聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Make your answer more concise, use correct grammar (avoid repetition and gerund errors), and add one specific example. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words like "uh".

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially on Instagram. For example, we often share updates about our day and discuss plans for studying abroad, which helps us support each other and stay motivated.

建議: Answer directly, correct grammar and reduce hesitation. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and give specific details (subjects, countries, universities) to make your response more informative.

範例: We usually talk about our daily lives and plans for higher education, because we just finished high school. For example, we discuss which universities in the UK or Canada to apply to and which courses, like engineering or business, suit us best.

建議: Give a clear preference with a reason and one supporting example. Avoid vague phrases and fillers. Keep within 3–4 sentences and use linking words such as however or because to clarify your choice.

範例: It depends, but I usually prefer chatting in a group because it feels lively and fun. For instance, when I'm home alone and bored, a group chat on Instagram cheers me up and we share jokes or plan outings.

建議: State your preference clearly, correct article and preposition errors ("an introvert", "online"), and give a brief reason with an example. Use linking words like because or so to connect ideas.

範例: I prefer communicating via social media because I am an introvert and feel more relaxed typing than speaking in person. For example, messaging on Instagram allows me time to think and respond calmly during conversations.

建議: Answer directly and use correct verbs and pronouns. Avoid contradictions ("I awfully argue" then "I don't argue her"). Explain how you handle disagreements with a clear example and linking words like however or although.

範例: I don't usually argue with my friends; instead, I try to give advice when there is a problem. For example, if a friend gossips about others, I calmly tell her that it could hurt people and suggest we focus on supporting each other instead.

× I definitely love chatting with my friends because it's kind of fun to chat with friends and gossiping about like our daily future, the life and about our future careers.

✓ I definitely love chatting with my friends because it's kind of fun to chat with friends and gossip about our daily lives and our future careers.

The verb 'gossip' should be in base form after 'and' when joined with another verb 'to chat' (parallel structure). Also 'daily future' is incorrect; use 'daily lives' and 'about our future careers' should be simplified to 'and our future careers' to match parallelism. Ensure verbs in a coordinated verb phrase have the same form.

× So I love to chat, uh, with my friends, uh, mainly through the online social media of Instagram.

✓ So I love to chat with my friends, mainly through the social media platform Instagram.

Use 'through' with 'social media platform' and not 'the online social media of Instagram.' 'Platform' clarifies the noun; 'online' is redundant when 'social media' is specified. Also remove extra commas for fluency.

× Uh with my friends or we love to chat about our uh daily life and about future career.

✓ With my friends, we love to chat about our daily lives and our future careers.

Sentence lacked clear subject-verb flow and had inconsistent plurality. 'Daily life' should be plural 'daily lives' when referring to multiple people, and 'future career' should be 'future careers.' Rearranged to a clear subject and verb.

× We recently completed our +2 and we are planning for future abroad to study, so we always love to gossip about what we will do in the future.

✓ We recently completed our +2 and we are planning to study abroad in the future, so we always enjoy gossiping about what we will do next.

Use 'planning to study abroad' (infinitive) rather than 'planning for future abroad to study.' 'Gossiping' is correct here as a gerund; replaced 'love to gossip about' with 'enjoy gossiping about' for naturalness and changed 'in the future' placement. Also 'next' avoids repetition.

× What university are we choosing for our UH education?

✓ Which university will we choose for our higher education?

Use 'which' for selecting from options and 'will we choose' fits the future decision context. 'UH' is unclear; expanded to 'higher education.' Pronoun 'we' is fine but tense adjusted to future intent.

× So it really depends, uh, if I'm boring in my home alone.

✓ So it really depends: if I'm bored at home alone,

'Boring' describes something that causes boredom; the speaker should use 'bored' to describe feeling. Use 'at home' rather than 'in my home' for natural phrasing. Colon or conjunction needed to link clauses.

× So I definitely prefer a group of people like umm, noisy and and kind of fun if I'm with my.

✓ So I definitely prefer a group of people who are noisy and kind of fun when I'm with them.

Adjectives should describe 'people' with a relative clause 'who are.' Removed duplicated 'and' and completed the sentence with 'them.' Use 'when I'm with them' rather than 'if I'm with my.'

× So I am a introvert person so I prefer setting or through the online because I can't talk much about something to the face to face.

✓ So I am an introverted person, so I prefer communicating online because I can't talk much face-to-face.

Use 'an' before vowel sound 'introverted.' 'Introverted' (adjective) is more natural than 'introvert person.' 'Prefer communicating online' is concise; 'face-to-face' is hyphenated and used as an adverb. Removed 'setting' which was unclear.

× So I definitely prefer uh, through the media and I feel very uh, relaxed and calm.

✓ So I definitely prefer communicating through social media, and I feel very relaxed and calm.

Maintain parallel verb form 'prefer communicating' rather than 'prefer through.' Specify 'social media' and remove filler words. 'Relaxed and calm' is acceptable.

× I awfully argue with my friends because my only one my friend uh, who always talks about other peoples so I don't argue her but I try to uh give her advice not to talk about other people's.

✓ I sometimes argue with my friends because there is one friend who always talks about other people, so I don't argue with her; I try to give her advice not to talk about others.

'Awfully' is incorrect here; use 'sometimes' or 'occasionally.' 'Only one my friend' is ungrammatical; use 'one friend.' 'Other peoples' should be 'other people.' Use 'argue with her' (preposition) and 'not to talk about others' for clarity and correctness. Also add punctuation to separate clauses.

× We don't really matter about others, we matter only our friendships.

✓ We don't really care about others; we only care about our friendship.

Use 'care about' instead of 'matter about.' 'We matter only our friendships' is incorrect; 'we only care about our friendship' or 'our friendships' depending on singular/plural meaning. Chose singular 'friendship' for the group's relationship. Use semicolon to connect related clauses.