聊天— Part 1 評分報告

建議: Be concise and avoid repetitions. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct small grammar issues (plural/singular, verbs) and remove filler sounds (uh, um).

範例: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. I usually text them on my mobile phone because it’s convenient, and we often share photos and updates about our day. For example, this morning I sent a picture of my breakfast and we joked about cooking.

建議: Give a direct topic sentence and then specific examples. Use linking words (for example, such as) and avoid vague words like “situation” or repetition. Pay attention to verb forms (I talk, we are talking).

範例: We usually talk about technology and daily life. For example, we discuss new phone features or apps, and sometimes we share personal problems, such as busy schedules or study stress.

建議: Answer directly and give a reason with one specific example. Use linking words like because or so, and avoid repeating words. Correct grammar: say “I prefer chatting with a group” or “I prefer one-on-one conversations.”

範例: I prefer chatting in groups because we can share more ideas and hear different opinions. For instance, when planning trips with several friends in a group chat, everyone can suggest destinations and we decide together.

建議: State your preference clearly, then give two concise reasons with linking words (because, so). Use natural expressions like “eye contact” and avoid redundant phrases. Keep it to 2–3 sentences total.

範例: I prefer face-to-face communication because eye contact and body language make conversations more meaningful. For example, when I meet a friend in person I feel more energetic and we understand each other better.

建議: Answer directly and give a brief explanation of when and why disagreements happen, using correct tense and clearer vocabulary (resolve, understand). Avoid fillers and unclear phrases.

範例: Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially about small misunderstandings. However, as we’ve gotten older we try to resolve conflicts quickly by listening to each other and apologizing when needed.

× Oh, of course, I I really like chatting with my friends.

✓ Oh, of course, I really like chatting with my friends.

Repeated subject pronoun 'I' is redundant. Remove duplicate to make sentence grammatical and fluent.

× Uh, I have many, I have many mention to talk about friends, so I usually enjoy chatting with my friend using my mobile phone.

✓ I have many things to talk about with friends, so I usually enjoy chatting with my friends using my mobile phone.

Phrase 'have many mention' is incorrect word choice and structure. Replace with 'have many things to talk about' and correct preposition to 'with friends'. Use plural 'friends' to match context.

× Also, I open using my mobile phone to check.

✓ Also, I often use my mobile phone to check messages.

Word 'open' is incorrect here; intent is likely 'often' or 'open' an app. Use 'often use' + object 'messages' for clarity and correct verb usage.

× Uh, currently, uh, I, I talking about my tech, my I talking about with my friend using the chatting.

✓ Currently, I am talking about tech with my friend using a chat app.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous; use 'talking' with 'am'. Simplify redundant phrases and correct noun use 'tech' or 'technology'.

× Uh, currently we, we open talk about our, uh, itchy situation.

✓ Currently we are talking about our difficult situation.

'Open talk' is incorrect; use present continuous 'are talking'. 'Itchy situation' is likely wrong word choice; 'difficult situation' fits better.

× Uh, there are, there are other situation with my friend, but we understand it's a situation.

✓ There are other situations with my friends, but we understand each other's situation.

Pluralize 'situation' to 'situations' and 'friend' to 'friends'. Use possessive/reciprocal 'each other's' to indicate mutual understanding.

× Uh, I prefer chatting with group or people because, uh, there are many, many, many talking, talking contents with other group of other people.

✓ I prefer chatting with a group of people because there are many topics to talk about with different groups.

Missing article 'a' before 'group'. 'Talking contents' is incorrect; use 'topics'. Simplify and correct pluralization 'groups'.

× So I, uh, it is a convenient way to chatting with global people because, uh, because one way, one way.

✓ So, it is a convenient way to chat with people around the world.

After 'way to' use base verb 'chat', not '-ing'. Remove repetition and use clear phrase 'people around the world'.

× Uh, to be honest, I prefer to talk about face to face with my friends.

✓ To be honest, I prefer to talk face to face with my friends.

Remove 'about' which is unnecessary. Correct phrase is 'talk face to face'.

× I think that contacting eye is very important to element to talk about with my friend.

✓ I think eye contact is a very important element when talking with my friends.

Use the noun 'eye contact' instead of 'contacting eye'. Change 'to element' to 'important element' and use 'when talking with' for clarity and correct preposition.

× So I I would like to talk about with face to face.

✓ So I would like to talk face to face.

Remove duplicate 'I' and unnecessary 'about with'. Use correct 'talk face to face' structure.

× It is a convenient way and it helped me improve my energy.

✓ It is convenient and it helps me feel more energetic.

Tense mismatch: use present 'helps' for habitual effect. 'Improve my energy' is unnatural; use 'feel more energetic'.

× Oh, to be honest, I sometimes argue with my friends.

✓ Oh, to be honest, I sometimes argue with my friends.

Sentence is grammatically correct; present simple 'sometimes argue' appropriately expresses habitual action.

× Uh, especially when I was younger, I, I usually argued with my friends, but currently we try to understand each other situation.

✓ Especially when I was younger, I usually argued with my friends, but now we try to understand each other's situation.

Remove duplicate 'I'. 'Currently' is better as 'now'. Use possessive 'each other's' and keep past 'was' and past habit 'argued' correct.

× Uh, it is a convenient way, way to current Co con constantly uh.

✓ It is a convenient way to stay in constant contact.

Original is garbled. Replace with clear phrase 'stay in constant contact' to convey intended meaning.