifies. Suggestion: use 'especially because' or simply 'especially' before 'I am'.

× Well, umm, I talked to my friends about our daily lives, uh, the updates, my, uh, work environment about the students since I am a teacher.

✓ Well, umm, I talk to my friends about our daily lives, updates, and my work environment with the students since I am a teacher.

The interview question asks about habitual actions, so present simple 'talk' is appropriate instead of past 'talked'. Also combine items with 'and' and use 'with the students' to show relationship. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual routines and parallel list structure.

× So mainly our conversation focuses on the students.

✓ So mainly our conversations focus on the students.

Mismatch between singular 'conversation' and plural possessive 'our' can be corrected by pluralizing both: 'our conversations' and plural verb 'focus'. Alternatively keep singular: 'So mainly our conversation focuses on the students.' Either is fine; choose consistency. Here plural chosen to match 'we' having multiple conversations.

× Well, for me, I would be uh, prefer to chat with a group of people, machines.

✓ Well, for me, I would prefer to chat with a group of people.

The phrase 'would be prefer' is incorrect; use 'would prefer' or 'prefer'. The word 'machines' seems out of place and likely unintended, so remove it. Suggestion: use 'I prefer' for general preference or 'I would prefer' for hypothetical situations.

× If you're going to chat with your friends, sometimes you lost interest with the topic.

✓ If you chat with just one friend, sometimes you lose interest in the topic.

'Lost' is past tense but the condition is general, so use present 'lose'. Also 'lost interest with' should be 'lose interest in'. 'You're going to chat' implies future; better to use simple present for general statements. Suggestion: use present simple and correct preposition 'in'.

× In comparison when you're going to chat with the a group, Alright, umm, you will have this different topics, different interests that you could join in with every conversation.

✓ In comparison, when you chat with a group, you will have different topics and interests that you can join in on in every conversation.

Remove the extra article 'the a'. Use present simple 'chat' for general situations. 'This different topics' is incorrect; use 'different topics'. Use 'can join in on' or 'join' rather than 'could' for general truth. Also place commas for clarity.

× I would prefer to communicate face to face.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face.

Both 'would prefer' and 'prefer' can be correct; since question asks general preference, present simple 'prefer' is more natural. 'Would prefer' suggests hypothetical. Suggestion: use 'prefer' for habitual preferences.

× The reason is because when you're talking face to face, the way you can see the expressions, the emotions on your on the person that you're talking to, while in comparison with social media, sometimes you read their conversation.

✓ The reason is that when you talk face to face, you can see the expressions and emotions on the person you are talking to, whereas on social media you sometimes only read their messages.

'The reason is because' is redundant; use 'The reason is that'. Use present simple 'talk' for general. Remove repeated 'on' and simplify 'expressions and emotions on the person'. 'In comparison with' is wordy; 'whereas' works better. 'Read their conversation' is vague; 'read their messages' is clearer.

× Of course, yes, I always argue with my friends, but it is just a small arguments like some debates like that, umm, uh, just a disagreement when it comes to opinions about the strategies, the methodologies that uses whenever we're teaching or whenever we're going to deal with our students inside the classroom or more anything else is about the classroom management.

✓ Of course, yes, I always argue with my friends, but they are just small arguments or debates, just disagreements when it comes to opinions about strategies and methodologies we use when we're teaching or dealing with students in the classroom, mostly about classroom management.

Change 'it is just a small arguments' to agree in number: 'they are just small arguments' or rephrase. Use plural 'arguments' and match verb 'are'. 'That uses' incorrectly refers to methodologies; change to 'we use'. Replace 'whenever we're going to deal with' with 'when we're dealing with' and simplify awkward phrases. Use present simple for habitual actions.